45評論
3.93
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
與他人分享您的想法
寫檢討
Why is the MC so stupid?, he makes all the wrong decisions . This story copies Chinese clichés and forgets that the mc is Philippian, he knows that gangs are outside at night, so he goes out at night and says to himself well I'm going to avoid them, without information, without anything and is surprised when he is attacked . He tells his sister he no longer needs work and insists she not ask questions, it's so embarrassing, I view interactions with his sister with such contempt that it's unnatural , he doesn't focus on what's important, out of the neighborhood, he doesn't lie about the money but says to trust him, just an idiot
Idea was good but execution is very poor! Protagonist is unrealistically a fool. There's almost no character development after 100+ chapters!
i mean its allright the mc is not that dumb like the others say there is some moments where he is dumb but not that frequently as i am reading i have read worse books and mc's so its pretty good in my opinion but check out the other comments aswell but i personally like the book
The MCs intelligence is so far below average that its just infuriating. Also its allways mentioned that he is a genius but that couldnt be further from the truth. It just speaks for the authors own intelligence. If the MCs character wouldnt be so stupid it would be a very good book. Disappointing!
The story is decent at best. Overall it’s pretty bad. I will say it’s hilarious to see people clowning on the mc. Rightfully so too, he’s just plain braindead. No one who has lived that “hard” of a life is so ignorant to how the world and people work. I’m not sure if the author just hasn’t had any social interaction but this mc is one of the worst written ones I’ve read. The idea of the story is great….the execution is really bad. Good luck though author.
the only reason this isn't five stars is because if the lack of currency flexibility, not only is the mc quite stupid, every currency there is isn't 100% solid, it can always inflate or deflate, that's why I think that author should add something to the system, like a new unlockable feature that it automatically converts your money into something solid, let's say gold, it goes up and down but it's solid, no matter how many bombs are dropped on a country, gold will still maintain it's worth despite maybe going down. I really hope author sees this
what the heck is this wattpad-level writing style. using *action* asterisks, and for the first word, no less? i could not get past the first page. cringe.
MC is stupid, forgetful, dull, lacks common sense and never improves and continues making the same mistakes. Mind you, he is reborn in another world. And he still has the mentality equivalent to a 10 year old..... Sure there is some relateability-the fact that he was nothing special in his first world, so he is nothing special in the second one, even having many misfortunes. But all of that does not excuse him being an absolute imbecil. His sister is pretty useless most of time-Author uses her as an excuse for the MC not doing anything without her being absolutely protected(yeah MC is a siscon). The way other characters get included feels very forced. Worldbuilding is pretty vague- we have the world he is currently in, there is a big, evil organization Illuminati and there are other worlds..... That's it. I should mention I only read 43 chapters.
I don't know man this novel is great but the mc just ruins it , the more I read the novel the more I feel like he is a idiot the author described him as an mature person but where is that person? where? if the willing to change the mc's personslity the novel will be great.
While i really enjoy this novel, i can’t help but to complain about the Mc. He has the shortest attention span i have ever seen, like he finds a priceless treasure but gets distracted by a colorful leaf near by.
What you expect ? A generic OP MC novel without good writing or characters but... You are WRONG ! Its a good novel with unexpected twist. ( I doubt you expect that what will come ) Give it a try ! Im sure you will not regret this.
In the first few chapters, It is said that the MC is already matured but in chp 4-5 he doesn't look like someone who is matured at all ////////////////////////////
It was good at 1st, but as the story goes on it gets boring. No suspense just some imaginary villains waiting to be defeated. character development is ⭐. I was looking forward to this since it's written by a fellow countryman but as always it's the same for others. - walay EUT 😂.
