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Honestly it seemed pretty good at the start but it just quickly went downhill to be honest. MC is meant to be from a cultivation world where law of the jungle prevails yet when he comes to his new world it seems like he forgot everything. He deemed a girl he's met once as his soulmate and 'married' her, he also takes quite a few high risks to try and cure her when they've literally just met. It was honestly quite disappointing, to be honest.
This novel has a lot of potential author please don't drop it in future I want to see it's end. This going to be really interesting from now
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Wired , I’ve read a book vary similar to this one not too long ago ….. Droped it after the Mc started to have casual sax with girls he met at the kingdom ….. And wiredly everything here mathches this one ….. even the people and situation ……. Hmmm … wired
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Honestly it seemed pretty good at the start but it just quickly went downhill to be honest. MC is meant to be from a cultivation world where law of the jungle prevails yet when he comes to his new world it seems like he forgot everything. He deemed a girl he's met once as his soulmate and 'married' her, he also takes quite a few high risks to try and cure her when they've literally just met. It was honestly quite disappointing, to be honest.
This novel has a lot of potential author please don't drop it in future I want to see it's end. This going to be really interesting from now
ïñçëst...................ïñçëst.................................. ........ïñçëst .....ïñçëst ..ïñçëst.............. ........ïñçëst .....ïñçëst ..ïñçëstïñçëst.................................. ........ïñçëst .....ïñçëst ..ïñçëstïñçëst.................................. ........ïñçëst .....ïñçëst ..ïñçëst
NiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNice Btw, do you have any socials? I'll add you on insta/discord.
Wired , I’ve read a book vary similar to this one not too long ago ….. Droped it after the Mc started to have casual sax with girls he met at the kingdom ….. And wiredly everything here mathches this one ….. even the people and situation ……. Hmmm … wired
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Bueno, hasta ahora se actualizará cuando salgan más capítulos, así que no lo dejes caer.. . .. . . . . .. . . .. . . . . . .. . . ... . .. . . . . .. . . .. . . . . ..
Esperemos que las cosas salgan bien con este... [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leozhan2020*@*gmail.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
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