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Like almost all works about zombies, it doesn't achieve anything. Most people forget that the United States of America is the home of guns. There are more weapons than people, let alone ammunition... This is only counting private weapons. A plea to all authors: If you want to paint a picture where humanity is overwhelmed by zombies, don't set it in America, that's not realistic.
Makes zero sense, has infinite store but steals clothes, slaughtered 10,000 zombies but no one knows where the bodies went, zero real dialogue just small explanations then 1-6 time skips
This is so stupid it hurts. waste of time, the mc is so OP there's no struggle, no character growth he's just letting the original plot play out.
This is an ALMOST copy of canon events... MCs entry with rick from the very beginning would have logically created a super storm from very beginning itself if you go by the butterfly effect... But here MC is just a non-biting mindless zombie following rick, minimal dialogues between MC and rick, minimal productive input for ideas by MC in case of some canonical events, most of the actions are executed by rick and again MC just follows along dumbly... Nevermind... Am dropping this after chapter 10, no motivation to further read what i have already watched in a better version of this
hey man are u still going to continue this....or can u make a new one where Maggie is the love interest ...and don't make him too op
a good story nice main character the only thing that is a bit exaggerated is the number of his wives but otherwise the novel is nice..Would recommend if you like zombie apocalypse and not a beta mc
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Бред, логика отсутствует полностью, персонажи просто капируют канон, отсутствие развития. Мс безиниативный фоновый персонаж который даже не пытался как-то повлиять на ситуацию, плывет по течению не используя возможности, автор просто следует канону даже если это путо
the idea of the story is reasonable, the problem is in the beginning, it follows the original story a lot in a way that the Mc becomes practically irrelevant, another thing to note the powers of the Mc are also problems, because they are too strong for the world he's in, the world he's in doesn't justify such wildly strong powers, another thing about the story is that the author doesn't put checks and balances, Mc can have any item he wants without having to pay any price for it, Let's say that Mc wants an Android, that's it. He just wants it and he gets it, he doesn't have to get materials, he doesn't have to get anything to change it! he doesn't have to try and get gold or get electrical components, none of that, guns, does he want a gun? ready, he will have a weapon, he wants something made of a component with a lightsaber that has objects that are not natural from that universe, he can do it without any problem!! This is so absurd! Things should have prices, especially for materials that don't originally exist in this world! because of that kind of thing this story was a little poorly written. The author is probably an amateur, so in this story he must have done it without thinking about this kind of thing, but he should still fix it, because the story has potential, but it gets spoiled because of these little things.
I like his wish of getting anything for free from his shop. If any of yall know where more of this type of power is in other novels let me know.
I was honestly disappointed, no additional plot twists nor its own story. "copy paste of the original TWD plus a side character-observer self insert MC. quite sad. :(
Well, if you are looking for a copy paste story that is word for word what was in the tv series only with a SI that adds no real spice to they story aside hogging beauties in a world that already lacks populace, then this is the story to read. I feel like I'm re-watching TWD as the chapters are word for word copy pasted from the show, but all the boring stuff was kept out, and the Author placed an OP character that doesn't even use 1/1 millionth of the power he has as all he does is follows the plot and takes women he fancy's, while these women don't even second guess the harem choice and just roll with it. The story could be a lot better if the Author broke off from the main story and started his own settlement where he can create his own harem, but he's not even considered the leader of the main series group as he is seen as a vice-leader, and it says this in a chapter. I'll still be reading because I like TWD, and there is just enough minor changes that I can say is better then what the main series went with
great fanfic I wouldn't change her, I like how it's developing and the harem improving 😏😁 For more harem and good stories a toast🥂 continue author-san
I like the storyline and I hope it will be better in the future... I also hope the story will update quickly and I will still be your loyal reader :D still don't be discouraged author
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It’s a pretty good story but the only thing I don’t like is that the Main Character John isn’t using the system to the utmost of it’s abilities and the use for Unnecessary things like for example John could’ve used a gun with a silencer earlier on so he wouldn’t have to worry about the noise and then there’s that one chapter where john could’ve used the super power section and gave himself precognition it would’ve helped in so many situations then there’s the use of stuff from star wars which is totally Unnecessary like the only reason you would need a lightsaber is that its cool to use an actual lightsaber thats the only reason and then also earlier on when john was making daily trips to the city for supplies he could’ve simply cheesed it to where he would spawn a car and load up the trunk with supplies and could’ve just said that he had a good day looting.
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Bro seriously needs to put time stamps in the story. There are some chapters that are plain confusing as some are happening in the past in a flashback? Please put the flashback signs for that. Other than that, well there are a few things wrong with the story, but bro has already warned us about it in the synopsis so can't say anything about that.
Просто мусор . Я зря потратил своё время ...................................................................................................
I also have a TWDR fanfic and I know that it is very satisfying to make that kind of content that continues the chronological order of the story that a person loves so much from their favorite show.👍😍
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the author basically added the mc into the original twd plot. The story follows 90% of the canon changing few things because of the small actions of the mc. I don't like the way the author writes, it seems more like a record of events, very few dialogues and the ones that have are the same as in the original series. Anyway, this is my opinion after 20 chapters, I will continue reading because I hope that this ff improves and there are not many ff with twd theme.
This isn't a fanfic, this just a cheap copy of the show nothing different at all.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
you can just like the story or not,,,,, I loved it,,,,,, the only thing that bothers me a little is the harem, like a little big for "The walking dead". I think 3 or 4 was enough. (Google translator)
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it's literally just the walking dead but with an oc that sits in the back and listens to everything that is going on and so far has contributed nothing to the actual story itself.
