摘要
Oda Shinichi is the Strongest Young Prodigy of his previous life. He achieves first place in every Martial Art like Taekwondo, Jujutsu, Kung Fu, Karate, etc.
Despite being the strongest. he did not enjoy his life because all he did is practice, practice, and practice to meet his Family's expectations.
Shinichi died in a car accident when he is on his way to the Final stadium of the "Karate World Championship" and got reincarnated to the world of magic and swords with only one attribute.
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*DISCLAIMER!
All names, characters, places, and events come from the author's imagination or fiction.
Take note that this is for only 18 years old in above.
標籤
-- 推薦票
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4評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
Writing quality is good. Very good. Barely any mistakes from what I can see. Updates are constant. The story though... 3rd or 4th chapter, 1st wife. 9th or 10th chapter, 2nd wife... 11th chapter, adopted daughter/wife to be. That must be a world record. 1st wife is understandable. She lost everything and found a pillar. 2nd wife... Need more background. maybe oppressed due to having one attribute. adopted phoenix... feels too forced I just quit. The world is too shallow, 11th chapter and all we know is another kingdom where 1st wife is and another neighboring kingdom (fafnir) which I assume has friendly ties with the kingdom they are in for them to send troops to defend it where the 2nd wife came from. The world building is very little. It focuses too much in the characters. Perhaps it's just me but oh well. This is my opinion. Aight that's all. good luck have fun writing.
揭示劇透
Hi Everyone, this is your humble Author who wanted to ask for your reviews it will help me a lot as a newbie author whose goal is to improve my skills and make you guys a good novel to read hehe. Thank You.
It's a good book! It deserves its own manga and anime adaptation! As long as Netflix doesn't take it HAHA Just kidding. It's super cool and amazing to read! Would recommend to my otaku friends! :D
卷 1
- 1 Second Life 2 years ago
- 2 Shinichi's Journey Begins 2 years ago
- 3 Adventurer's Guild 2 years ago
- 4 Becoming an adventurer 2 years ago
- 5 The Assassin Reina 2 years ago
- 6 Falling In Love At First Sight 2 years ago
- 7 First Kill, Assassination Attempt 2 years ago
- 8 Esri de Balor 2 years ago
- 9 Second Wife 2 years ago
- 10 Ancient Heavenly Phoenix 2 years ago
- 11 Magic Hierarchy 2 years ago
- 12 Hestia And The Goddess Of Luck 2 years ago
- 13 Arch Mage 2 years ago
- 14 Creating New Magic 2 years ago
- 15 Invasion 2 years ago
- 16 Demons 2 years ago
- 17 Conducting A Plan (1) 2 years ago
- 18 Conducting A Plan (2) 2 years ago
- 19 Oath 2 years ago
- 20 War Against Demons Begin! 2 years ago
- 21 Trap 2 years ago
- 22 Complete Annihilation 2 years ago
- 23 Compensation 2 years ago
- 24 Three Arch Demons 2 years ago
- 25 Shinichi, Reina, Esri Vs. 3 Arch Demons 2 years ago
- 26 Shinichi-Kun’s Love Assassination Arts 2 years ago
- 27 Esri's New Sword Technique 2 years ago
- 28 Shinichi Vs Mammon (1) 2 years ago
- 29 Shinichi vs Mammon (2) 2 years ago
- 30 Shinichi Vs Mammon (3) 2 years ago
- 31 Reiji's Braveness 2 years ago
- 32 Great King and Sword Emperor's Successor? 2 years ago
- 33 Shinichi Vs Mammon (Finale) 2 years ago
- 34 Shinichi-Sama 2 years ago
- 35 Sister's Alliance 2 years ago
- 36 Did I Die Again? 2 years ago
- 37 Please Take Me 2 years ago
- 38 Reina and Shinichi's Night (R-18) 2 years ago
- 39 Unexpected Personality (R-18) 2 years ago
- 40 Unrestrained Feelings (R-18) 2 years ago
All right. I'm going to be blunt and straight. The grammar is bad. The plot moves too fast. And simply knowing martial arts doesn't make you any stronger. I've read until chapter four and I'm still not sure if it gets any better. The story itself is too confusing. Dialogues are the same as most isekais. (I've heard it more than I'd like to.) While this book might not have been the best, I hope that you will continue to improve. We all start at the lowest point, but we make our way to the top. Out of the mountain of despair, a stone of hope. Best wishes to the author; don't stop until you're proud.