Here is my honest review. I've read this novel up to chapter 11 and so far I have to say that it's a story with a great concept. I will list some positives and negatives that might influence your reading. Negatives: Bad grammar, if you haven't read novels with bad grammar before and gained the ability of auto correct in your brain this will ruin the entire experience Cliche: Starts of original up to the 9th chapter he starts having pills for strength and meeting a gang member after mentioning it at least 3 different times. Starts talking about his boss and how he is a "real criminal." Confusing currency: You will be stuck in googke asking for the exchange rates for the currency since you're never explained before hand or showing how much the currency they use is( for example Phillip spent 20 pesos ( 1 us dollar)) there is no end card or end of chapter of what he makes that day or if it does you got to go to google to exchange the currency to something you recognize. Positives: Original idea: This author presents us an idea not touched upon that much. Good concept: The idea of someone who literally goes rags to riches by tapping is an idea not explored before that should be used more Setting: It provides a decent enough setting to know where the characters are at and what is happening. overall a 3/5 Decent writing with cliche elements and a confusing currency. Should attempt to try to read to see if you have a different experience
I have read up to chapter 44 (all of the free chapters) and this review is based off of this. Summary: The MC died and got reincarnated in a new world with nothing to help him out. His parents died early on in his life and he had to mature early to support himself and his younger sister. When he gets fired from his job as a dishwasher, his system appears. It allows him to tap his phone in exchange for pesos, using some of his stamina in return. Now for the review. There is very little world building/background so far, and I am not sure if that changes but I doubt so and I am not going to waste time and money to check it out. The MC’s past has barely been revealed, only details such as his full name, his parents’ names, and his sister’s. The MC is also very ignorant about everything in the world, knowing near nothing aside from cooking and working. The character development is especially lacking so far. The MC is extremely illogical and has not matured at all so far. He gains an appraisal skill from completing a quest and discovers that he has a soul talent. He proceeds to awaken his talent using a syringe that can quickly awaken it and decides he should also awaken his sister’s talent (he has 2 syringes). This entire process was put off for 20+ chapters when it could have been done immediately. The plot barely progressed during these chapters, only him buying a house, a car, and obtaining a coffee shop which passively makes him money. You would expect him to run the coffee shop since it is a physical location that the system somehow miraculously got, but apparently it can run idly. He also has a cheat soul talent where he can grow any plant quickly in his dimensional space but he decides to not use it, only later using it for storage. In another example, when he first unlocked the system’s shop that required golden tickets for different items (1 golden ticket = 100,000 exp), he purchased two golden tickets instead of leveling up his system which would allow him to earn money faster, again, all for the author to delay the story and barely develop the plot. I would not recommend you read the story unless you really need something to kill time, but there are numerous other novels on here that are better than this for that purpose.
揭示劇透
The novel was good until the alien thingy ruined i feel like it just taken the only good thing about the novel too bad... I hope you Mr author a good journey in making this book.
I'm very impressed and into the novel. The first time I read this novel my curiosity is at its highest place and the author is such a great story contributor. I have high hope to other readers to actually accept the whole plot for the author have all the control, let's appreciate his work for it's not easy to produce such great novels. So far this novel is very welcoming to new ideas about other dimensions and can make us realize that everyone of us can dream.
novel recommendations ..... the story is very interesting and unique ..... always can't wait for the latest update ..... I like system, adventure .....[img=recommend]
support local wohooooo gooo madapaker we support you go pilipino support local support local support local local support local support local
This is a good novel. I am really looking forward for this novels. Keep up the good work author. Keep pumping those chapters!!!!! The story is so good
Ukraine : "Vladimir- Kun please be gentle ". Vladimir-kun : "sorry Ukraine-chan ,I can't hold back anymore" . *squirts the entire 2nd Guards Motor Rifle Division into Kyev *
i dunno how to describe about this book. it has a fast pace story but slow building plot. most chapters that you read is only about eat, sleep, with a tiny portion of new plot about the story. the way mc behave is so dumb. mc keep going distract with new thing and then suddenly in the next chapter author said mc already did something which mc neglected in the previous chapter. for it really annoying to see mc with all the golden finger that he has but cant use it to the maximum efficiency. i pay to read until chapter 80 but when it goes to privilege section, i think this story is not worth the coin that I need to spend. basically you spend money just to read mc eat and sleep lol so tge story need rewrite to make more details and mc need a lot of stuff to make it more cool to be an mc with golden fingers. the world around need more detail so the reader can get into the story not just become like a passerby who read to know and after that nothing to feel. and please revamp the chapter, coz reader need more rich plot than just seeing mc eat, mc tired then go to sleep coz it feel like we read a boring diary of a boring guy not a novel at all.
