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My Sword Reject the Ninja Path Mi espada rechaza el camino ninja [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
it is a good story to those who want a good first FanFic the story is not over complicated and has a good story line if I wanted to give a good first FanFic to someone this will be good
One of the best Naruto and Bleach fics I've seen. It took me a while to finish because of school but I ended up doing speed run Now I'll be going to the author's other fics, see you later
What do you mean "My Sword reject the Ninja Path"? Bro, I was still getting confused.
I read 45 chapters and the story was a repeat of canon with the MC just being there and causing no butterflies. He just saved 3 characters, and without any side effect. So much time wasted reading this... Not all is bad, the author is good writing when they try.
a rehash, spends half of each chapter describing the appearance of an already known character
Still couldn’t get this fic out of my head days after reading what a great one
if you like pointless MCs and rereading the same story a million times then this is the story for you.
A great story mixing bleach aspects with Naruto. This is not one of those Chinese fanfiction with weird names for characters that change with every chapter. Hopefully it doesn't change to a harem( I am at chapter 80)
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i cant tell you about the world background or update stability or even character design or story development because i cant get past chapter 2 because the writing quality is so bad so for every thing i cant talk about i gave it 5 stars but this is a warning if you don't wanna drop brain cells don't read this.
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is this a FF ? .... idk bro it's just nothing to be honest ..... why was he reincarnated in the first place ? .... this is just the original but with a Pov of a mob.
from my opinion, for this type fanfiction also its plot or story, he's OP and the only one true of Shinigami, also not from the start, but yeah at the last he is, even in the last fighting, the MC's said it maybe at chapter > 175 or something (at first he vs Obito then vs Shinigami (fake one)) he's only using 20% of his capacity, but if you're reading this comment, many people said that author used many scenes from the anime or manga its self or like copy paste from that sources, is also true so yeah.. that's all from me
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Я окончательно разочаровался в этом фанфике... уйти из деревни что бы создать команду... правда? Уйти от девушки которая тебе нравиться... СЕРЬЕЗНО? Он немного отбитый... Он мог бы и дальше работать в деревне, но он выбрал как трус сбежать от ответственности. Рассказал бы о своих силах Цунаде и был бы её анбу или что-то вроде этого, но то как движется сюжет какое-то дерьмо.
well...it started off quite good, but at some point the mc just turned too op. can you imagine a 10-year-old killing bunches of enemies like ants.... and he can even beat bijuu, i kid you not.
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To be honest, didn't think it would be this good but welp here we are. Now its become my one of the books that i definetely want to re read.Tops to the author as the writing was done great, comedy was well funny I guess. well a great book overall and a must read.
author are you gonna continue this in boruto series? ............................................................................................
Say hello to the one who... Hello!! Are we going to review this? Yes, we are!! Can we just give it 5-star and left? No!! But we just did... LOL!!
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Though late, i'll rate this story anyway. i found a lot of people complaining that our mc didn't change the canon at all. but i disagree. after the chunin arc, there's a lot of things that changed. i mean there's a lot. i wont name it because i don't want to spoil the story. most people probably not even halfway of the story and then starts complaining like a karen. Female heroine won't be a nobody. THIS IS NOT A HAREM.(hint: it's an uzumaki)The romance is good. the history of the world is well made. you need to read until the latest arc to understand it completely, but that's what makes this story interesting. I HIGHLY SUGGEST THAT YOU READ THE STORY FIRST. people's opinions differ from one another. so you may like it or hate it. who knows. all I'm saying is to give this story a chance.
It was interesting for me to read at least more than half of the story, but some delusional moments, like a wall of shame and a platypus, infuriated me, and in the last chapters I kept waiting for the GG to finally participate normally, but too much attention wasted on minor characters, and patience is over. Sorry, but this is the end of the fanfic for me.
I just don't like the Kurama clan girl. So i hope it can have a little Harem. Ino maybe. Or/and Samui. Oh Karin, i find here nice. For the rest. I knida like it. I always like the Bleach elements in a Naruto Fanfic. I find Samurais in Naruto a bit lame imho
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Massively enjoyed! Would recomend to any fans of bleach and Naruto, clever blending of elements
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it is a good story to those who want a good first FanFic the story is not over complicated and has a good story line if I wanted to give a good first FanFic to someone this will be good
One of the best Naruto and Bleach fics I've seen. It took me a while to finish because of school but I ended up doing speed run Now I'll be going to the author's other fics, see you later
What do you mean "My Sword reject the Ninja Path"? Bro, I was still getting confused.
