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JUST YOU WAIT!!!!!! NOT THROWING AWAY MY, NOT THROWING AWAY MY SHOT!!! BOOM!! Seriously though haven't even read yet, just saw Alexander Hamilton in the Mc and went, Ooh!
good story there were a couple of things that were inconsistent that you could have gone back to change and I wish you would have done more with the Jedi other than that good job
La mejor historia fanon que he leído con respecto a la construcción de mundos de Star wars, alabado sea el sol Alexander!
A very fun story that was suprising in the fact it got through all the big stuff in only 163 Chapters.
One of the most well done and actually completed Star Wars stories I've ever read. I may have read better but none of them are completed nor even updated in some time. It's stories like this one however that make me want to write my own stories even if they are terrible just to write the ideas my own mind generates. This story was worth sticking with all the way through even when I felt it got a bit too descriptive once or twice, I understand being descriptive is often necessary to bring a world to life and thanks to that there are no loose ends left at the end of the story which is hard enough to do for most people who write as not everyone has their own opinions of what counts as a loose end. At the end of the day the story was wonderful and kept my own attention well enough. And truly not every story is ever really finished because the readers might often be interested in seeing more of the story after completion but if authors focused on a single story even after its completion then they wouldn't have time to write other stories that interest them that could be even as good or even better than what they just finished. If you think about it this is where fan fiction stems from. Fans of a story wanting to continue or rewrite a story they love even if said story itself is also a fan fiction. This is how great fan communities are made and in turn expand the universe of the favored story. This is where I put this story in my own rankings of fan fiction. A story strong enough to inspire others to continue it in their own ways. Truly a great read and the first fan fiction I have read alongside through to its completion that is not an eternally ongoing eastern cultivation novel. Which makes it even better as I don't have to wonder if it will ever end and if I should just read something else. Great story and I wish the author luck and success in their future stories!
I don't know about others but personally I like this story . Give it a go 👍👍👍
The story is solidly built, but it lacks on conflict. From the start MC was always the strrongest in all ways, so there were no true enemies
this is not a proper review will write one if this novel is for me, just got a question. Will there be any yuri in the harem not a fan
its entertaining but it lacks lots. author doesnt even understand their, there, or they're. The only consistent thing about this novel is the name of the MC other than that characters swap places or just utterly forgotten about despite being a driving motivation for a scenario. Simply put it's fun but only if you're not thinking to hard on any plot point.
I Need MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE
Dr_Dred here's another starwars fanfic i thought of you could do A Star Wars Fanfic where it is two years before the Naboo blockade. Our MC Jack Sandmark after successfully passing a trial by a God gets put into this Galaxy after he dies from a heart attack in his previous world. Now in his second life, he strives to live his life to the fullest. Can he build up his Kingdom in this Galaxy while bringing peace and prosperity to the Galaxy, or will he be overwhelmed and succumb to the Darkness. Home Base Planet: Lothal Harem Padme Amidala Duchess Satine Kryze Queen Julia Bo-Katan Kryze Nala Se Miraj Scintel Aura Sing Mother Talzin Rook Kast
love your work my favorite star wars fic so far keep up the good work. [img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Overall a good novel so far but If I was to make a suggestion it would be to make chapters longer than the short they currently are but over all I am excited to see Alexander expanding the Terran Ascendancy.
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I'm giving 5 stars purely cause this is so reliant on Star Wars KOTOR lore, I loved this game growing up and still do. It's a great novel, and I really hope it doesn't get dropped.
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"Looks like we have a winner, you are correct it is the legendary Star Forge which also means that you are currently in the Star Wars Galaxy" Explained the Goddess
Quite intriguing and interesting book especially the characters and the plan of the MC and what he is trying to do and the way of the plot and just on how things are different and just way how Alexander runs his Empire and the creation of Cortana look forward to reading more of this book cant wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book
I have gotten to chapter 10 and I am loving where the story is heading. The author doesn't instantly make the MC overpowered. However, from what I can see the updates are kind of slow. Besides that, if you are patient than I recommend this novel.
