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1⃣️？一个人的时候就是不知道为什么要去看了一下这个世界和平年代中期了吧……一个小时没吃晚饭的时候我发现自己的手机📱！一个月没买过了这么点儿不知道为什么不接电话吗！我在挑战丹刺的鸟宝宝的背后默默守护着你的每件事情就是自己一个劲儿就要来找自己想的事了？！？！一直想看他俩一起[img=update]
A very good story I just discovered this place and I just got an amazing first impression with this story, now I can only wait to read the next chapter. 🎩👍
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Super good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good
I'm loving it already so far! I can't wait for incoming updates and to see how the story develops with myself and Powder! I've been looking for something like this and I feel like I've found exactly what I've needed!
This is great I love it. [img=update][img=gift][img=coins][img=golden ticket][img=fp]. Please update
1⃣️？一个人的时候就是不知道为什么要去看了一下这个世界和平年代中期了吧……一个小时没吃晚饭的时候我发现自己的手机📱！一个月没买过了这么点儿不知道为什么不接电话吗！我在挑战丹刺的鸟宝宝的背后默默守护着你的每件事情就是自己一个劲儿就要来找自己想的事了？！？！一直想看他俩一起[img=update]
A very good story I just discovered this place and I just got an amazing first impression with this story, now I can only wait to read the next chapter. 🎩👍
揭示劇透 Super good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good
I'm loving it already so far! I can't wait for incoming updates and to see how the story develops with myself and Powder! I've been looking for something like this and I feel like I've found exactly what I've needed!
This is great I love it. [img=update][img=gift][img=coins][img=golden ticket][img=fp]. Please update