I read 45 chapters and the story was a repeat of canon with the MC just being there and causing no butterflies. He just saved 3 characters, and without any side effect. So much time wasted reading this... Not all is bad, the author is good writing when they try.
a rehash, spends half of each chapter describing the appearance of an already known character
Still couldn’t get this fic out of my head days after reading what a great one
if you like pointless MCs and rereading the same story a million times then this is the story for you.
A great story mixing bleach aspects with Naruto. This is not one of those Chinese fanfiction with weird names for characters that change with every chapter. Hopefully it doesn't change to a harem( I am at chapter 80)
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i cant tell you about the world background or update stability or even character design or story development because i cant get past chapter 2 because the writing quality is so bad so for every thing i cant talk about i gave it 5 stars but this is a warning if you don't wanna drop brain cells don't read this.
a good fanfiction in a while 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I wish there was more stories like this. .................................................. .................................................. ..................................................
is this a FF ? .... idk bro it's just nothing to be honest ..... why was he reincarnated in the first place ? .... this is just the original but with a Pov of a mob.
from my opinion, for this type fanfiction also its plot or story, he's OP and the only one true of Shinigami, also not from the start, but yeah at the last he is, even in the last fighting, the MC's said it maybe at chapter > 175 or something (at first he vs Obito then vs Shinigami (fake one)) he's only using 20% of his capacity, but if you're reading this comment, many people said that author used many scenes from the anime or manga its self or like copy paste from that sources, is also true so yeah.. that's all from me
揭示劇透 Я окончательно разочаровался в этом фанфике... уйти из деревни что бы создать команду... правда? Уйти от девушки которая тебе нравиться... СЕРЬЕЗНО? Он немного отбитый... Он мог бы и дальше работать в деревне, но он выбрал как трус сбежать от ответственности. Рассказал бы о своих силах Цунаде и был бы её анбу или что-то вроде этого, но то как движется сюжет какое-то дерьмо.
well...it started off quite good, but at some point the mc just turned too op. can you imagine a 10-year-old killing bunches of enemies like ants.... and he can even beat bijuu, i kid you not.
揭示劇透 To be honest, didn't think it would be this good but welp here we are. Now its become my one of the books that i definetely want to re read.Tops to the author as the writing was done great, comedy was well funny I guess. well a great book overall and a must read.
author are you gonna continue this in boruto series? ............................................................................................
Say hello to the one who... Hello!! Are we going to review this? Yes, we are!! Can we just give it 5-star and left? No!! But we just did... LOL!!
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Though late, i'll rate this story anyway. i found a lot of people complaining that our mc didn't change the canon at all. but i disagree. after the chunin arc, there's a lot of things that changed. i mean there's a lot. i wont name it because i don't want to spoil the story. most people probably not even halfway of the story and then starts complaining like a karen. Female heroine won't be a nobody. THIS IS NOT A HAREM.(hint: it's an uzumaki)The romance is good. the history of the world is well made. you need to read until the latest arc to understand it completely, but that's what makes this story interesting. I HIGHLY SUGGEST THAT YOU READ THE STORY FIRST. people's opinions differ from one another. so you may like it or hate it. who knows. all I'm saying is to give this story a chance.
It was interesting for me to read at least more than half of the story, but some delusional moments, like a wall of shame and a platypus, infuriated me, and in the last chapters I kept waiting for the GG to finally participate normally, but too much attention wasted on minor characters, and patience is over. Sorry, but this is the end of the fanfic for me.
I just don't like the Kurama clan girl. So i hope it can have a little Harem. Ino maybe. Or/and Samui. Oh Karin, i find here nice. For the rest. I knida like it. I always like the Bleach elements in a Naruto Fanfic. I find Samurais in Naruto a bit lame imho
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Massively enjoyed! Would recomend to any fans of bleach and Naruto, clever blending of elements