Like almost all works about zombies, it doesn't achieve anything. Most people forget that the United States of America is the home of guns. There are more weapons than people, let alone ammunition... This is only counting private weapons. A plea to all authors: If you want to paint a picture where humanity is overwhelmed by zombies, don't set it in America, that's not realistic.
Makes zero sense, has infinite store but steals clothes, slaughtered 10,000 zombies but no one knows where the bodies went, zero real dialogue just small explanations then 1-6 time skips
This is so stupid it hurts. waste of time, the mc is so OP there's no struggle, no character growth he's just letting the original plot play out.
This is an ALMOST copy of canon events... MCs entry with rick from the very beginning would have logically created a super storm from very beginning itself if you go by the butterfly effect... But here MC is just a non-biting mindless zombie following rick, minimal dialogues between MC and rick, minimal productive input for ideas by MC in case of some canonical events, most of the actions are executed by rick and again MC just follows along dumbly... Nevermind... Am dropping this after chapter 10, no motivation to further read what i have already watched in a better version of this
hey man are u still going to continue this....or can u make a new one where Maggie is the love interest ...and don't make him too op
a good story nice main character the only thing that is a bit exaggerated is the number of his wives but otherwise the novel is nice..Would recommend if you like zombie apocalypse and not a beta mc
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Бред, логика отсутствует полностью, персонажи просто капируют канон, отсутствие развития. Мс безиниативный фоновый персонаж который даже не пытался как-то повлиять на ситуацию, плывет по течению не используя возможности, автор просто следует канону даже если это путо
the idea of the story is reasonable, the problem is in the beginning, it follows the original story a lot in a way that the Mc becomes practically irrelevant, another thing to note the powers of the Mc are also problems, because they are too strong for the world he's in, the world he's in doesn't justify such wildly strong powers, another thing about the story is that the author doesn't put checks and balances, Mc can have any item he wants without having to pay any price for it, Let's say that Mc wants an Android, that's it. He just wants it and he gets it, he doesn't have to get materials, he doesn't have to get anything to change it! he doesn't have to try and get gold or get electrical components, none of that, guns, does he want a gun? ready, he will have a weapon, he wants something made of a component with a lightsaber that has objects that are not natural from that universe, he can do it without any problem!! This is so absurd! Things should have prices, especially for materials that don't originally exist in this world! because of that kind of thing this story was a little poorly written. The author is probably an amateur, so in this story he must have done it without thinking about this kind of thing, but he should still fix it, because the story has potential, but it gets spoiled because of these little things.
I like his wish of getting anything for free from his shop. If any of yall know where more of this type of power is in other novels let me know.
I was honestly disappointed, no additional plot twists nor its own story. "copy paste of the original TWD plus a side character-observer self insert MC. quite sad. :(
Well, if you are looking for a copy paste story that is word for word what was in the tv series only with a SI that adds no real spice to they story aside hogging beauties in a world that already lacks populace, then this is the story to read. I feel like I'm re-watching TWD as the chapters are word for word copy pasted from the show, but all the boring stuff was kept out, and the Author placed an OP character that doesn't even use 1/1 millionth of the power he has as all he does is follows the plot and takes women he fancy's, while these women don't even second guess the harem choice and just roll with it. The story could be a lot better if the Author broke off from the main story and started his own settlement where he can create his own harem, but he's not even considered the leader of the main series group as he is seen as a vice-leader, and it says this in a chapter. I'll still be reading because I like TWD, and there is just enough minor changes that I can say is better then what the main series went with
great fanfic I wouldn't change her, I like how it's developing and the harem improving 😏😁 For more harem and good stories a toast🥂 continue author-san
I like the storyline and I hope it will be better in the future... I also hope the story will update quickly and I will still be your loyal reader :D still don't be discouraged author
🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
It’s a pretty good story but the only thing I don’t like is that the Main Character John isn’t using the system to the utmost of it’s abilities and the use for Unnecessary things like for example John could’ve used a gun with a silencer earlier on so he wouldn’t have to worry about the noise and then there’s that one chapter where john could’ve used the super power section and gave himself precognition it would’ve helped in so many situations then there’s the use of stuff from star wars which is totally Unnecessary like the only reason you would need a lightsaber is that its cool to use an actual lightsaber thats the only reason and then also earlier on when john was making daily trips to the city for supplies he could’ve simply cheesed it to where he would spawn a car and load up the trunk with supplies and could’ve just said that he had a good day looting.
揭示劇透 Bro seriously needs to put time stamps in the story. There are some chapters that are plain confusing as some are happening in the past in a flashback? Please put the flashback signs for that. Other than that, well there are a few things wrong with the story, but bro has already warned us about it in the synopsis so can't say anything about that.
Просто мусор . Я зря потратил своё время ...................................................................................................
I also have a TWDR fanfic and I know that it is very satisfying to make that kind of content that continues the chronological order of the story that a person loves so much from their favorite show.👍😍
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the author basically added the mc into the original twd plot. The story follows 90% of the canon changing few things because of the small actions of the mc. I don't like the way the author writes, it seems more like a record of events, very few dialogues and the ones that have are the same as in the original series. Anyway, this is my opinion after 20 chapters, I will continue reading because I hope that this ff improves and there are not many ff with twd theme.
This isn't a fanfic, this just a cheap copy of the show nothing different at all.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
you can just like the story or not,,,,, I loved it,,,,,, the only thing that bothers me a little is the harem, like a little big for "The walking dead". I think 3 or 4 was enough. (Google translator)
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it's literally just the walking dead but with an oc that sits in the back and listens to everything that is going on and so far has contributed nothing to the actual story itself.
trash ff [img=golden ticket][img=golden ticket]