/ Book&Literature / The Mortal God of Olympus
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Born to an Archangel and a God, I always knew my story wasn't going to be simple. Especially in a world full of rival gods, scheming Devils, vengeful Angels, and monsters who would love nothing more than to chew upon my bones. But hey, atleast I had a trusty Gamer system by my side. I was literally born to be overpowered, what could possibly go wrong? Dark Mc, Gamer Mc/OC Mc
*This is a crossover fic between Percy Jackson series and highschool Dxd. I'm also posting this on fanfiction site under the same name.
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So apparently a demigod + angel+devil hybrid is innately weaker than a basic demigod.. Also the scaling is more inconsistant than the power levels in fairy tail... he gives a list a tiers with the associated levels... but you can have levels lower than the tiers that they were assigned to?
The story as a nice premise with everything needed, mc with intersting character (antihero, learn from mistakes and smart). The mc is an hybrid of three races god/devil/angel and with a heavily nerfed gamer system so everyone would expect a somewhat powerful mc but it isn't the case since compared to other we can see how weak he is but it's explained with the "mortal soul" the mc has and it's okay since he grow powerfull extremely fast compared to his peers. Here the major turnoff of this fanfic not the power system wich is ok even if the idea of exponencial stat from tier to tier isn't the best since 100 point in agility for a tier 2 is like 500 to a tier 0 stats like can't be translated well ( Tier 0 : normal human, tier 9 : super devil, tier 10 elder god and above maybe Ophis, Great Red and Tryhexa) but the powerlevel of the characters doesn't make sense or follow a total different route of the canon. For exemple Zeus is Tier 10 but the strongests in Heaven are tier 7 (since the system know aparently what highest tier any race as reach) even weaker than Dyonisos the god of WINE seriously WINE since is he is tier 8 in god form, also Sirzech and Ajuka are at the same tier as Hera but the worst and most infuriating is the demigod at the camp since praticly all of them are born at tier 4 so when the mc arrive and had work/trained plus farmed xp is tier 3 don't forget he is a hybrid of three realy strong race but no his sister who done nothing her whole life is tier 5 and had biger stats like what. Sorry for gramar mistake since I'm french.
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the story is amazing i recommend it..this is one of the most wholesome fics...I like how you develope the power of MC even though he has a gamer ssystem..not too fast but not too slow..Justperfect
It's alright but it has like too many jumps in logic, like reading the first 2 chapters where hard on me because of my disbelief,So yeah I do suggest people to give it a chance, some might like It some won't.
I haven't had such interesting reading for a while, a really great job. 🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤
Well, I start reading chapter 2 and if the protagonist does not kill Zeus in the worst way, I stop reading this and put a star on it, because if I could put zero it would be better
this story is good so far and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will progress. please keep up the good work cuz I don't want see this dropped.
I HAVE TO RATE THIS FANFIC WITH ONLY ONE STARS THE UPDATES ARE SO WILD AND UNPREDICTABLE. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
I like the story[img=recommend][img=recommend] But my problem is the tier system Zeus is weaker Than Great Red , Great Red Is The Top 1 Strongest being in dxd and Zeus isn't even in the top 10 strongest being in dxd and Great Red can easily destroy Zeus yet they are the same tier and sirzechs can beat Zeus yet it's says that sirzechs is weaker Than Zeus. (sry for bad English,English isn't My native language) Good story though[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Gabriel turning into a street demon does not make much sense, the truth. (WIKI) Stray Devils are Reincarnated Devils who have diverted away from their masters for their own selfish desires. Without their masters to keep their powers in check, they become a great threat if their powers go beyond their control. The Devils take this case very seriously, and any Devil who becomes a Stray will usually be killed on the spot.
