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章節 229: Chapter 229 - Supernatural Stamina & New Skills

Kensei's Home

In a flash Daichi returned to his bedroom. He had spent nearly a month in the dungeon training and battling various enemies. He looked at the clock on the wall. 'Only seven seconds had passed.' Daichi walked and stood in front of the full length mirror in the corner of the room and looked at himself.

'Yup. My hair has gotten longer and I've grown over 2 inches. There is a small but significant difference in my muscle mass and anyone would be able to tell that I've changed. This is one of the reasons I didn't want to spend so much time in the dungeon. If anyone who knows me takes a good look then they'll know something's up… It's a good thing I have a month before I need to show my face to anyone. No. A month isn't needed. Just a couple weeks is enough.'

The Genin let out a deep breath of air and stretched himself. 'Time to see my progress. Status.'

The next second the status window appeared in his view.

[Name : Daichi Hekima] (The Gamer)

[Class : Genin - ID 012559.]

[Age : 12]

[Title : Capable Child, Explorer, Prodigy, Species King, Dungeon Warrior, Executioner, Assassin, Mighty Healer, Slug Sannin's Apprentice, Master of the Elements, A Genius of the Continent.]

[Level : 59 (50186.2/89650)

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HP : 34428

CP : 90480

SP : 44795

MP: 13825

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[Primary Stats]

Strength - 309

Vitality - 451

Dexterity - 251

Agility - 314

Intelligence - 233

Chakra - 525

Wisdom - 226

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[Special Stats]

Sense - 151

Stamina - 395

Indomitable - 50

Charisma - 69

Persistence - 47

Dignity - 18

Luck - 20

.

[Stat Points - 488]

[Ryo - 30997588]

'Neat! My Vitality and Stamina really got a boost just from that one trip alone. But that whole thing was tedious.'

Daichi thought about why his two stats had such an immense boost. Every two hours, the second Daichi's Life Return skill cooldown had ended, he would use it on the strongest enemy that was near him. Everyday the skill would be used over 10 times for almost 20 days. And the results showed. With the two stats getting a near 300 points boost, Daichi was satisfied with the whole endeavor.

The Genin had his eyes on the SP(stamina points) and the Stamina Special Stat. He remembered the skill upgrade and notifications he got when Stamina reached 300.

[Stamina Stat has reached 300]

[Revising SP formula and recalculating Stamina Points]

[Skill 'Enhanced Stamina' has evolved to 'Supernatural Stamina']

[Supernatural Stamina - Passive (LV. MAX): A passive skill given to the Player when the Stamina stat has reached 300. This skill increases the user's SP and speeds up the user's stamina recovery by 5 times(Removed all previous limitations). This skill gives the user the ability to suppress or block pain and battle with full function. This skill also allows the user to suppress hunger for long periods of time and allows them to think clearly and move without any hindrance (There are certain limitations). Enhanced Stamina is a skill that's obtained and maxed.]

Letting out a deep breath of air, Daichi went to pack his bag and quietly left his home. His destination. Training ground 3.

'There is still one more Rasengan variation that I need to complete and there are several other things I need to learn as well. This one month I got from the Hokage is the perfect opportunity. I'll also need to complete the academy dungeon as well. I've been neglecting a serious ability of mine and it's time I put that to use.'

Before long Daichi reached his training ground and began the next stage of his training.

—-

One Week Later - Academy Dungeon.

"Klang Klang!"

Sparks were flying in the air as weapons from multiple enemies were sent flying at Daichi but all of them were deflected by the boy's own numerous shuriken. The Gamer Genin had spent 6 days improving the strength of his water ninjutsu and on the 7th day he decided to use the Academy dungeon ground to improve his skills and even create some new ones.

The Genin had been battling for over 20 hours non stop in the dungeon. Daichi had sweat dripping down his face and was breathing harder but he had a wide grin as looked at the multiple enemies surrounding him. 8 Chunin dungeon ninjas surrounded the boy but Daichi wasn't worried.

He grinned and spoke. "Now you see me… now you don't!"

The next second he vanished from their sight like a disappearing mirage. The dungeon ninjas looked around but couldn't find their enemy. But one dungeon ninja made a seal, closed his eyes and looked as if he was concentrating. The next second he opened his eyes and threw several shurikens in a certain direction. The shuriken struck the wall of a building but the particular dungeon ninja rushed towards an empty area and soon began engaging in combat with an invisible enemy.