Great book author, pls continue writing more chapters and I really hope that you will not drop this book. Support from your fellow countryman, i hope that you make it bigtime.
it's alright.. there's a lot of cockblocking to do the things he must do.. mc is also not as bright as you would like, making the story slower because of it, and everything you are waiting for, seems like is always looming but isn't reachable anytime soon.. to resume the novel; it feels like there's a debuffer installed and that prevents it from reaching its full potential
Five Star support Five Star support Five Star support Five Star support Five Star support Five Star support Five Star support Five Star support
Decent novel but has a bland mc that gets exhausted tapping on a phone screen the mc doesn’t have much growth and I don’t think the chapter updates come out fast enough for it to be paywalled
Deleted my previous review to post this one. the story was decent and it was moving in a good direction but the author doesnt update it frequently enough to justify the paywall placed on it. it also has some Issues with character development.
Brain dead and annoying MC. Forgetful impulsive and just dull. There is no world background MC is overwhelming excited that the little IQ hes shown to have just stops functioning in every situation. He is a reincarnate but thats not shown in anyway so whats the point in even throwing that in there.
Great potential. (chapter 30) So far it's been good and I can see the potential future path this novel will take, its not amazing but it's pretty good compared to other novels.
Hello, Readers! It's your author here! So, I just decided to make a review so that in case some of you had questions, you can drop it here. The book might not be the best out there, but I'll try my best to make it enjoyable for you all. Thank you for reading!
Why is the MC so stupid?, he makes all the wrong decisions . This story copies Chinese clichés and forgets that the mc is Philippian, he knows that gangs are outside at night, so he goes out at night and says to himself well I'm going to avoid them, without information, without anything and is surprised when he is attacked . He tells his sister he no longer needs work and insists she not ask questions, it's so embarrassing, I view interactions with his sister with such contempt that it's unnatural , he doesn't focus on what's important, out of the neighborhood, he doesn't lie about the money but says to trust him, just an idiot
Idea was good but execution is very poor! Protagonist is unrealistically a fool. There's almost no character development after 100+ chapters!
i mean its allright the mc is not that dumb like the others say there is some moments where he is dumb but not that frequently as i am reading i have read worse books and mc's so its pretty good in my opinion but check out the other comments aswell but i personally like the book
The MCs intelligence is so far below average that its just infuriating. Also its allways mentioned that he is a genius but that couldnt be further from the truth. It just speaks for the authors own intelligence. If the MCs character wouldnt be so stupid it would be a very good book. Disappointing!
The story is decent at best. Overall it’s pretty bad. I will say it’s hilarious to see people clowning on the mc. Rightfully so too, he’s just plain braindead. No one who has lived that “hard” of a life is so ignorant to how the world and people work. I’m not sure if the author just hasn’t had any social interaction but this mc is one of the worst written ones I’ve read. The idea of the story is great….the execution is really bad. Good luck though author.
the only reason this isn't five stars is because if the lack of currency flexibility, not only is the mc quite stupid, every currency there is isn't 100% solid, it can always inflate or deflate, that's why I think that author should add something to the system, like a new unlockable feature that it automatically converts your money into something solid, let's say gold, it goes up and down but it's solid, no matter how many bombs are dropped on a country, gold will still maintain it's worth despite maybe going down. I really hope author sees this
what the heck is this wattpad-level writing style. using *action* asterisks, and for the first word, no less? i could not get past the first page. cringe.
