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very good, please update later chaps, or is that not possible, can you share the link to raws very good, please update later chaps, or is that not possible, can you share the link to raws
I think you should change the names to make it more comfortable to read, don't have to think first to understand who the character is or the name of the island visited
Pretty great. pls tell what is the link for raw mtl version of this fic🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
Do not post things without editing them if they are not your own translation, mtl, and if this is your's get a editor the work is painful to read from the 1 chapter. Note for reader this is not the only one so don't think he will edit.
very good, please update later chaps, or is that not possible, can you share the link to raws very good, please update later chaps, or is that not possible, can you share the link to raws
I think you should change the names to make it more comfortable to read, don't have to think first to understand who the character is or the name of the island visited
Pretty great. pls tell what is the link for raw mtl version of this fic🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
Do not post things without editing them if they are not your own translation, mtl, and if this is your's get a editor the work is painful to read from the 1 chapter. Note for reader this is not the only one so don't think he will edit.