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Author consistently switches between mc old and current name. Mc goes in depth about himself and how he reincarnated but skips right pass the part about how his adopted parents followed suit. Many inconsistencies about cannon and even oc. Also early on someone commented that author hates America and at first I failed to notice and thought he was sensitive but as I read on there would be snide comments about "stories he heard" disparaging the us. The story comes off as the author throwing himself in the middle of the mcu wanting the mcu to revolve around him and his "genius" when in actuality he is of average intelligence sent back in time with modern knowledge. In the first chapter he states that he is basically a knockoff Tony stark but is somehow now smarter?
This book has been quite interesting and intriguing not to mention what the MC/OC has been able to do from creating secret and private army , to the control and influence he has on society along with the technology and weaponry but also how he got multiple kids whether they were orphans or rescued them from someone also like how Phil argued and has a rival in Tony Stark along with what he has been able to accomplish overall I have enjoyed reading all of this book and have liked way how u did the plot of this book along with the family that was created there look forward to reading more of this book and can't wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on
Hello there author-san. Your fanfic is very interesting and quite fresh. I hope you can keep writing this fanfic till the end. Thank you for writing this fanfic ☺ 🙏
A fantastic marvel fanfic with a good pacing and great moments. The MC is not perfect and try his best to learn from his mistakes. No harem.
I think Phil is Phil Coulson reborn again after death and change the future, first read the title then I skip. And I boring + have time then i read i was wrong this is another person called Phil 😂😂
Emotionaly unstable mc. Really. Being alone only makes weak willed people want to go back to civilization. Welp. Another japanese level author and mc.
BEST marvel fanfic I've read yet! The mc is not too op, and i love how he teamed up with other characters. Usually marvel fanfics mc will become too op and don't need other character.
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Great so far. This is really good. The world building has been so good in this story. Great so far. This is really good. The world building has been so good in this story.
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Great story would love to see this turned into a novel someday because its awsome the character development that went into is great the only meh part was the publishing time
Am really enjoying the book great storyline. Most times marvel fanfic don't usually write about the period between captain America time and iron man's time Great development
So far so good like the character development and backstorys and the fact that the Russian knock off captain America bit the bullet earlier *slow clap.....standing ovation*
i love everything about this and i hope the next chapter will come out soon!!!
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I is one of the best works ever seen for me. I recommended : Marvel: The Unknown story, similar but longer, thus less interactive but awesome overall.
please dont abandon the story i really liked it i hope u continue on update i had only one power stone gave please i am just a kid i cant buy any powerstones but i like to give to u please update regularly
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upto 38 so far it's good to read ...................................................................................................................
just great bro...... good luck for the future!![img=recommend] well the start was like most of the newbie author but you are improving. there are plot holes but it's good for me. so let's go.....(it's actually my first review lol)
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The story is pretty cool. I was afraid he was trying to be friends with Tony but thank God he isn't. The fact that he didn't meet a ROB is a huge bonus for me because I'm tired of being cliché . It's great to see the MC become strong without cheating.
this is awesome and to everybody u SHOULD READ THIS ,................................................................................................
good reads. recommended to read! 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍.
Awesome MCU ff.......love it, a must read[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Cool story, bro. When will the Ancient One visit Phil vice versa? Gonna need to learn that eldritch magic sooner or later. I do this for the updates. Please Ignore.
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seriously good so far. xp xp xp xp xp exp exp xp xp xp xp xp exp expxp xp xp xp xp exp expxp xp xp xp xp exp expxp xp xp xp xp exp expxp xp xp xp xp exp exp
great mcu fanfic,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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Author consistently switches between mc old and current name. Mc goes in depth about himself and how he reincarnated but skips right pass the part about how his adopted parents followed suit. Many inconsistencies about cannon and even oc. Also early on someone commented that author hates America and at first I failed to notice and thought he was sensitive but as I read on there would be snide comments about "stories he heard" disparaging the us. The story comes off as the author throwing himself in the middle of the mcu wanting the mcu to revolve around him and his "genius" when in actuality he is of average intelligence sent back in time with modern knowledge. In the first chapter he states that he is basically a knockoff Tony stark but is somehow now smarter?
This book has been quite interesting and intriguing not to mention what the MC/OC has been able to do from creating secret and private army , to the control and influence he has on society along with the technology and weaponry but also how he got multiple kids whether they were orphans or rescued them from someone also like how Phil argued and has a rival in Tony Stark along with what he has been able to accomplish overall I have enjoyed reading all of this book and have liked way how u did the plot of this book along with the family that was created there look forward to reading more of this book and can't wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on
Hello there author-san. Your fanfic is very interesting and quite fresh. I hope you can keep writing this fanfic till the end. Thank you for writing this fanfic ☺ 🙏
A fantastic marvel fanfic with a good pacing and great moments. The MC is not perfect and try his best to learn from his mistakes. No harem.
I think Phil is Phil Coulson reborn again after death and change the future, first read the title then I skip. And I boring + have time then i read i was wrong this is another person called Phil 😂😂
Emotionaly unstable mc. Really. Being alone only makes weak willed people want to go back to civilization. Welp. Another japanese level author and mc.
BEST marvel fanfic I've read yet! The mc is not too op, and i love how he teamed up with other characters. Usually marvel fanfics mc will become too op and don't need other character.
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Great so far. This is really good. The world building has been so good in this story. Great so far. This is really good. The world building has been so good in this story.
揭示劇透 Great story would love to see this turned into a novel someday because its awsome the character development that went into is great the only meh part was the publishing time
Am really enjoying the book great storyline. Most times marvel fanfic don't usually write about the period between captain America time and iron man's time Great development
So far so good like the character development and backstorys and the fact that the Russian knock off captain America bit the bullet earlier *slow clap.....standing ovation*
i love everything about this and i hope the next chapter will come out soon!!!
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I is one of the best works ever seen for me. I recommended : Marvel: The Unknown story, similar but longer, thus less interactive but awesome overall.
please dont abandon the story i really liked it i hope u continue on update i had only one power stone gave please i am just a kid i cant buy any powerstones but i like to give to u please update regularly
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Love the fanfic hope you dont drop it[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
upto 38 so far it's good to read ...................................................................................................................
just great bro...... good luck for the future!![img=recommend] well the start was like most of the newbie author but you are improving. there are plot holes but it's good for me. so let's go.....(it's actually my first review lol)
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The story is pretty cool. I was afraid he was trying to be friends with Tony but thank God he isn't. The fact that he didn't meet a ROB is a huge bonus for me because I'm tired of being cliché . It's great to see the MC become strong without cheating.
this is awesome and to everybody u SHOULD READ THIS ,................................................................................................
good reads. recommended to read! 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍.
Awesome MCU ff.......love it, a must read[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Cool story, bro. When will the Ancient One visit Phil vice versa? Gonna need to learn that eldritch magic sooner or later. I do this for the updates. Please Ignore.
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great mcu fanfic,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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