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My Hollywood System Mi sistema de Hollywood Esperando más capítulos [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
Great story.The choice of movies and atv shows so far has been fantastic. I'm looking forward to seeing the box office performance of Hitch. Is this abandoned?
A nice idea unfortunately the deliverer was done quite poorly. The MC was acting girly and even had to search on Google how to date girls... Not that I have any problem with that, but I just hoped there will be some character development afterwards, which unfortunately had not happened.
The story pace are good as the MC progress can be shown quite decent. The characters design and personalities are shown quite well. The range of emotion when the the characters shown to make the readers felt that the characters are good actors and actress in the novel world are wonderful.It is sad that the novel was dropped but I truly enjoyed the story arc and the Mc progression from the weak film studio owner to the top ranked movies,drama and series director. The Mc also shown quite the businessman himself. I gave a low rank on the updates since the novel was dropped. Hopefully when another chapter are being released I will change it to a better rating
Me encanta espero que sigas actualizando , realmente los personajes están bien construidos, me está gustando mucho que salgan tantas caras,ahhh Johnny y brat Pitt ya esto espero con ansias para que hagas las películas
I like The Story... but 2 things ruin the whole novel for me.. 1st its the Girlfriend june... she Just doesn't feel right with the story2nd the MC is dipping into many projects at the Same time which slows the movie projects down a Lot... like Author is deliberately trying to slow the introduction of MCU...
I have been loving reading this fanfic it has a good story plot development is nice and character's have common sense over all it's a good read highly recommend
I am already on chapter 51 and this is amazing one of the best I have ever read and I have read over 967 novels so that's saying something
Diaculpa para leer mas Capitulos, tienes en tu patreon? Si es asi pasalo para seguir leyendo la historia, a mi me gusta mucho. Saludo!!! [img=recommend]
Great story really enjoy it hope you come back to it eventually 1 thing tho can you name ur chapters. if you lose ur chapter because Webnovel does that sometimes it’s a ball ache to find it again
"My Hollywood System" is a captivating novel that transports readers into the parallel universe of Will Evans, a determined college student with dreams of making it big in Hollywood. However, his aspirations take an unexpected turn when he finds himself in an alternate Earth where all the familiar celebrities, brands, and renowned works have vanished. Armed with the Hollywood System, Will embarks on a thrilling journey to claim his place at the pinnacle of stardom, leading readers through a suspenseful narrative filled with triumphs and unexpected encounters. As the story unfolds, the character of June, initially significant, gradually diminishes in relevance, showcasing the contrast between her pride and personal obstacles and Will's unwavering drive. With its compelling premise and exploration of ambition, "My Hollywood System" offers readers a thought-provoking and engrossing experience that highlights the transformative power of dreams in the face of adversity.
i would have preferred if there was no love interest, because the current relationship seems forced and in the point of stagnating and if a relationship in a book makes you think that you'd rather not see it, then i have to unfortunately tell the author that there is a possibility that it's not working out and it'd be better to just scrape it , or at least plan it for way later in the story where the whole plot line stabilizes ,or in this case where will evans had cemented his position in this world and it's hollywood ,for example around the 180th chapter or even later depending on the author. All in all , it's a wish fulfilleme novel more than anything, and regardless i thinks it's pretty de-stressing exept for the mentioned above.👍
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sir can't wite for new Chapter i read this novel 2 time in row so please update new Chapter [img=update]
great book love the turn of events and how there is always an exciting event happening
An amazing story to introduce oneself to this platform. If you're interested in characters introducing amazing works and inventions in another world, then this definitely fits that description. Get ready for a euphoric experience✨🤩 #Star-MakerofHollywood
honestly I would give the character design and world background a 1 star but I decided to give this 2 stars for the author's effort
This is one of my favorite novels out there and it's really good except for the relationship part and the "you can't change the fate thing". Also, I don't understand the character of mc, like he wants to do justice by bringing all his works into this world? Not like he wants to enjoy life? I really dislike how mc can't change fate, like till now has he been behaving like fate wants him to? And is mc stupid in that arc, cuz he could have just used some better ways to stop the happenings even while being in the party and also take some other precautions?