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I Really Like The Where The Story Is Going. My Only Problem Of This Is The Power/Tier Level Of The FF.The Tier/Power Level Of The FF Is Messed Up Because Sirzechs In DxD Can Easily Win A Battle Against Hades And The Dxd Wiki Says That Hades Is Stronger Than Zeus And Also The Update Stability Of This FF Is Wild. Ps. I Still Like The Story So Pls Don't Drop The FF. Thx
You have already lost me. This story is nothing more than the Author's Power Fantasy. Become God of the Bible's Successor while ignoring the fact that this guy is the same as the devil, if not worse, killing brothers and uncles, not to mention being driven by his desires like an Olympian yet another reason God of the Bible would never accept. God's system should be more powerful than a mere minor god and send True Longinus to the next inheritor. Hera would never cheat because her very divinity is marriage. Then there is MC's Hipocrypsi, who complains and insults his family, saying he is not any different and what is up with keeping his mortal soul, implying that it can survive the changes of his Races, namely Greek God, Angel (should be Fallen Angel), and Devil.
I like how the mc is developing in the story but really why is he literally stupid.
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Very interesting FanFiction story I've ever read it has amazing background, logic about power in that world and most importantly about mc personality development and power development from weak to strong that in my opinion it makes sense and make it very interesting to read.
This is a great story to read but ill Admit I absolutely HATE the power scale of this one, I don't expect it to be perfect just makes me wanna bang my head against the wall. still though get drunk and read this you'll do just fine
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卷 1
- 1 My story begins 3 years ago
- 2 My Story Begins–Pt.2 3 years ago
- 3 Chapter 3 3 years ago
- 4 Chapter 4 3 years ago
- 5 Chapter 5 3 years ago
- 6 Chapter 6 3 years ago
- 7 Chapter 7 3 years ago
- 8 Chapter 8 3 years ago
- 9 Chapter 9 3 years ago
- 10 Chapter 10 3 years ago
- 11 Chapter 11 3 years ago
- 12 Chapter 12 3 years ago
- 13 Chapter 13 3 years ago
- 14 Chapter 14 3 years ago
- 15 Chapter 15 3 years ago
- 16 Chapter 16 3 years ago
- 17 Chapter 17 3 years ago
- 18 Chapter 18 3 years ago
- 19 Chapter 19 3 years ago
- 20 Chapter 20 3 years ago
- 21 Chapter 21 3 years ago
- 22 Chapter 22 3 years ago
- 23 Chapter 23 3 years ago
- 24 Chapter 24 3 years ago
- 25 Chapter 25 3 years ago
- 26 Chapter 26 3 years ago
- 27 Chapter 27 3 years ago
- 28 Chapter 28 3 years ago
- 29 Chapter 29 3 years ago
- 30 Chapter 30 3 years ago
- 31 Chapter 31 3 years ago
- 32 Chapter 32 3 years ago
- 33 Chapter 33 2 years ago
- 34 Chapter 34 2 years ago
- 35 Chapter 35 2 years ago
- 36 Chapter 36 2 years ago
- 37 Chapter 37 2 years ago
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- 39 Chapter 39 2 years ago
- 40 Chapter 40 2 years ago
- 41 Chapter 41 2 years ago
- 42 Chapter 42 2 years ago
- 43 Chapter 43 (R-18) 2 years ago
- 44 Chapter 44 2 years ago
- 45 Chapter 45 2 years ago
- 46 Chapter 46 2 years ago
- 47 Chapter 47 2 years ago
- 48 Chapter 48 2 years ago
- 49 Chapter 49 2 years ago
- 50 Chapter 50 2 years ago
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- 70 Chapter 70 1 years ago
- 71 Chapter 71 1 years ago
- 72 Chapter 72 3 months ago
- 73 Chapter 73 3 months ago
- 74 Chapter 74 3 months ago
- 75 Chapter 75 3 months ago
this story is amazing. it has a interesting crossover of highschool dxd and percy jackson, I which mc is so of a Gabriel and Zeus born with gamer system. mc isn't your avarage goody two shoe mc who helps every stranger he sees, no has a mentality of a god and isn't merciful towards others and doesn't care for mortal's and there life. here sacred gears aren't op and have restrictions like they should have and the demigods are much stronger than there percy jackson counterparts but have limits of how much they could grow(high class for normal demigods and ultimateclass for big 3), but mc doesn't have those restrictions and is growing stronger and stronger. overall this story has potential to be on top. just read it till the latest chapter's you will love it, trust me it's worth it.