MC is stupid, forgetful, dull, lacks common sense and never improves and continues making the same mistakes. Mind you, he is reborn in another world. And he still has the mentality equivalent to a 10 year old..... Sure there is some relateability-the fact that he was nothing special in his first world, so he is nothing special in the second one, even having many misfortunes. But all of that does not excuse him being an absolute imbecil. His sister is pretty useless most of time-Author uses her as an excuse for the MC not doing anything without her being absolutely protected(yeah MC is a siscon). The way other characters get included feels very forced. Worldbuilding is pretty vague- we have the world he is currently in, there is a big, evil organization Illuminati and there are other worlds..... That's it. I should mention I only read 43 chapters.
I don't know man this novel is great but the mc just ruins it , the more I read the novel the more I feel like he is a idiot the author described him as an mature person but where is that person? where? if the willing to change the mc's personslity the novel will be great.
While i really enjoy this novel, i can’t help but to complain about the Mc. He has the shortest attention span i have ever seen, like he finds a priceless treasure but gets distracted by a colorful leaf near by.
What you expect ? A generic OP MC novel without good writing or characters but... You are WRONG ! Its a good novel with unexpected twist. ( I doubt you expect that what will come ) Give it a try ! Im sure you will not regret this.
In the first few chapters, It is said that the MC is already matured but in chp 4-5 he doesn't look like someone who is matured at all ////////////////////////////
It was good at 1st, but as the story goes on it gets boring. No suspense just some imaginary villains waiting to be defeated. character development is ⭐. I was looking forward to this since it's written by a fellow countryman but as always it's the same for others. - walay EUT 😂.
Here is my honest review. I've read this novel up to chapter 11 and so far I have to say that it's a story with a great concept. I will list some positives and negatives that might influence your reading. Negatives: Bad grammar, if you haven't read novels with bad grammar before and gained the ability of auto correct in your brain this will ruin the entire experience Cliche: Starts of original up to the 9th chapter he starts having pills for strength and meeting a gang member after mentioning it at least 3 different times. Starts talking about his boss and how he is a "real criminal." Confusing currency: You will be stuck in googke asking for the exchange rates for the currency since you're never explained before hand or showing how much the currency they use is( for example Phillip spent 20 pesos ( 1 us dollar)) there is no end card or end of chapter of what he makes that day or if it does you got to go to google to exchange the currency to something you recognize. Positives: Original idea: This author presents us an idea not touched upon that much. Good concept: The idea of someone who literally goes rags to riches by tapping is an idea not explored before that should be used more Setting: It provides a decent enough setting to know where the characters are at and what is happening. overall a 3/5 Decent writing with cliche elements and a confusing currency. Should attempt to try to read to see if you have a different experience
I have read up to chapter 44 (all of the free chapters) and this review is based off of this. Summary: The MC died and got reincarnated in a new world with nothing to help him out. His parents died early on in his life and he had to mature early to support himself and his younger sister. When he gets fired from his job as a dishwasher, his system appears. It allows him to tap his phone in exchange for pesos, using some of his stamina in return. Now for the review. There is very little world building/background so far, and I am not sure if that changes but I doubt so and I am not going to waste time and money to check it out. The MC’s past has barely been revealed, only details such as his full name, his parents’ names, and his sister’s. The MC is also very ignorant about everything in the world, knowing near nothing aside from cooking and working. The character development is especially lacking so far. The MC is extremely illogical and has not matured at all so far. He gains an appraisal skill from completing a quest and discovers that he has a soul talent. He proceeds to awaken his talent using a syringe that can quickly awaken it and decides he should also awaken his sister’s talent (he has 2 syringes). This entire process was put off for 20+ chapters when it could have been done immediately. The plot barely progressed during these chapters, only him buying a house, a car, and obtaining a coffee shop which passively makes him money. You would expect him to run the coffee shop since it is a physical location that the system somehow miraculously got, but apparently it can run idly. He also has a cheat soul talent where he can grow any plant quickly in his dimensional space but he decides to not use it, only later using it for storage. In another example, when he first unlocked the system’s shop that required golden tickets for different items (1 golden ticket = 100,000 exp), he purchased two golden tickets instead of leveling up his system which would allow him to earn money faster, again, all for the author to delay the story and barely develop the plot. I would not recommend you read the story unless you really need something to kill time, but there are numerous other novels on here that are better than this for that purpose.
