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This is the second book by this author and by far the best one, I can tell they have gotten better at writing and that they put more effort into the book. The grammar and story is just way better overall.
Pretty fun. The plot is a cool concept. Author has a good knack for writing characters and it shows- believable, interesting characters that drive the plot forward. There is the odd grammatical error or typo here and there but it does not take away from the experience. I recommend anyone who likes the first chapter to keep reading, as I feel it displays the authors charm quite nicely
This is the second book by this author and by far the best one, I can tell they have gotten better at writing and that they put more effort into the book. The grammar and story is just way better overall.
Pretty fun. The plot is a cool concept. Author has a good knack for writing characters and it shows- believable, interesting characters that drive the plot forward. There is the odd grammatical error or typo here and there but it does not take away from the experience. I recommend anyone who likes the first chapter to keep reading, as I feel it displays the authors charm quite nicely