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摘要
Alan Seong, a Korean-American high schooler with a deep obsession for mythology, was on a vacation in Egypt with his family when they suffered an accident. While exploring an ancient tomb in one of the pyramids, the entire place suddenly began to collapse. With no way out, they ran deeper into the place, being completely unaware of what awaited them in the depths.
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Don't expect much from the story, it is going to be a little bit all over the place at first. It will jump straight into the Battle for New York against the Chitauri and move forwards from there, but it will mix events and things won't happen exactly as in Canon MCU, which is the base for this fic. You can expect a few comic references and events too.
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It started good, then chapter 9 and 10 happened. Character development is fine, but it was too sudden without the proper build up. It felt very disjointed from the tone and direction of where i thought the story was going. The direction the character development took was also weird. That's all I could put in a review without explicit spoilers. If you haven't read the story and are looking at the reviews don't let this stop you from giving it a chance, you might like the direction it's going, it's very hit or miss.
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It has potential to be good but honestly it won’t be the author has a cool idea but his need to force situations and interactions is hurting the story like you can’t believe his first real fight with a god was just a love is power anime moment but the author said he did it on purpose and he makes all the so called character progression is him being told obvious things by others. he makes cringe and cliché moments on Purpose that probably sums up all of my complaints with the story
揭示劇透卷 1 : The Beginning
卷 2 : My new life
- 5 I - Shawarma and Reunion 2 years ago
- 6 II - Movie cliche all over again... or not 2 years ago
- 7 III - I only know 'some' history 2 years ago
- 8 IV - The meetings don't stop 2 years ago
- 9 V - A call to action in the worst moment 2 years ago
- 10 VI - A smile can't hide the monster beneath it 2 years ago
- 11 VII - Knowing the enemy 2 years ago
- 12 VIII - Being oneself 2 years ago
I don't know if you are a new writer or not but I love your work so far....I can't wait for the next chapter...Please don't let others tell you what to do with your work...And please do not let the criticism get to you....Its 9 chapters and I enjoy reading them.... Sleepy Ash...