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This Fanfic follows the story of Shinji Lee, Subin's twin brother. It's quite fitting actually, since the MC acts quite similarly to Subin lol. Writing Quality is 5. It's a definite improvement from his early chapters in the My Hero Academia Fanfic. Stability of Updates is 5 too. The Author uploads every other day. And that's fine for me. Story Development is 5. The story isn't that fast pased for me, unlike the MHA Fanfic. It shows the Antagonists as well, so it's good. Character Design- is 5. I quite like the character of Shinji and his friends. He's smart (at times), and very expressive. Two of the qualities I like in a character. World background is 4. Eleceed is mostly focused in Korea, so it doesn't really have the best World Background. But, I do like that Shinji is in a new place, not just in Korea all the time. So, I think I'll bump it up to 5. Overall, it's a good read. If you guys like a smart, expressive character, then this is for you. It doesn't just follow the canon right away too. It has a High School Arc, which I'm very excited about. I saw the Author comment once that canon will happen in about 20-30 chapters from now, (which is Chapter 16).
Overall best eleceed fanfic not like others fan novel they copied all dailgoue from orginal novel.
The MC is weird he doesn’t even use the knowledge of the story to do anything he can become kaden student if. He finds him first he can train with the yoo girl she becomes strong enough to fight top 50 at 17 or 18 but idk what he is doing world academy is shown as a wolfs den if u not from a powerful family they will use u n force u to join one to become their slave he doesn’t show this
I love reading this series and I hope you keep it up. I am really interested as to how the tournament arc kinda goes. Best of luck writing this !!
The story is amazing, to be honest I genuinely don’t see any major flaws, of course as a writer, they might occasionally make spelling/grammar mistakes but it doesn’t disrupt the readers flow/immersion. Only thing that bugs me is the updating stability but sometimes it cant be helped, we all have our own things to do. But other then that, I would chalk it up to amazing! 5/5
Hi, this was the last fanfic I was reading and I was around chapter 30 when webnovel dropped the bomb, I absolutely love the idea and the execution, it's rare to see an eleceed fanfic so well done. Could you please shift it to scribblehub, or at least crosspost there, so that readers can keep enjoying your work? Thanks
gonna sleep like a baby now... thx had fun reading it Great work i hope i find more eleceed books. ....................................................
mc use his ability to brainwash other to love him. that's my main complaint about this ff. for other thing that I don't like is how little and feel rushed about his relationship with his family.
I really appreciated your efforts to do this job, I think your idea was brilliant but it's not something I enjoyed. In the beginning, your protagonist would grow up in a powerful family and suddenly you decided that he would learn a lot of control techniques without considering creating something specifically new.
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been reading from the beginning but haven't wrote a review ( usually I dont) but I just wanna say this..... DONT YOU DARE TO DROP THIS FANFIC!!!! my favorite fanfic rn and I really love eleceed. hopefully this help to keep you motivated
the mc is very funny and likable 😂😂 like when he talks about those cringy monologue ......................................................
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Very good story please continue. Always wanted a good eleceed fanfic that didn’t discontinue plus it’s noice that the story is about an extra character becoming op. I really want to see more interactions between our mc and jiyoung. 👍
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first eleceed ff ive read so far and its so good, up up up lets goooooooo. good day author i wuff uu XD XD XD ahhh poking 14p character ekekekkekekekeke
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Wow someone actually made a ff on a manhwa and that's awesome just like this ff. I really hope to see more fanfics based on manhwa, that'd be awesome. Props to this author for starting it and writing an awesome ff.
Shameless Author Review: Five Stars! It's an Eleceed Fanfic. I plan to continue this until Eleceed ends, so stay tuned. Also, this is an AU...