Daichi, who was invisible to the naked eye, was slightly impressed that he was found out. He saw the other enemies rushing over and quickly finished off the enemy in front of him and jumped to a safe distance.

'Hmm… This is why field testing new skills is always an excellent idea.'

Daichi entered the academy dungeon mainly to sharpen his current skills and to create new defensive and evasive abilities. During the last 20 hours he was able to successfully create several new skills based on his Mana energy. A power that he had not been fully utilizing till now.

'I didn't have the necessary Mana pool needed to create the skills I've wanted until now.'

Daichi opened the skill list and his eyes were on the first new skill created since entering the Academy dungeon.

[Mana Cloak - Active(LV. 01): The skill allows the user to cover their body partially/completely in a layer of Mana energy and use it to manipulate the light spectrum. The user can render themselves unseen by most eyes and become invisible in the visible spectrum. The scent of the user is also masked. Since Mana is the energy being used for this skill the Byakugan nor the Sharingan can detect the user. But the Rinnesharingan can detect the flow of unnatural energy and thus will be able to see through the ability.]

[MP Cost: 100MP/10 minutes. 20 MP for each additional minute.]

'Mana is best suited for using stealth skills since there aren't many people that know or can even use Mana abilities. If I use chakra and create a jutsu to make myself invisible then I'll be sensed by the Sharingan and others much more easily… Hmm… The Mana cloak blocks my scent and renders me invisible from other sights but it seems a sensor ninja can still find me. So that's a downside. Sensor ninjas are rare but those that have that ability are among the most troublesome ones… To maximize the effects of this skill I need to use it in tandem with the Stealth skill.'

Daichi moved through the remaining 7 enemies that were near him and he began his counter attack. The dungeon ninjas sensed their comrades being attacked but couldn't find the enemy. They launched several Ninjutsu to their surroundings to flush out the enemy. One ninja used a wind style jutsu to kick up the dust and the enemies were able to see an invisible silhouette moving through the dust filled area.

'These guys are a lot smarter than the enemies I've gone up against in the other dungeon. But I suppose that's natural. Those guys were just mindless beasts compared to these guys who can use multiple strategies.'

But before the academy dungeon enemies could capitalize on their chance several Wind Style Breakthroughs were launched by Daichi at his foes. He took a dagger and quickly finished off his opponents in less than a minute.

[+6000 Exp.]

[+900 Exp.]

Enemies killed: [700/1125]

[Skill Death blow has leveled up.]

[Skill Danger Sense has leveled up.]

[Skill Mana Manipulation has leveled up.]

[You have leveled up]

'Finally! Level 60… I have 4 more hours before I need to exit the dungeon. My Mana is running low...'

Daichi opened the skill list and checked out the other Mana skills he created during his time here.

[Mana Shield(Semi) - Active(LV. 01): An active skill primarily used as defense in battle. This skill creates a semi-spherical shield in front of the user that can block physical attacks. Only those with high sensitivity to Mana can see the Mana shield so the shield produced is also an invisibility shield. Can only create one shield at the current level.]

[Effects: ]

[Creates one shield in front of the user that can take up to 1000 Damage points.]

[MP cost: 100 MP to activate shield and maintain for 2 minutes. 50 MP will be used to maintain the shield for each additional minute.]

'Based on my analysis and the battle data collected, this shield can tank up to 5 or 6 C Rank level ninjutsu and 2 or maybe 3 B Rank Ninjutsu and just a single A Rank level jutsu. And it's still only Level 1. And this is a semi protective shield. I need to create a full body shield next time.'

Daichi let go of the Mana cloak skill and used another one he created. This one was much more versatile but the Mana cost was equally higher than the other skill.

[Mana Body Armor - Active(LV. 01): This is an active skill best used in defensive style in battle. This skill creates a layer of Mana energy atop the skin and clothes of the user and hardens it forming an invisible armor. This armor can also be used to hide the scent and chakra of the user.

MP Cost: 160 MP to activate and maintain for 2 minutes. Additional 80 MP will be used each minute.]

