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this novel was seriously good I read all of those 32 chapter's in 1 day, starting was a little boring (1-2 chapter's) but after that it was seriously good. eagerly waiting for more chapters [img=recommend][img=recommend]
my honest opinion i got to say the plot was good until up to part where you really dumb down the mc and cause the major issue to your plot and you know what I am talking about. please don't do that again just to add drama because you will garbage you novel even more. you put all these warnings just to be wasted because you made the mc 0 iq because the power of family. I just wanna say please improve your plot without the unnecessary stuff and I will improve the rating. I got a lot to say, but I am just going to say dont destroy your novel unless your rewrite your mess.
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揭示劇透
at first i thought it will mostly be lemon chapters but the story is very good and harem member are also nice and they have there own personality. writing is also good and understandable. lemon scene is also good. hence this is a very good harem novel. i would recommend to give it a try
Very interesting story the plot is amazing, the protagonist's personality is amazing very good perfect, the Harem loved it very interesting and the heroines are very clear and interesting,I highly recommend you will not regret it
this novel was seriously good I read all of those 32 chapter's in 1 day, starting was a little boring (1-2 chapter's) but after that it was seriously good. eagerly waiting for more chapters [img=recommend][img=recommend]
my honest opinion i got to say the plot was good until up to part where you really dumb down the mc and cause the major issue to your plot and you know what I am talking about. please don't do that again just to add drama because you will garbage you novel even more. you put all these warnings just to be wasted because you made the mc 0 iq because the power of family. I just wanna say please improve your plot without the unnecessary stuff and I will improve the rating. I got a lot to say, but I am just going to say dont destroy your novel unless your rewrite your mess.
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揭示劇透 at first i thought it will mostly be lemon chapters but the story is very good and harem member are also nice and they have there own personality. writing is also good and understandable. lemon scene is also good. hence this is a very good harem novel. i would recommend to give it a try
Very interesting story the plot is amazing, the protagonist's personality is amazing very good perfect, the Harem loved it very interesting and the heroines are very clear and interesting,I highly recommend you will not regret it
why it reset back being 35 chapter after updating up to 122 chapter