Sorry I can’t enjoy it when the chapyers are only 800words it dosnt do anything to me but feels like I’m reading a kids book also the grammar needs work
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JUST YOU WAIT!!!!!! NOT THROWING AWAY MY, NOT THROWING AWAY MY SHOT!!! BOOM!! Seriously though haven't even read yet, just saw Alexander Hamilton in the Mc and went, Ooh!
good story there were a couple of things that were inconsistent that you could have gone back to change and I wish you would have done more with the Jedi other than that good job
La mejor historia fanon que he leído con respecto a la construcción de mundos de Star wars, alabado sea el sol Alexander!
A very fun story that was suprising in the fact it got through all the big stuff in only 163 Chapters.
One of the most well done and actually completed Star Wars stories I've ever read. I may have read better but none of them are completed nor even updated in some time. It's stories like this one however that make me want to write my own stories even if they are terrible just to write the ideas my own mind generates. This story was worth sticking with all the way through even when I felt it got a bit too descriptive once or twice, I understand being descriptive is often necessary to bring a world to life and thanks to that there are no loose ends left at the end of the story which is hard enough to do for most people who write as not everyone has their own opinions of what counts as a loose end. At the end of the day the story was wonderful and kept my own attention well enough. And truly not every story is ever really finished because the readers might often be interested in seeing more of the story after completion but if authors focused on a single story even after its completion then they wouldn't have time to write other stories that interest them that could be even as good or even better than what they just finished. If you think about it this is where fan fiction stems from. Fans of a story wanting to continue or rewrite a story they love even if said story itself is also a fan fiction. This is how great fan communities are made and in turn expand the universe of the favored story. This is where I put this story in my own rankings of fan fiction. A story strong enough to inspire others to continue it in their own ways. Truly a great read and the first fan fiction I have read alongside through to its completion that is not an eternally ongoing eastern cultivation novel. Which makes it even better as I don't have to wonder if it will ever end and if I should just read something else. Great story and I wish the author luck and success in their future stories!
I don't know about others but personally I like this story . Give it a go 👍👍👍
The story is solidly built, but it lacks on conflict. From the start MC was always the strrongest in all ways, so there were no true enemies
this is not a proper review will write one if this novel is for me, just got a question. Will there be any yuri in the harem not a fan
its entertaining but it lacks lots. author doesnt even understand their, there, or they're. The only consistent thing about this novel is the name of the MC other than that characters swap places or just utterly forgotten about despite being a driving motivation for a scenario. Simply put it's fun but only if you're not thinking to hard on any plot point.
I Need MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE
Dr_Dred here's another starwars fanfic i thought of you could do A Star Wars Fanfic where it is two years before the Naboo blockade. Our MC Jack Sandmark after successfully passing a trial by a God gets put into this Galaxy after he dies from a heart attack in his previous world. Now in his second life, he strives to live his life to the fullest. Can he build up his Kingdom in this Galaxy while bringing peace and prosperity to the Galaxy, or will he be overwhelmed and succumb to the Darkness. Home Base Planet: Lothal Harem Padme Amidala Duchess Satine Kryze Queen Julia Bo-Katan Kryze Nala Se Miraj Scintel Aura Sing Mother Talzin Rook Kast
love your work my favorite star wars fic so far keep up the good work. [img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Overall a good novel so far but If I was to make a suggestion it would be to make chapters longer than the short they currently are but over all I am excited to see Alexander expanding the Terran Ascendancy.
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I'm giving 5 stars purely cause this is so reliant on Star Wars KOTOR lore, I loved this game growing up and still do. It's a great novel, and I really hope it doesn't get dropped.
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"Looks like we have a winner, you are correct it is the legendary Star Forge which also means that you are currently in the Star Wars Galaxy" Explained the Goddess
Quite intriguing and interesting book especially the characters and the plan of the MC and what he is trying to do and the way of the plot and just on how things are different and just way how Alexander runs his Empire and the creation of Cortana look forward to reading more of this book cant wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book
I have gotten to chapter 10 and I am loving where the story is heading. The author doesn't instantly make the MC overpowered. However, from what I can see the updates are kind of slow. Besides that, if you are patient than I recommend this novel.
Sorry I can’t enjoy it when the chapyers are only 800words it dosnt do anything to me but feels like I’m reading a kids book also the grammar needs work
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