揭示劇透 The novel was good until the alien thingy ruined i feel like it just taken the only good thing about the novel too bad... I hope you Mr author a good journey in making this book.
I'm very impressed and into the novel. The first time I read this novel my curiosity is at its highest place and the author is such a great story contributor. I have high hope to other readers to actually accept the whole plot for the author have all the control, let's appreciate his work for it's not easy to produce such great novels. So far this novel is very welcoming to new ideas about other dimensions and can make us realize that everyone of us can dream.
novel recommendations ..... the story is very interesting and unique ..... always can't wait for the latest update ..... I like system, adventure .....[img=recommend]
support local wohooooo gooo madapaker we support you go pilipino support local support local support local local support local support local
This is a good novel. I am really looking forward for this novels. Keep up the good work author. Keep pumping those chapters!!!!! The story is so good
Ukraine : "Vladimir- Kun please be gentle ". Vladimir-kun : "sorry Ukraine-chan ,I can't hold back anymore" . *squirts the entire 2nd Guards Motor Rifle Division into Kyev *
i dunno how to describe about this book. it has a fast pace story but slow building plot. most chapters that you read is only about eat, sleep, with a tiny portion of new plot about the story. the way mc behave is so dumb. mc keep going distract with new thing and then suddenly in the next chapter author said mc already did something which mc neglected in the previous chapter. for it really annoying to see mc with all the golden finger that he has but cant use it to the maximum efficiency. i pay to read until chapter 80 but when it goes to privilege section, i think this story is not worth the coin that I need to spend. basically you spend money just to read mc eat and sleep lol so tge story need rewrite to make more details and mc need a lot of stuff to make it more cool to be an mc with golden fingers. the world around need more detail so the reader can get into the story not just become like a passerby who read to know and after that nothing to feel. and please revamp the chapter, coz reader need more rich plot than just seeing mc eat, mc tired then go to sleep coz it feel like we read a boring diary of a boring guy not a novel at all.
Great book author, pls continue writing more chapters and I really hope that you will not drop this book. Support from your fellow countryman, i hope that you make it bigtime.
it's alright.. there's a lot of cockblocking to do the things he must do.. mc is also not as bright as you would like, making the story slower because of it, and everything you are waiting for, seems like is always looming but isn't reachable anytime soon.. to resume the novel; it feels like there's a debuffer installed and that prevents it from reaching its full potential
Five Star support Five Star support Five Star support Five Star support Five Star support Five Star support Five Star support Five Star support
Decent novel but has a bland mc that gets exhausted tapping on a phone screen the mc doesn’t have much growth and I don’t think the chapter updates come out fast enough for it to be paywalled
Deleted my previous review to post this one. the story was decent and it was moving in a good direction but the author doesnt update it frequently enough to justify the paywall placed on it. it also has some Issues with character development.
Brain dead and annoying MC. Forgetful impulsive and just dull. There is no world background MC is overwhelming excited that the little IQ hes shown to have just stops functioning in every situation. He is a reincarnate but thats not shown in anyway so whats the point in even throwing that in there.
Great potential. (chapter 30) So far it's been good and I can see the potential future path this novel will take, its not amazing but it's pretty good compared to other novels.
Hello, Readers! It's your author here! So, I just decided to make a review so that in case some of you had questions, you can drop it here. The book might not be the best out there, but I'll try my best to make it enjoyable for you all. Thank you for reading!