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This is so good. I love it and hope that you continue it but most of all I hope that everything your life is going well, and if not then I wish you all the best the Life can offer you. 😊
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I suggest you delete the homophobic reviews that are not related to the story.... anyways I Love the narcissistic personality of the mc....
Автор проекта пожалуйста вернись и продолжай. Произведение очень интересное.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I love your story So much it funny and amazing thank you I enjoy Your story I hope I can Read more❤️❤️❤️❤️👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼
Ааааааа. круто круто !!!ааааа. новая глову хочу 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😃😃😃😃ггаоао гсбзфхуюпбвщс8ьсьсомшмт м7атцшц8[img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
no es ara mi si soportas un mc gay con retraso de octavo grado este fic es para ti .........................................................
The story seems nice but the gay part is nothing for me So as long you arent disturped by the gay part give it a try
i love the story and how he is already OP in that world i think. And the MC powers and experience which i find is amazing keep it up. ..........
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I'm waiting for new chapter :)I'm waiting for new chapter :)I'm waiting for new chapter :)I'm waiting for new chapter :)I'm waiting for new chapter :)I'm waiting for new chapter :)I'm waiting for new chapter :)I'm waiting for new chapter :)
so far so good the writing is acceptable, the updating stability is superb keep it up, author i just want to ask whos the cp, im literally thirsting for tang san's dad so muscule 😖😖 o ma god im hopeless let it be tang hao i never saw tang hao cp, anyway whos cpppppppp.
Good book, good read, good character, good development. If you like soul land read this book.………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….
gay story. ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... .....
We really don't see much MxM fanfics on this site. We need more of them. I have only read a few chapters, and I'm already quite liking this. Though, I don't think that's what narcissism really is. The impression I got from this story is that MC has a sky-high self-esteem, and is ignorant about his own flaws. However, to my knowledge, narcissism actually means that the MC should've had a very low self-esteem, but he buries it. Grandiose is just one of his ways of burying his insecurities. Aside from that, and the small amount of chapters, I think this novel is worth reading GIMME MOREEE
This is so good. I love it and hope that you continue it but most of all I hope that everything your life is going well, and if not then I wish you all the best the Life can offer you. 😊
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I suggest you delete the homophobic reviews that are not related to the story.... anyways I Love the narcissistic personality of the mc....
Автор проекта пожалуйста вернись и продолжай. Произведение очень интересное.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I love your story So much it funny and amazing thank you I enjoy Your story I hope I can Read more❤️❤️❤️❤️👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼
Ааааааа. круто круто !!!ааааа. новая глову хочу 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😃😃😃😃ггаоао гсбзфхуюпбвщс8ьсьсомшмт м7атцшц8[img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
no es ara mi si soportas un mc gay con retraso de octavo grado este fic es para ti .........................................................
The story seems nice but the gay part is nothing for me So as long you arent disturped by the gay part give it a try
i love the story and how he is already OP in that world i think. And the MC powers and experience which i find is amazing keep it up. ..........
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I'm waiting for new chapter :)I'm waiting for new chapter :)I'm waiting for new chapter :)I'm waiting for new chapter :)I'm waiting for new chapter :)I'm waiting for new chapter :)I'm waiting for new chapter :)I'm waiting for new chapter :)
so far so good the writing is acceptable, the updating stability is superb keep it up, author i just want to ask whos the cp, im literally thirsting for tang san's dad so muscule 😖😖 o ma god im hopeless let it be tang hao i never saw tang hao cp, anyway whos cpppppppp.
Good book, good read, good character, good development. If you like soul land read this book.………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….
gay story. ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... .....
We really don't see much MxM fanfics on this site. We need more of them. I have only read a few chapters, and I'm already quite liking this. Though, I don't think that's what narcissism really is. The impression I got from this story is that MC has a sky-high self-esteem, and is ignorant about his own flaws. However, to my knowledge, narcissism actually means that the MC should've had a very low self-esteem, but he buries it. Grandiose is just one of his ways of burying his insecurities. Aside from that, and the small amount of chapters, I think this novel is worth reading GIMME MOREEE