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please add the next chapter please you are taking too long please update the next chapter as fast as possible it will be a good thing if you add 2 chapter a week please update the next chapter iam unable to wait
La historia va muy buen me gustan las historias en las que fastidian o jodanal MC de dicha historia o en este caso poseerlo y reescribir dicha historia a su gusto. Tiene una excelente gramática se tienden de 10/10 incluso si lo pasas al español con el traductor. La única pega mia seria que actualiza una vez por semana
please update the next chapter your writing ability is very good don't stop it in the middle we will lose the intrest in the novel so please update the next chapter as soon as possible and update the chapter regularly I think you will consider my suggestion please don't disappoint me thank you
This is interesting... Not the cockolding part but having a goal to unite the world itself. I will change my rating when it fits. Good Luck, Player.
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please add the next chapter please you are taking too long please update the next chapter as fast as possible it will be a good thing if you add 2 chapter a week please update the next chapter iam unable to wait
La historia va muy buen me gustan las historias en las que fastidian o jodanal MC de dicha historia o en este caso poseerlo y reescribir dicha historia a su gusto. Tiene una excelente gramática se tienden de 10/10 incluso si lo pasas al español con el traductor. La única pega mia seria que actualiza una vez por semana
please update the next chapter your writing ability is very good don't stop it in the middle we will lose the intrest in the novel so please update the next chapter as soon as possible and update the chapter regularly I think you will consider my suggestion please don't disappoint me thank you
This is interesting... Not the cockolding part but having a goal to unite the world itself. I will change my rating when it fits. Good Luck, Player.
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come on dude its been 8 month so update now please dude