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Saya suka alur cerita ini..dan saya harap pengembangan ceritanya akan semakin lebih baik untuk kedepannya... Ditunggu kelanjutannya ya author sama Hehehehe,.........
The mc should be an outer god but he was born at high class. He was born with his powers locked which doesn't make sense because one of his wishes was that his body and soul could handle his powers and that the system would help him control them so why are they locked? I should be called Born in dxd with outer god powers because he's not an outer god he just has there powers. This review doesn't have anything to do with the story telling or writing quality and such.
Honestly, what drew me to this story was the original title of this story, because I am a huge fan of H.P. Lovecraft's works, and so far the MC is a perfect combination of DxD and Lovecraft.
For the first time, the Ancient gods appear in the story "The Punishing Fate over Sarnath", where Lovecraft first calls the deities "Ancient Gods" (Eng. Old Gods), and then "Elder Gods" (English Elder Gods). In subsequent works: "The Call of Cthulhu", "The Horror of Dunwich", "The Whisperer in the Dark", "The Ridges of Madness" and "The Shadow over Innsmouth" — Lovecraft uses the name "The Ancients" (Eng. Old Ones) and "Great Old Ones" (Eng. Great Old Ones). In the stories "The Last Experience" and "Buried with the Pharaohs" Lovecraft uses the name "Ancient Gods". In Lovecraft's work, the "Elder Gods" are opposed to both the "Great Ancients" and the "Outer Gods". Smith often referred to Lovecraft's Ancient gods along with his "Outer Gods", ruled by Azathoth, the "blind idiot God" who occupies a position in the center of infinity.
Best Fanfic i've read in a while........................................-_-...................................................................
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Well written. It’s really good, countinue with your work👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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I need more of this!NEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEED MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤 YOU SHALL GIVE ME MORE !!!!!
Interesting dxd fanfic 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
First of all , if he is omnipotent, he can do everything. So he should already be able to control all his power... It's just baffling how disconnected this character is with the powers and identity he represents. His story simply disgusts the concept of mystery from lovecraft's horror tales.
This is the best Story I have read in a long time, it is also in my Top 15 list. Just hoping you will continue to write the story. Can't wait for canon to start, or is it all AU. But doesn't matter it's the best story, keep it up.
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good job, keep it up. though, i would recommend you show him in a battle where he has to try. aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Hoh? Intriguing... I shall watch your career with great interest. You got me hooked on 'Azathoth'. ●‿●●‿●●‿●●‿●●‿●●‿●●‿●●‿●●‿●●‿●●‿●●‿●●‿●●‿●●‿●●‿●●‿●●‿●
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More chapters author san please quickly update chapters it is frustrating to wait for so much time for a chapters please increase the speed of update
Someone who finds comfort when reading Lovecraftian Mythos... Definitely a normal human.....................................................
Hope there are not like 1 million wives or something...maximum 25.. more and its too much.......................................................................But it is nice........................
Good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good
••••••••••••••••••••••••Nice dxd fic•••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••• ••••••••••••••••I hope this fic continues until the end••••••••••••••••• •••and hopefully the author is always enthusiastic to write this story••••
Really good story so far can't wait to see what happens next but could the updates be a bit more frequent that's all for me.................
have not read it yet but am shure it is good also there better be overlord I don't see much of that so it would be good to see another......
It was good while it lasted 👍 ......................................................................................................................................................................................................
Saya suka alur cerita ini..dan saya harap pengembangan ceritanya akan semakin lebih baik untuk kedepannya... Ditunggu kelanjutannya ya author sama Hehehehe,.........
The mc should be an outer god but he was born at high class. He was born with his powers locked which doesn't make sense because one of his wishes was that his body and soul could handle his powers and that the system would help him control them so why are they locked? I should be called Born in dxd with outer god powers because he's not an outer god he just has there powers. This review doesn't have anything to do with the story telling or writing quality and such.
Honestly, what drew me to this story was the original title of this story, because I am a huge fan of H.P. Lovecraft's works, and so far the MC is a perfect combination of DxD and Lovecraft.
For the first time, the Ancient gods appear in the story "The Punishing Fate over Sarnath", where Lovecraft first calls the deities "Ancient Gods" (Eng. Old Gods), and then "Elder Gods" (English Elder Gods). In subsequent works: "The Call of Cthulhu", "The Horror of Dunwich", "The Whisperer in the Dark", "The Ridges of Madness" and "The Shadow over Innsmouth" — Lovecraft uses the name "The Ancients" (Eng. Old Ones) and "Great Old Ones" (Eng. Great Old Ones). In the stories "The Last Experience" and "Buried with the Pharaohs" Lovecraft uses the name "Ancient Gods". In Lovecraft's work, the "Elder Gods" are opposed to both the "Great Ancients" and the "Outer Gods". Smith often referred to Lovecraft's Ancient gods along with his "Outer Gods", ruled by Azathoth, the "blind idiot God" who occupies a position in the center of infinity.
Best Fanfic i've read in a while........................................-_-...................................................................
ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
Well written. It’s really good, countinue with your work👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
keep up tha good work author [img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
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I need more of this!NEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEED MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤 YOU SHALL GIVE ME MORE !!!!!
Interesting dxd fanfic 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
First of all , if he is omnipotent, he can do everything. So he should already be able to control all his power... It's just baffling how disconnected this character is with the powers and identity he represents. His story simply disgusts the concept of mystery from lovecraft's horror tales.
This is the best Story I have read in a long time, it is also in my Top 15 list. Just hoping you will continue to write the story. Can't wait for canon to start, or is it all AU. But doesn't matter it's the best story, keep it up.
[img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
good job, keep it up. though, i would recommend you show him in a battle where he has to try. aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Hoh? Intriguing... I shall watch your career with great interest. You got me hooked on 'Azathoth'. ●‿●●‿●●‿●●‿●●‿●●‿●●‿●●‿●●‿●●‿●●‿●●‿●●‿●●‿●●‿●●‿●●‿●●‿●
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More chapters author san please quickly update chapters it is frustrating to wait for so much time for a chapters please increase the speed of update
Someone who finds comfort when reading Lovecraftian Mythos... Definitely a normal human.....................................................
Hope there are not like 1 million wives or something...maximum 25.. more and its too much.......................................................................But it is nice........................
Good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good
••••••••••••••••••••••••Nice dxd fic•••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••• ••••••••••••••••I hope this fic continues until the end••••••••••••••••• •••and hopefully the author is always enthusiastic to write this story••••
Really good story so far can't wait to see what happens next but could the updates be a bit more frequent that's all for me.................
have not read it yet but am shure it is good also there better be overlord I don't see much of that so it would be good to see another......
It was good while it lasted 👍 ......................................................................................................................................................................................................