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Best I've read for a while, have all my powerstones. New favorite ff MC, he actually has a personality and all, not like the rest of perfect robot mc's. Can you believe it?
Volvio? .....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
This story gave me a rather mixed feeling, it have great start but it gradually become boring and boring to the point where I can't help but to yawn.
Here Lies: An amazing OP fanfict that sadly drop. Pity, it was unique and amazing, the characters manages to shine thrthrough even with it's short lifespan. Perfect in both effort and creativity of the characters.
Se murió el autor? ...............................................................................................................................
Hijo de puta vuelve aqui y acaba la novela como un hombre ahora mismo joder ........................
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Is it just me or when it said "Jake-Jake no mi" I immediately thought of Jake the dog. (From adventure time.)---------------------------------------------------
Great novel, was put off due to him having the jacket fruit but, I’m happy I stuck with it. Definitely worth the read.
It's good from the start, I really like story and the characters. But the author ruined it's story in the minion island arc. It's disappointing, he helped law to get ope2 fruit even he know it's so risky yet he didn't gain advantage or benefits only promises. Heck even law given asylum to marine and MC lost a crew member. Author portray the mc a smart guy and tactician but suddenly becomes dumb. If the author recruit law I will not dropped this ff, yet now I'm to cliche for the plot even though he awakened conquerors haki.
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i did not get why mc want to help law getting the ope ope no mi??? the idiot lost a crew member for nothing >_> -----------------------------------------
why there is no author shameles review? I eat the brief brief no mi it can neutralized your seven emotion and six desire. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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for other people it might be good but for me the jokes don't go in and the storyline is less interesting ,World Background five star [img=exp]
I hate the choice of fruit when I saw it kidd's fruit I said this will be awesome after that you make me disapointed with a trash fruit. I'm not a fan of op characters but also I don't like this kind of weak fruit
*chefs kiss* perfection, this is one of the best stories I have ever gotten to read writing quality- I am no expert there are little mistakes here and there but they don't affect the flow at all like words twice or something like that, 5 stars. stability of updates- the author keeps being consistent and sometimes publishes two chapters a day so 5 stars story development- one of the best aspects of this fanfic is its development and story progressing, not only nothing is forced but every little change to the world of one piece has ripples that come later, it gives the same feeling as reading one piece again where the world slowly builds around you. 5/5 sorry I can't give 10/5 character design- I'll tell the truth there aren't a lot of OC's if at all, but the characters stay true to what is shown in the anime. I would give 4/5 but this story deserves its 5 stars lol world background- well... its one piece
Amazing story ! thanks author!![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Jacket. Very interesting use of fruit. Isnt insta op like most novels. Everything is thought out well. Jacket. Very interesting use of fruit. Isnt insta op like most novels. Everything is thought out well. Jacket. Very interesting use of fruit. Isnt insta op like most novels. Everything is thought out well.
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I will be open it pretty good writing but the second I read that the main character has eaten the jacket fruit I lost all interest into it. The lame power with not many if any good applications. I'm not a fan of op character fic but on the other hand I'm not the biggest fan of the story like The Bite either. So the story just doesn't hit my personal taste. I read until chapter 8 but still cant find my self reading further. To all the people who enjoy this story have fun and the author continue writing it not a bad story just doesn't suit my taste.
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💯💯💯💯💯💯💯👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌 Keep up the good work 💯💯💯💯💯💯✌️✌️✌️👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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One of the best fan fic, rex has beain and comedy and true heart of being pirate. Maybe his justice is a bit more than i hope, it’s still okay. Al chapters are long, serious talk. It just mqybe author has many problems the update is not that consistent. Be qell mr author!!
Best I've read for a while, have all my powerstones. New favorite ff MC, he actually has a personality and all, not like the rest of perfect robot mc's. Can you believe it?
Volvio? .....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
This story gave me a rather mixed feeling, it have great start but it gradually become boring and boring to the point where I can't help but to yawn.
Here Lies: An amazing OP fanfict that sadly drop. Pity, it was unique and amazing, the characters manages to shine thrthrough even with it's short lifespan. Perfect in both effort and creativity of the characters.
Se murió el autor? ...............................................................................................................................
Hijo de puta vuelve aqui y acaba la novela como un hombre ahora mismo joder ........................
Great fanfic ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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drop when he laugh jakekekekekekekeke drop when he laugh jakekekekekekekeke drop when he laugh jakekekekekekekeke drop when he laugh jakekekekekekekeke drop when he laugh jakekekekekekekeke
Is it just me or when it said "Jake-Jake no mi" I immediately thought of Jake the dog. (From adventure time.)---------------------------------------------------
Great novel, was put off due to him having the jacket fruit but, I’m happy I stuck with it. Definitely worth the read.
It's good from the start, I really like story and the characters. But the author ruined it's story in the minion island arc. It's disappointing, he helped law to get ope2 fruit even he know it's so risky yet he didn't gain advantage or benefits only promises. Heck even law given asylum to marine and MC lost a crew member. Author portray the mc a smart guy and tactician but suddenly becomes dumb. If the author recruit law I will not dropped this ff, yet now I'm to cliche for the plot even though he awakened conquerors haki.
POGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOG
i did not get why mc want to help law getting the ope ope no mi??? the idiot lost a crew member for nothing >_> -----------------------------------------
why there is no author shameles review? I eat the brief brief no mi it can neutralized your seven emotion and six desire. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
More more More more More more More more More more More more More more More more More more More more More more More more More more More more More more More more
for other people it might be good but for me the jokes don't go in and the storyline is less interesting ,World Background five star [img=exp]
I hate the choice of fruit when I saw it kidd's fruit I said this will be awesome after that you make me disapointed with a trash fruit. I'm not a fan of op characters but also I don't like this kind of weak fruit
*chefs kiss* perfection, this is one of the best stories I have ever gotten to read writing quality- I am no expert there are little mistakes here and there but they don't affect the flow at all like words twice or something like that, 5 stars. stability of updates- the author keeps being consistent and sometimes publishes two chapters a day so 5 stars story development- one of the best aspects of this fanfic is its development and story progressing, not only nothing is forced but every little change to the world of one piece has ripples that come later, it gives the same feeling as reading one piece again where the world slowly builds around you. 5/5 sorry I can't give 10/5 character design- I'll tell the truth there aren't a lot of OC's if at all, but the characters stay true to what is shown in the anime. I would give 4/5 but this story deserves its 5 stars lol world background- well... its one piece
Amazing story ! thanks author!![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Jacket. Very interesting use of fruit. Isnt insta op like most novels. Everything is thought out well. Jacket. Very interesting use of fruit. Isnt insta op like most novels. Everything is thought out well. Jacket. Very interesting use of fruit. Isnt insta op like most novels. Everything is thought out well.
揭示劇透 I will be open it pretty good writing but the second I read that the main character has eaten the jacket fruit I lost all interest into it. The lame power with not many if any good applications. I'm not a fan of op character fic but on the other hand I'm not the biggest fan of the story like The Bite either. So the story just doesn't hit my personal taste. I read until chapter 8 but still cant find my self reading further. To all the people who enjoy this story have fun and the author continue writing it not a bad story just doesn't suit my taste.
POGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOGPOG
Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work
💯💯💯💯💯💯💯👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌 Keep up the good work 💯💯💯💯💯💯✌️✌️✌️👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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One of the best fan fic, rex has beain and comedy and true heart of being pirate. Maybe his justice is a bit more than i hope, it’s still okay. Al chapters are long, serious talk. It just mqybe author has many problems the update is not that consistent. Be qell mr author!!