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寫檢討This is a Newer Version of Explaining the Story, The Review that I made when I started this Story was Different, The Story Has Evolved to Something Else Since my First Imagination of the Story. Instead of Him Doing Everything For Justice, He will Do Everything to Achieve His Dreams that His Morals Allows him To, But don't worry, He will Still hold the Kind of Personality that He Cares for His People, And every Innocent Men, Although he Doesn't have that 'Hero' Presence, So to say. His Personality have not Changed Much from my Last Explanation, you will just add that He Wants to Achieve His Dreams Above Everything, But He Will Follow his Morals while Doing So, Although some Things like His Family and His People is Above those Dreams. I just wanted to Clarify This cus I think His Personality is Different from the Review I posted when this Story was Just Starting❤️
揭示劇透well giving this story a chance because it's GOT, I feel like they cut the beginning and started telling it from the middle, I like more the stories that start from mc's childhood and tell how he trains and develops, but here it seems that count since he is an adult and I can not form an idea of the attitude of the mc.
If people surrender and you slaughter them then you arent “righteous”. If you break into someones home, kill, and steal then you arent righteous. The author believes that the mc is righteous for doing these things lol nah youre as delusional as Peacemaker in DC. Also, the MC has been exiled for years and once Roberts Rebllion is starting, Ned comes to him to ask for his help and he does lol he complains nonstop to them saying he wont help them then out of nowhere he decides to fight lol nah trash mc. The transition bewteen chapters are non existent. Story is not good and the tags are wrong lol “righteous” thats funny.
揭示劇透Great start to a story, a bit of a grammar problem but it can be overlooked. Other than that I think this story is alright. My only hope for the story is that I hope there can be more interaction with the main cast of characters, and I hope that he has a Valyrian spear because of his title as the 'impaler' and just hope that his combat skills can be shone.
Shameless review as always. this is a story about Arthur Godfrey. An OC, he is not reincarnated he is just a regular oc. he is great with the sword and many other weapons. He will do anything for good even if it is the way of evil, he is a guy that will sacrifice lives to save more lives, a manipulator for good intentions, a great politician, a great military man. He will also learn some type of magic but it won't be overpowered
This is a Newer Version of Explaining the Story, The Review that I made when I started this Story was Different, The Story Has Evolved to Something Else Since my First Imagination of the Story. Instead of Him Doing Everything For Justice, He will Do Everything to Achieve His Dreams that His Morals Allows him To, But don't worry, He will Still hold the Kind of Personality that He Cares for His People, And every Innocent Men, Although he Doesn't have that 'Hero' Presence, So to say. His Personality have not Changed Much from my Last Explanation, you will just add that He Wants to Achieve His Dreams Above Everything, But He Will Follow his Morals while Doing So, Although some Things like His Family and His People is Above those Dreams. I just wanted to Clarify This cus I think His Personality is Different from the Review I posted when this Story was Just Starting❤️
揭示劇透well giving this story a chance because it's GOT, I feel like they cut the beginning and started telling it from the middle, I like more the stories that start from mc's childhood and tell how he trains and develops, but here it seems that count since he is an adult and I can not form an idea of the attitude of the mc.
If people surrender and you slaughter them then you arent “righteous”. If you break into someones home, kill, and steal then you arent righteous. The author believes that the mc is righteous for doing these things lol nah youre as delusional as Peacemaker in DC. Also, the MC has been exiled for years and once Roberts Rebllion is starting, Ned comes to him to ask for his help and he does lol he complains nonstop to them saying he wont help them then out of nowhere he decides to fight lol nah trash mc. The transition bewteen chapters are non existent. Story is not good and the tags are wrong lol “righteous” thats funny.
揭示劇透Great start to a story, a bit of a grammar problem but it can be overlooked. Other than that I think this story is alright. My only hope for the story is that I hope there can be more interaction with the main cast of characters, and I hope that he has a Valyrian spear because of his title as the 'impaler' and just hope that his combat skills can be shone.
Shameless review as always. this is a story about Arthur Godfrey. An OC, he is not reincarnated he is just a regular oc. he is great with the sword and many other weapons. He will do anything for good even if it is the way of evil, he is a guy that will sacrifice lives to save more lives, a manipulator for good intentions, a great politician, a great military man. He will also learn some type of magic but it won't be overpowered