[Effects:]

[Can negate a certain portion of the incoming damage of the Physical attacks.]

[Can block all scents of the user from being sensed by others. (Does not adversely affect the user)]

[Can block the chakra of the user from being sensed by others. (Does not adversely affect the user)]

[Negate the effects of Chakra drain techniques of enemy ninjas.]

[The properties of this armor can be changed while in use. Can Mimic the Mana cloak ability and turn the user invisible. To activate this ability an additional 50 MP will be required.]

Daichi stealthily moved through the dungeon with the Mana Armor skill activated. His stealth skill was also active and thus no dungeon ninja could sense the gamer ninja's presence.

'With this my combat abilities will have a boost and I won't take much damage. If any enemy tries to take my chakra I can activate this skill and block the drain effect. I'll need to extensively test this skill as well but I don't have much Mana left.'

Daichi cut down each enemy he came across and various skills that haven't leveled up in a while got a boost. Due to being in stealth mode the Title 'Assassin' was activated and the deadly skill 'Fated to Perish' activated multiple times allowing Daichi to kill his enemies in one strike each.

[Skill Stealth has leveled up.]

[Skill Vital Strike has leveled up.]

[Skill Killing Intent has leveled up.]

[+875 Exp.]

[+131.2 Exp.]

Enemies killed: [709/1125]

The gamer ninja let go of the body Armor skill and looked at the final skill he created in the dungeon.

[Mind Drain - Active(LV. 01): This is an active skill that can only be used on other intelligent creatures on the same level as humans. This skill allows the user to absorb the Mana energy from other intelligent creatures and increase one's own Mana reserve. This skill can be used to permanently increase the Wisdom and Intelligent stats.]

[The user must have physical contact with the target's head for 5 seconds for the skill to activate. Certain knowledge possessed by the target can be gained during the use of this skill.

MP cost: 25MP/Activation.]

'Time to replenish my reserves. I need to see if I can activate this skill in tandem with Life Return.'

Daichi had observed various people from ordinary civilians to various ranked ninjas before entering the dungeon. 'Civilians have at most 40 or 50 MP reserves. The Mana an average Chunin level ninja would have is around 250 and for Jonin that number increased to 500 or 600. But the Yamanaka clan ninjas have higher than usual MP reserves. But it seems none of them can use or are even aware of this energy. A good thing for me I guess.'

The boy moved around the dungeon and targeted an enemy that was alone. Daichi attacked and quickly disabled and immobilized him. He placed his hands on the enemy's head and 5 seconds later the Mind Drain skill was activated.

[Skill Mind Drain is activated]

5 more seconds later another notification popped up.

[Skill Life Return is activated]

'Yes! I can use the two skills at the same time and there isn't any conflict. Damn! I should have created the Mind Drain before going into the other dungeon… Oh well. Hindsight is 20/20 I guess.'

[+1 Vitality]

[+250 HP]

[+1 Intelligence]

[+270 MP]

[+1 Stamina]

[+300 SP]

.

[+720 Exp.]

[+108 Exp.]

Enemies killed: [710/1125]

[Skill Mind Drain has leveled up.]

'Ok. That's enough for today. It seems my mental fatigue accumulates faster when I use Mana skills. Hmm… This problem should be solved with higher stats in INT and WIS.'

Daichi activated the Mana Armor one more time and quickly exited the dungeon.

'I finally have a way to move around the village and avoid detection. I don't need Atamagai's cloak anymore for this.'

Daichi quietly exited the academy and made his way to the training ground where he had created a clone that was meditating. 'Since I'm only gone for less than 4 hours the chances of the clone getting into trouble and popping are slim. Still, I should be careful.'

Daichi thought about the reasons why he created the 4 Mana techniques. 'The plunderer skill activated multiple times but all I got is weak level ninjutsu and no hidden jutsu… If I'm going to raid Orochimaru's base then I'll need to increase my stealth abilities to a whole new degree. I need to prepare as much as I can before I make my move. I only got one shot and I need to make it count.'

Daichi reached the training ground and used the Mana scout skill to see if anyone was watching. Sensing nobody nearby Daichi made his way to the clone and lightly tapped him on the shoulder in a certain pattern. The clone got up as if there was nothing out of the ordinary and made his way to the river running through the training ground. Daichi followed after his shadow clone and the two disappeared into the water.

