4評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
與他人分享您的想法
寫檢討
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tbh this was one of my favorite back in the days even thou I wanted more of it I thought it was best to just leave it as the way the author stopped I'm glad to see someone share it it's been like 4 years now without any update
I'm really enjoying your story man, it is well written and has great depth. I hope you keep it up. 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥💯
this story is very good, it certainly has great writing and puts a lot of reality in the characters, and also creates a good development. . . . but depending on the personality of the person reading this, he may not feel in agreement with the main character's decisions, he makes a lot of decisions and doesn't please many people, but of course this is not a reason not to read this novel, but to read it, because in few stories you can say that you disagree with the mc's decision because it was very human, which makes you think what I would have done or would have done in the his place? For that reason alone, it's a story worth checking out.
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tbh this was one of my favorite back in the days even thou I wanted more of it I thought it was best to just leave it as the way the author stopped I'm glad to see someone share it it's been like 4 years now without any update
I'm really enjoying your story man, it is well written and has great depth. I hope you keep it up. 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥💯
this story is very good, it certainly has great writing and puts a lot of reality in the characters, and also creates a good development. . . . but depending on the personality of the person reading this, he may not feel in agreement with the main character's decisions, he makes a lot of decisions and doesn't please many people, but of course this is not a reason not to read this novel, but to read it, because in few stories you can say that you disagree with the mc's decision because it was very human, which makes you think what I would have done or would have done in the his place? For that reason alone, it's a story worth checking out.
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