I really loved this one. This is one of best showbiz novel I've ever read. Hope the author will continue the story
I read 187 chapters, there was almost no character development, the relationship he was in was so bland and honest a hindrance to the story that it probably should have been a thing. The story was fine, most of the time I had no doubt of failure from the Mc, so no suspense, which it's a fanfic so very few do that anyways. Some parts seemed to drag on way to long. If you are fine with a slow story, with bland undeveloped characters, with useless relationships then give it a read, other than that it was pretty disappointing
To be honest tgis novel made me want to be a part of Hollywood to be honest I don't have anything to say against this novel, it's good stuff and doesn't focus solely in the system and makes the mc work more with the system giving a helping hand................ its really refreshing read a urban non magical novel that feels magical
Hello everyone, the name's Sky not hat anyone asked but with unnecessary introductions out of the way let's go to the review and rating based on the latest chapter(ch.13). 1-Writing Quality: The story has a nice writing quality and I haven't seen any spelling mistakes or grammar errors, if there are I didn't see them because I was immersed in the story. [5 Stars Here] 2-Story Development: The story has a nice feel to it, we get a minimal background of the MC's past life as to not take too much of the main focus that is his current life. The chapters are all connected and don't randomly seem like we missed a part of it, it's also very fluid and has a great word count for those who are interested in that. [5 Stars Here] 3-Character Design: The characters so far have a decent personality and I think it's still soon to see if they have a lot of dept but so far the MC and all the people he interacted with have nice depth to them. [5 Stars Here] 4-Updating Stability: The updates seem to follow a certain schedule and each release so far has had more than 2 chapters so it's a win in my book. [5 Stars Here] 5-World Background: The world has a decent amount of details, enough to know places but not enough to feel immersed in the locations. What I mean is the setting of the scenes like describing certain locations, in this story we get descriptions like "small but clean apartment" but we don't get a "Uncle Charles office was as one would expect, it had a few pictures with current famous celebrities and some old ones, there where also some trophies and ...". This is what I mean, it doesn't paint a picture in the mind, I just think yeah he's in the office done. And since it may not be a recurring scene it might not matter much but at that moment it's important. [4 Stars Here] Overall:4.8 Personal Opinion: I was recommended this book by @Extra26 and it was one of those recommendations that you don't regret so try reading at least 5 chapters before you say "D**n it has Harem tag, Ouch System cheat" and so on before giving it a try because the execution of the story seems worth it so far.
My Hollywood System Mi sistema de Hollywood Esperando más capítulos [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
Great story.The choice of movies and atv shows so far has been fantastic. I'm looking forward to seeing the box office performance of Hitch. Is this abandoned?
A nice idea unfortunately the deliverer was done quite poorly. The MC was acting girly and even had to search on Google how to date girls... Not that I have any problem with that, but I just hoped there will be some character development afterwards, which unfortunately had not happened.
The story pace are good as the MC progress can be shown quite decent. The characters design and personalities are shown quite well. The range of emotion when the the characters shown to make the readers felt that the characters are good actors and actress in the novel world are wonderful.It is sad that the novel was dropped but I truly enjoyed the story arc and the Mc progression from the weak film studio owner to the top ranked movies,drama and series director. The Mc also shown quite the businessman himself. I gave a low rank on the updates since the novel was dropped. Hopefully when another chapter are being released I will change it to a better rating
Me encanta espero que sigas actualizando , realmente los personajes están bien construidos, me está gustando mucho que salgan tantas caras,ahhh Johnny y brat Pitt ya esto espero con ansias para que hagas las películas
I like The Story... but 2 things ruin the whole novel for me.. 1st its the Girlfriend june... she Just doesn't feel right with the story2nd the MC is dipping into many projects at the Same time which slows the movie projects down a Lot... like Author is deliberately trying to slow the introduction of MCU...
I have been loving reading this fanfic it has a good story plot development is nice and character's have common sense over all it's a good read highly recommend
I am already on chapter 51 and this is amazing one of the best I have ever read and I have read over 967 novels so that's saying something
Diaculpa para leer mas Capitulos, tienes en tu patreon? Si es asi pasalo para seguir leyendo la historia, a mi me gusta mucho. Saludo!!! [img=recommend]
Great story really enjoy it hope you come back to it eventually 1 thing tho can you name ur chapters. if you lose ur chapter because Webnovel does that sometimes it’s a ball ache to find it again
"My Hollywood System" is a captivating novel that transports readers into the parallel universe of Will Evans, a determined college student with dreams of making it big in Hollywood. However, his aspirations take an unexpected turn when he finds himself in an alternate Earth where all the familiar celebrities, brands, and renowned works have vanished. Armed with the Hollywood System, Will embarks on a thrilling journey to claim his place at the pinnacle of stardom, leading readers through a suspenseful narrative filled with triumphs and unexpected encounters. As the story unfolds, the character of June, initially significant, gradually diminishes in relevance, showcasing the contrast between her pride and personal obstacles and Will's unwavering drive. With its compelling premise and exploration of ambition, "My Hollywood System" offers readers a thought-provoking and engrossing experience that highlights the transformative power of dreams in the face of adversity.