'The clone will go into the river and disperse once it reaches the bottom and I'll emerge from the water in his place. There is no such thing as being overly cautious. Especially in this world.'

The real Daichi emerged from the river and quickly got himself dried up. 'I should take a nap. Need to rest and recharge.'

—-

Hokage Tower.

"I'm sorry Kakashi. I will have to reject your nomination this time as well." Hiruzen said with a sigh.

Kakashi slightly narrowed his eyes but he didn't speak any more. There were small murmurs from the other Jonins as well but nobody questioned the kage's decision.

"All of you except Kakashi, dismissed." Hiruzen spoke and all the Jonins assembled left the room save for the Copy cat ninja.

"What's wrong Lord Hokage?" Kakashi asked.

"I have new information from Jiraiya that stops me from sending Daichi to the Mist village. There is a brutal civil war going on in that village and based on the information Jiraiya found out, their internal struggle is in a critical state. The rebellion is led by a powerful kunoichi by the name Mei Terumi. She is a powerful ninja and has several strong forces backing her."

Kakashi's eyes widened at that new information. "What about the Mizukage?"

"His bloodthirsty reign has caused some friction amongst his people and based on what Jiraiya found out his power is waning. This Chunin exam is a way for him to show the world that the Mist village is still under his control but that may not be the case for long. I don't want to send one of our most promising ninjas into the middle of such a chaotic situation. Especially since the next Chunin exam will be held here." Hiruzen replied, letting out a puff of smoke.

The Jonin nodded his head to that reasoning. "I see. So that's the case. What about Sasuke Uchiha and Naruto Uzumaki?"

Hiruzen was silent for a moment and then answered. "Young Sasuke hasn't awakened the Sharingan and Naruto is nowhere near capable in using the power of the Tailed beast inside him. So for the moment those two are no different from most other Genins. I will have Tenzo be their instructor. He is the best suited for them till you are free of your current ward. Once you nominate Daichi for the Chunin exam I'll have you take over as the Jonin for their team. I have no doubt that Daichi would only need one chance to pass the Chunin exam and you'll be free to take on Sasuke, Naruto and the third member under you."

The copy cat Jonin nodded and agreed with that plan. "Sir, there is something I wanted to ask."

"What is it?"

"Is there any team from our village participating in the Mist Exam?"

Hiruzen closed his eyes and sighed hearing that question. A few moments later he looked at the Jonin and silently nodded his head. "There are 3 Genin ranked ninjas participating in the Chunin exams in the coming week. One of the Genins is Kabuto Yakushi."

Kakashi sighed hearing that name. 'So he's going to this one as well huh. Must be to make contact with Orochimaru and gain intel on the other villages and shinobi.'

"You approved his request, Lord Hokage?" Kakashi asked his leader.

"Yes. I'm curious to see how long he thinks he can play this charade. The more information he has, the more information I'll be able to extract from him when the time comes. So for the moment he'll move as he does." The Hokage replied calmly but he had a dangerous glint in his eyes.

"Understood Lord Hokage." Kakashi bowed and disappeared while Hiruzen got up from his seat and headed home.


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章節 230: Chapter 230 - Blooming Flood

Daichi and his clones were in training ground three working hard on the final variation of the Rasengan. It had been three weeks since the boy had begun his training there. Since the jutsu had the potential to be on the higher end of destructive nature, Daichi and his clones moved inwards into the training grounds.

Daichi and his Shadow clones were close to completing the Water version of the Rasengan and after hours of grueling work they finally did it.

A clone held a small fast swirling orb of water in his palm. There was a small mist surrounding the jutsu and the clone. The sound of ocean waves could be heard all around. The Water Rasengan was a pure blue sphere of energy with fast rotating currents. Due to the Mist surrounding the jutsu and the user, a small rainbow mirage could be seen around Daichi's palm.

"How is it?" Daichi asked his clone.

"It's heavy like with Earth Nature Rasengan but not to such a huge degree. The rotation and power of the water current in the orb is beyond what I expected. It's moving at such high speeds that it seems to be still..."

The real Daichi nodded. "Alright. Time to test it out."

At that moment another shadow clone stood several meters away from them and the clone holding the Water Rasengan got ready and rushed towards him.

