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The idea is nice but the grammar is so bad i dont know what is happening. I suggest using grammarly. Im four chapters in and no sign of chatroom or whatever and utterly confused
The idea is nice but the grammar is so bad i dont know what is happening. I suggest using grammarly. Im four chapters in and no sign of chatroom or whatever and utterly confused