i would have preferred if there was no love interest, because the current relationship seems forced and in the point of stagnating and if a relationship in a book makes you think that you'd rather not see it, then i have to unfortunately tell the author that there is a possibility that it's not working out and it'd be better to just scrape it , or at least plan it for way later in the story where the whole plot line stabilizes ,or in this case where will evans had cemented his position in this world and it's hollywood ,for example around the 180th chapter or even later depending on the author. All in all , it's a wish fulfilleme novel more than anything, and regardless i thinks it's pretty de-stressing exept for the mentioned above.👍
揭示劇透 sir can't wite for new Chapter i read this novel 2 time in row so please update new Chapter [img=update]
great book love the turn of events and how there is always an exciting event happening
An amazing story to introduce oneself to this platform. If you're interested in characters introducing amazing works and inventions in another world, then this definitely fits that description. Get ready for a euphoric experience✨🤩 #Star-MakerofHollywood
honestly I would give the character design and world background a 1 star but I decided to give this 2 stars for the author's effort
This is one of my favorite novels out there and it's really good except for the relationship part and the "you can't change the fate thing". Also, I don't understand the character of mc, like he wants to do justice by bringing all his works into this world? Not like he wants to enjoy life? I really dislike how mc can't change fate, like till now has he been behaving like fate wants him to? And is mc stupid in that arc, cuz he could have just used some better ways to stop the happenings even while being in the party and also take some other precautions?
I really loved this one. This is one of best showbiz novel I've ever read. Hope the author will continue the story
I read 187 chapters, there was almost no character development, the relationship he was in was so bland and honest a hindrance to the story that it probably should have been a thing. The story was fine, most of the time I had no doubt of failure from the Mc, so no suspense, which it's a fanfic so very few do that anyways. Some parts seemed to drag on way to long. If you are fine with a slow story, with bland undeveloped characters, with useless relationships then give it a read, other than that it was pretty disappointing
To be honest tgis novel made me want to be a part of Hollywood to be honest I don't have anything to say against this novel, it's good stuff and doesn't focus solely in the system and makes the mc work more with the system giving a helping hand................ its really refreshing read a urban non magical novel that feels magical
Hello everyone, the name's Sky not hat anyone asked but with unnecessary introductions out of the way let's go to the review and rating based on the latest chapter(ch.13). 1-Writing Quality: The story has a nice writing quality and I haven't seen any spelling mistakes or grammar errors, if there are I didn't see them because I was immersed in the story. [5 Stars Here] 2-Story Development: The story has a nice feel to it, we get a minimal background of the MC's past life as to not take too much of the main focus that is his current life. The chapters are all connected and don't randomly seem like we missed a part of it, it's also very fluid and has a great word count for those who are interested in that. [5 Stars Here] 3-Character Design: The characters so far have a decent personality and I think it's still soon to see if they have a lot of dept but so far the MC and all the people he interacted with have nice depth to them. [5 Stars Here] 4-Updating Stability: The updates seem to follow a certain schedule and each release so far has had more than 2 chapters so it's a win in my book. [5 Stars Here] 5-World Background: The world has a decent amount of details, enough to know places but not enough to feel immersed in the locations. What I mean is the setting of the scenes like describing certain locations, in this story we get descriptions like "small but clean apartment" but we don't get a "Uncle Charles office was as one would expect, it had a few pictures with current famous celebrities and some old ones, there where also some trophies and ...". This is what I mean, it doesn't paint a picture in the mind, I just think yeah he's in the office done. And since it may not be a recurring scene it might not matter much but at that moment it's important. [4 Stars Here] Overall:4.8 Personal Opinion: I was recommended this book by @Extra26 and it was one of those recommendations that you don't regret so try reading at least 5 chapters before you say "D**n it has Harem tag, Ouch System cheat" and so on before giving it a try because the execution of the story seems worth it so far.