The first holding his position used earth chakra to increase the strength of his defense and waited. Moments later the other clone was in front of his target and slammed the Water Rasengan into the test clone.

The second the Water Style Rasengan made contact with the enemy it expanded to several meters in a spherical vortex of fast moving water currents that completely captured the enemy.

The real Daichi looked on as his clone was completely trapped and immobilized inside the huge water sphere. The next moment he saw the flesh and clothes being torn off his clone before it vanished giving him its memories.

The fast lethal spinning spherical shaped water jutsu bulged and looked as if it was about to explode. And the next second it did. Hundreds of gallons of water poured out from the sphere in all directions. The force of the water current ripped apart and destroyed the ground, trees and boulders in its path. It was as if a small dam had burst and the stored water was rushing forward wiping out everything in its path.

Daichi and his few remaining clones jumped high in the air and landed on the surging current of waves. They steadied themselves and observed the aftereffects of the jutsu. At that moment another person joined them.

Daichi turned towards the newcomer and raised an eyebrow. "When did you get here sensei?"

"A few seconds ago. Just in time to see you test out your new technique." Kakashi nonchalantly replied as he looked around. The Water style Rasengan kept creating more waves of water for several more seconds before disappearing. The entire training ground was underwater with everything near them swept away by the force of the current.

Kakashi looked around and let out a small breath of air. 'It's as if a flood rampaged through here. The power of that jutsu is incredible… So this is what a change in chakra Nature combined with the Rasengan looks like.'

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His attention turned to Daichi and the Jonin was silent for several seconds before he spoke. "You said you had an idea as to what the finished version of the Water style Rasengan would look like. Is this what you expected?"

Daichi nodded his head. "I knew that adding water nature to the jutsu would create something like this… But still…" Daichi looked around and sighed. "I didn't think it would be so strong."

"You used it on your shadow clone. What did it feel when the jutsu made contact with it?" Kakashi asked.

Daichi was as silent as he recalled the memories of the clone. "The moment the jutsu made an impact on me it expanded in an instant, completely trapping me. It was like the water prison jutsu but on a whole different level. I couldn't move no matter how much chakra I used and it didn't matter for long. The sphere of water had fast currents. They were moving at speeds far beyond what the normal eye could catch."

Kakashi was silent as his student described the effects of the new jutsu.

Daichi looked down at his arms and spoke. "Then I felt it. The water inside the sphere started shredding me. It was as if my skin and flesh were being peeled off my bones. My clone vanished the next second." The Genin was silent and then looked at his sensei. "I'm pretty sure that if this Rasengan is used on another person, by the time this jutsu is done only a clean skeleton of the target would be left behind. And that's if the bones aren't crushed and swept away by the torrents of water created afterwards. This is a pretty destructive jutsu that can change the battlefield."

Kakashi looked around and he agreed with his student's assessment. "Such a powerful jutsu. There is no doubt that Daichi just created an S Rank technique. And in just three weeks. Incredible.'

For Daichi several new system notifications appeared at that moment.

[Skill Water Extraction Technique has leveled up.]

[Congratulations. You have successfully trained a skill to its highest level.]

[500 Exp.]

[75 Exp.]

.

[Skill Water Affinity has leveled up.]

[Congratulations. You have successfully trained a skill to its highest level. ]

[500 Exp.]

[75 Exp.]

'Looks like my Water Affinity skill has maxed out. But I haven't completed training the third step of change in chakra nature. But it seems the system has deemed that my Water affinity skill is at its highest degree… Hmm…'

After thinking about it for a few moments Daichi had a theory.

'It seems I only needed to complete part of the third step of change in chakra nature and create a jutsu that combines water chakra and something extremely difficult like the Rasengan for my affinity to reach its highest point… It must be why I only got one level up in other affinity skills when I completed the other Rasengans. I haven't started training in their third step.'

[Water affinity - (Active/Passive)(LV. MAX): Water Release is one of the five basic nature transformations. It is commonly affiliated with Dog hand-seal. Once this skill crosses Level 85 the user can manipulate even the molecular structure of water to create ice or steam. Once this skill crosses Level 90, the user can combine it with other nature affinities which have also crossed Level 90.]

[Effects: ]

[200% Power increase in water attack jutsu.]

