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摘要
I was boring in my last life so I can't be a cliche average trainer especially when people have to battle with their Pokemon and invidual strength matters as much as your companions
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I own nothing but my OC's
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-- 推薦票
榜單 
-- 推薦票 你也許也喜歡
3評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
Best chapter yet, the action, the burst of energy that flowed through his body and akuma to create two powerful art pieces of battle. This is your best update yet and can't wait for the progression of the character W story.
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卷 1
- 1 Thank you Helicopter-Senpai. 2 years ago
- 2 Trainers Acadamy shit I'm gonna be doing this for a while 2 years ago
- 3 My Starter is...... Wimpod! We all saw it coming 2 years ago
- 4 Beating up kids and oh shit I found a fossil 2 years ago
- 5 Blood lock ritual 2 years ago
- 6 Tournament pt 1 2 years ago
- 7 Tournament pt 2 2 years ago
- 8 Prodigy Vs Prince of Darkness 2 years ago
- 9 Cutting a Deal and Seeing it Through 2 years ago
- 10 Pit-Stop And Back To The Tournament 2 years ago
- 11 The Raging Undercurrent Vs. The unstoppable fist 1 years ago
So I can't say something stroy wise because it is too soon but I like the premise of this Fanfic and the charakter is at least half desent to good. The encounter with his starter was a little bit rushed and in my opinion a pokemon need a true name as well.