This Fanfic follows the story of Shinji Lee, Subin's twin brother. It's quite fitting actually, since the MC acts quite similarly to Subin lol. Writing Quality is 5. It's a definite improvement from his early chapters in the My Hero Academia Fanfic. Stability of Updates is 5 too. The Author uploads every other day. And that's fine for me. Story Development is 5. The story isn't that fast pased for me, unlike the MHA Fanfic. It shows the Antagonists as well, so it's good. Character Design- is 5. I quite like the character of Shinji and his friends. He's smart (at times), and very expressive. Two of the qualities I like in a character. World background is 4. Eleceed is mostly focused in Korea, so it doesn't really have the best World Background. But, I do like that Shinji is in a new place, not just in Korea all the time. So, I think I'll bump it up to 5. Overall, it's a good read. If you guys like a smart, expressive character, then this is for you. It doesn't just follow the canon right away too. It has a High School Arc, which I'm very excited about. I saw the Author comment once that canon will happen in about 20-30 chapters from now, (which is Chapter 16).
Overall best eleceed fanfic not like others fan novel they copied all dailgoue from orginal novel.
The MC is weird he doesn’t even use the knowledge of the story to do anything he can become kaden student if. He finds him first he can train with the yoo girl she becomes strong enough to fight top 50 at 17 or 18 but idk what he is doing world academy is shown as a wolfs den if u not from a powerful family they will use u n force u to join one to become their slave he doesn’t show this
I love reading this series and I hope you keep it up. I am really interested as to how the tournament arc kinda goes. Best of luck writing this !!
The story is amazing, to be honest I genuinely don’t see any major flaws, of course as a writer, they might occasionally make spelling/grammar mistakes but it doesn’t disrupt the readers flow/immersion. Only thing that bugs me is the updating stability but sometimes it cant be helped, we all have our own things to do. But other then that, I would chalk it up to amazing! 5/5
Hi, this was the last fanfic I was reading and I was around chapter 30 when webnovel dropped the bomb, I absolutely love the idea and the execution, it's rare to see an eleceed fanfic so well done. Could you please shift it to scribblehub, or at least crosspost there, so that readers can keep enjoying your work? Thanks
gonna sleep like a baby now... thx had fun reading it Great work i hope i find more eleceed books. ....................................................
mc use his ability to brainwash other to love him. that's my main complaint about this ff. for other thing that I don't like is how little and feel rushed about his relationship with his family.
I really appreciated your efforts to do this job, I think your idea was brilliant but it's not something I enjoyed. In the beginning, your protagonist would grow up in a powerful family and suddenly you decided that he would learn a lot of control techniques without considering creating something specifically new.
Very gooooood Very gooooood Very gooooood Very gooooood Very good Very gooooood Very gooooood Very gooooood Very gooooood Very gooooood Very gooooood Very gooooood Very gooooood Very gooooood Very gooooood Very gooooood
honestly I don't know what to say ....... the story is wonderful 💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗
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been reading from the beginning but haven't wrote a review ( usually I dont) but I just wanna say this..... DONT YOU DARE TO DROP THIS FANFIC!!!! my favorite fanfic rn and I really love eleceed. hopefully this help to keep you motivated
the mc is very funny and likable 😂😂 like when he talks about those cringy monologue ......................................................
👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇💯💯💯💯💯🌈🌈❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🎉🎉🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🐰🐰🐰🐰🐰🐰🐰👆🏻👆🏻
Very good story please continue. Always wanted a good eleceed fanfic that didn’t discontinue plus it’s noice that the story is about an extra character becoming op. I really want to see more interactions between our mc and jiyoung. 👍
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first eleceed ff ive read so far and its so good, up up up lets goooooooo. good day author i wuff uu XD XD XD ahhh poking 14p character ekekekkekekekeke
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Wow someone actually made a ff on a manhwa and that's awesome just like this ff. I really hope to see more fanfics based on manhwa, that'd be awesome. Props to this author for starting it and writing an awesome ff.
Shameless Author Review: Five Stars! It's an Eleceed Fanfic. I plan to continue this until Eleceed ends, so stay tuned. Also, this is an AU...