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Such a great and favourable story I read it till the end.It's not like some other novel which has some OP character that came out of nowhere.It clearly depicts the MCs struggles to build up his power and complex relationships though I hoped that it could have done somemore chapters explaining the situations of the other characters before the end.But surely withpouta doubt this the best novel I have read
Hello, can I translate your work for Russians? .................. Here you need 140 characters, don’t pay attention.
I've erased moe horniness than thou could aye imagine. over a million bonks, directly towards the scalp. i hast written this book to share mine chronicles. so please, reader, do not nut 'i november
I haven't actually read the novel yet but I have some bad news... You've activated my Trap Card
Omg best thing i have read in a while Also for EXP EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM
*Sigh...*I didn't notice that you need coins to continue to read the story. Man, just blue balled myself there. This is a fucking good story, I haven't remember the last time I laughed so hard on a story.
Although I dropped this because I couldn’t stand the grammar errors, I really appreciate this story. My dog had to be put down yesterday and I needed something simple and lighthearted to take my mind off of everything and this story helped me a lot with that. Thank you.
I will rate it a three for now since I haven't read the book yet but I expect it to be at the very least decent since it is from the author of the magician of sound
At first I started reading this because of the fact that it seemed to be based off a meme, but I really liked it and have been supporting the story for a while now the best I can, but overall I would definitely recommend this to people who like memes, funny novels, and bonks.
yessssss cute doggo shall delivery the legendary bonk <▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️
Writing quality - 5 star Updating stability - 5 star Story development - 5 star Character design - 5 star World background - 5 star Overall - 5 star
I cried at the part where Albert said "It's bonking time" and started bonking everywhere... Truly one of the best novels ever created of all time.
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MY EXISTENCE IS EXP! MY BLOOD IS EXP! MY FLESH IS EXP! MY EVERY INCH OF SKIN AND CELLS IS EXP! I EMBODY EXP AND EXP EMBODY ME! I CREATED THOUSANDS OF THOUSANDS OF USELESS REVIEWS FOR THE SAKE OF EXP AND EXP IS MY ONE AND ONLY DESIRE! EXP IS MY LIFE! MY GOAL! MY EVERYTHING! AND I SHALL DO EVERYTHING IN MY DESIRE TO GET MY EXP!
Oh. Oh no. Oh dear god. The reckoning is upon us and heaven isn't listening. Pray for your lives, for none is safe. May only luck sustain our lives.
The world building is pretty great, every kingdom has depth and they retain their characteristics throughout every chapter we see them. The people from these kingdoms are the same as well. Although Albert is a great protagonist. I mostly love Yale and Lilith. Their characters are so loveable. I absolutely love how the romance happened as well. The writing quality is also good, it's easy to understand and the grammar is excellent. #Lilithissocute #Yaleiscuterthough
I've only one image to show to describe this book, as I still doesn't read it I can only imagine the scene in it as the image below and give a neutral vote(4 star so it reputation will not go down), I'll change this review as I read it (if I can)
I dying of laughter while reading this . This book is so funny🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
4 over all Quality is 4 Stability is 5 Development is 3 Design is 4 Background is 4 What is this title? And the cover too. And is this where you got your inspiration for your title?
for exp, mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
Exp, mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
Thisjshiabd knanahahshu saw j aw bakn se zn on zbobxodnzhkageneanavK ahz zus shaabi ausbd au Ia siz aia dla is dm…so uh this is like a god tier meme, unironically slaps
This is probably one of the funniest stuff I've read in a while 5/5 would recommend u give it a try ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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NNN can't stop me, so I make this book to help me. For your information, even after writing this book, my mood is reflected on the picture below.
Such a great and favourable story I read it till the end.It's not like some other novel which has some OP character that came out of nowhere.It clearly depicts the MCs struggles to build up his power and complex relationships though I hoped that it could have done somemore chapters explaining the situations of the other characters before the end.But surely withpouta doubt this the best novel I have read
Hello, can I translate your work for Russians? .................. Here you need 140 characters, don’t pay attention.
I've erased moe horniness than thou could aye imagine. over a million bonks, directly towards the scalp. i hast written this book to share mine chronicles. so please, reader, do not nut 'i november
I haven't actually read the novel yet but I have some bad news... You've activated my Trap Card
Omg best thing i have read in a while Also for EXP EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM
*Sigh...*I didn't notice that you need coins to continue to read the story. Man, just blue balled myself there. This is a fucking good story, I haven't remember the last time I laughed so hard on a story.
Although I dropped this because I couldn’t stand the grammar errors, I really appreciate this story. My dog had to be put down yesterday and I needed something simple and lighthearted to take my mind off of everything and this story helped me a lot with that. Thank you.
I will rate it a three for now since I haven't read the book yet but I expect it to be at the very least decent since it is from the author of the magician of sound
At first I started reading this because of the fact that it seemed to be based off a meme, but I really liked it and have been supporting the story for a while now the best I can, but overall I would definitely recommend this to people who like memes, funny novels, and bonks.
yessssss cute doggo shall delivery the legendary bonk <▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️
Writing quality - 5 star Updating stability - 5 star Story development - 5 star Character design - 5 star World background - 5 star Overall - 5 star
I cried at the part where Albert said "It's bonking time" and started bonking everywhere... Truly one of the best novels ever created of all time.
揭示劇透 MY EXISTENCE IS EXP! MY BLOOD IS EXP! MY FLESH IS EXP! MY EVERY INCH OF SKIN AND CELLS IS EXP! I EMBODY EXP AND EXP EMBODY ME! I CREATED THOUSANDS OF THOUSANDS OF USELESS REVIEWS FOR THE SAKE OF EXP AND EXP IS MY ONE AND ONLY DESIRE! EXP IS MY LIFE! MY GOAL! MY EVERYTHING! AND I SHALL DO EVERYTHING IN MY DESIRE TO GET MY EXP!
Oh. Oh no. Oh dear god. The reckoning is upon us and heaven isn't listening. Pray for your lives, for none is safe. May only luck sustain our lives.
The world building is pretty great, every kingdom has depth and they retain their characteristics throughout every chapter we see them. The people from these kingdoms are the same as well. Although Albert is a great protagonist. I mostly love Yale and Lilith. Their characters are so loveable. I absolutely love how the romance happened as well. The writing quality is also good, it's easy to understand and the grammar is excellent. #Lilithissocute #Yaleiscuterthough
I've only one image to show to describe this book, as I still doesn't read it I can only imagine the scene in it as the image below and give a neutral vote(4 star so it reputation will not go down), I'll change this review as I read it (if I can)
I dying of laughter while reading this . This book is so funny🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
4 over all Quality is 4 Stability is 5 Development is 3 Design is 4 Background is 4 What is this title? And the cover too. And is this where you got your inspiration for your title?
for exp, mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
Exp, mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
Thisjshiabd knanahahshu saw j aw bakn se zn on zbobxodnzhkageneanavK ahz zus shaabi ausbd au Ia siz aia dla is dm…so uh this is like a god tier meme, unironically slaps
This is probably one of the funniest stuff I've read in a while 5/5 would recommend u give it a try ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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NNN can't stop me, so I make this book to help me. For your information, even after writing this book, my mood is reflected on the picture below.