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It's a great Naruto fanfiction!! I like it!!! 😁👍👍 It have a great plot/storyline and great english/translation.. It shame that this story is stopped/hiatus.. Hope author will continue someday.. I like this kind of story (kingdom/village building).. It always interesting to see how MC/Sasaki will make his village prosperity/advanced.. Love your story author san 😁👍😍😍😍
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I really enjoy it so far. you could do alot with it i hope you add more chapters soon[img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
It’s good in my opinion there are not many village building naruto fanfic’s so When i found About it I was excited that we will get to see one although I don’t see him posting anymore i hope he continues it
This is a great fic and I really can’ wait to see where this goes and I wonder if itatchi will save some Uchia and take them to this new village. I can’t wait for the update. Great work and idea 👊🏾
Excelente, muy buena historia. La verdad no encuentro muchas parecidas. Espero la continúes....................................................
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Mediocre fanfic with badly developed characters. Too much author hand waving going on. It just makes it really bland. The idea has merit but the execution is horrible
Okay I'm not gonna lie I enjoyed your fanfic because of it's concept. It's something new and have not been done before but your writing leaves a lot to be desired, it's plain and to straight forward and you bulldoze through important events, I thought you'd give extra attention too event's like when he recruits his first ninjas (three uchiha kids and former hot spring Village ninjas ) but no he basically says join me then they magically join him without any reason what so ever but I still believe this has a lot of potential so keep going and try to refine your writing skills -From a brand new fan😁
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It's a great Naruto fanfiction!! I like it!!! 😁👍👍 It have a great plot/storyline and great english/translation.. It shame that this story is stopped/hiatus.. Hope author will continue someday.. I like this kind of story (kingdom/village building).. It always interesting to see how MC/Sasaki will make his village prosperity/advanced.. Love your story author san 😁👍😍😍😍
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I really enjoy it so far. you could do alot with it i hope you add more chapters soon[img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
It’s good in my opinion there are not many village building naruto fanfic’s so When i found About it I was excited that we will get to see one although I don’t see him posting anymore i hope he continues it
This is a great fic and I really can’ wait to see where this goes and I wonder if itatchi will save some Uchia and take them to this new village. I can’t wait for the update. Great work and idea 👊🏾
Excelente, muy buena historia. La verdad no encuentro muchas parecidas. Espero la continúes....................................................
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Mediocre fanfic with badly developed characters. Too much author hand waving going on. It just makes it really bland. The idea has merit but the execution is horrible
Okay I'm not gonna lie I enjoyed your fanfic because of it's concept. It's something new and have not been done before but your writing leaves a lot to be desired, it's plain and to straight forward and you bulldoze through important events, I thought you'd give extra attention too event's like when he recruits his first ninjas (three uchiha kids and former hot spring Village ninjas ) but no he basically says join me then they magically join him without any reason what so ever but I still believe this has a lot of potential so keep going and try to refine your writing skills -From a brand new fan😁
moreeeeeeeeeeeeee.......................................................................................................................................
moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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