[200% Defense Increase in water defense jutsu.]

[99.9% Increase in success when creating water style jutsu. ]

[65% Decrease in Chakra Cost when using water style jutsu.]

'Hmm… My water affinity may have maxed out but there is still room for improvement. With the water extraction technique I've learned to create water from the atmosphere and the nearby plants and I've learned to do it quickly. Now I need to learn to increase the power and volume of the water I need to use in my jutsu. With that the third step will be completed.'

"What are you thinking of Daichi?" Kakashi's voice snapped the Genin out of his thoughts.

Daichi was silent and then decided as a question of his own. "It's the second week of December. The Chunin exams have probably started and I'm still here. Did you not nominate me or is there something else going on?" Daichi asked his teacher.

Kakashi rubbed his hair and sighed hearing that question. 'Lord Hokage didn't exactly say to keep this information a secret from him…' A few moments later Kakashi decided to be honest with the Genin.

"I did nominate you for the Chunin exam. But due to several important reasons your nomination was rejected."

Daichi tilted his head and looked at the silver haired Jonin, confused… "And they are…?"

"The current Chunin exam is taking place in the Hidden Mist village. There is a civil war going on over there and Lord Hokage has decided that it would be best if you wait for 6 more months."

Daichi's eyes slightly widened after hearing that information. 'Right. Mist civil war. That's happening right now huh. Is Mei still leading the rebellion or has there been a butterfly effect? I need to know more. This is the best chance to get more information out of him.'

"Sensei, can you tell me more about the civil war happening in the Mist village? If such a thing is happening then won't the other villages take advantage of the situation. There is potential for this whole thing to get out of hand and become a headache for all the great nations." Daichi looked at his sensei and spoke.

Kakashi sighed and replied. "You don't need to worry about it Daichi. Their conflict won't affect us too much. And the chances of other villages getting involved is slim. For one thing the resources of the Mist village aren't that abundant. And to battle them on their own turf is much harder than you think. Right now I believe the other kages are taking a wait and see approach to the whole thing regarding their village."

"What about the ones fighting the Mizukage? Who is the leader of the rebellion?"

"Based on what Lord Hokage told me, the one leading the rebellion is someone named Mei Terumi. A power kunoichi with dual Kekkei Genkai." Daichi nodded and Kakashi didn't elaborate further.

Daichi thought about the situation and he was glad that his actions hadn't caused any ripples in the Mist village. 'So Mei is leading the rebellion huh. It seems my influence hasn't fucked up canon on their side… That's good. Maybe it's best that I wasn't nominated for the exam this time. I'll be more than prepared for when the next one comes.'

"So what are you going to name your jutsu?" Kakashi asked his student.

At that Daichi just smirked and replied. "Water Style: Blooming Flood."

"Not a bad name."

Daichi opened the skill list and looked at the details of the new jutsu.

[Water Style: Blooming Flood - Active (Lv. 01): This jutsu was created by mixing Water Chakra Nature to the existing jutsu 'Rasengan'. This technique is a powerful destructive jutsu that uses fast water currents as its weapon. There are several variations to this jutsu and the power and destructive capabilities can be altered.]

[Note: Using the fully formed variation of this jutsu can cause damage to the body but a really strong physique or sage jutsu can negate this side effect.]

[Effects:]

[500 Damage points when striking and trapping the enemy in a water prison.]

[Deals an additional 10000% Damage to the enemies trapped in the water prison after 2 seconds. ]

[Destroys internal organs, flesh muscles, chakra coils of the body. ]

[Can expand and increase range according to the user's will.]

[CP cost: 2600 minimum]

'So it won't do much damage for the first couple of seconds but after that there is massive damage dealt. Hmm… As long as it gets the job done I won't complain… Now that I have all the variations of the Rasengan ready, it's time to try that.'

Daichi looked at his teacher who took his book out and was about to walk away. "Hey Kakashi sensei. There is one more thing that I want to try. And I'm going to need your help with it."

"What did you have in mind?"

Daichi had a wide grin as he replied to the question. "Ice Jutsu."

—-------------

Author's Note:

This chapter might look small compared to the rest but that's because the previous several were unusually long chapters. This is a 2k chap and it's easier for me to write a 2k word chapter


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