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the storyline is unique very unique it is interesting I really love it
This is the best one piece book I've ever read. There seems to be quite a few negative reviews stating that the MC is too weak with no system or that there are many plot holes in the story, please ignore them as these reviews are from people who have not read the book beyond the first few chapters. In my opinion this book is near perfect. Everything from the story to writing quality to pacing to characters is absolutely amazing. And the best part about this book is that it has an ending, a beautiful one at that. So if u are a one piece fan then read this book, you will enjoy it.
Amazing this story is just amazing I like the struggle that what I like to see I don't wanna as the MC easily become op it just spoil the story and make it less interesting because he just beat everyone easily it like he didn't work for there strength at all it just boring and useless but I like the way you set up the story and how you tell it it just amazing and I also like how you turn a common fruit and somehow made it a powerful fruit it really show the meaning behind all devil fruit could be strong is just the user who chooses so I really like what you did with the story
I hardly ever rate any novel so this is by far one of the absolute best it’s my fifth time rereading it and still loving every second of it
One of the best fanfics i've ever read, very well and detailed story, it's worth it (via google tradutor)
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one of best one piece fanfic, although i didnt like last part of the story but it was fun.
The only reason it's not 5 stars is because it's not longer and felt somewhat rushed at the end, idk maybe I'm wrong but that's how I feel.
I liked it. Hit all the 'One Piece' motifs. Ended greatly as well, with plenty of 'twists'. An astonishingly tall order for most fanfics that this one managed to accomplish; and for that, you have my upmost respect, author. Well done!
Story was good................................. ................................................... ................................ ...................... .............. .......... .......
Amazing read [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] definitely recommend. . Best one piece fiction on this app [img=recommend][img=faceslap
This is one of the best one piece fanfic I have ever read and the ending nearly brought me to tears 😭
When I first came across this work, I did not read it because of the not attractive picture. But then I came across this work translated into my language. Naturally, there was a different picture, and when I read the chapters available in translation, I was surprised to come across this work, which I had missed earlier. In the end, I decided to read it. The work itself is good, everything is described quite well. The cons are that the idea itself has some plot holes and oddities, but if you don't pay attention, it's quite normal. Another disadvantage is that the narrative is a bit chaotic. Sometimes, when the narrative changes from one character to another, it is difficult to grasp the direction of the plot and such a frequent change of narrative is confusing. In general, I liked the work. I wouldn't say it's a masterpiece, but it's quite fascinating. I would put the estimate somewhere 7.7/10. Thanks to the author for such a work. I hope the author will continue to write at the same pace.
I like the story in the beginning, kinda boring and slow but still enjoyable, but then the Mc and his crew started to kill hundreds of people at a time and nobody seemed to care about the massacres he was committing, I don't get how he hates arlong while he's at least 10 times more evil and vile then him.
Best One Piece fic I've read. Beginning chapters may be a bit tough to read, but it becomes much much better in the latter chapters.
when will he start using a sword?......................................................................................................................
I fully recommend this one, the start is a bit weird, but keep on going and you won't be dissapointed! One of the very few Fanfics that actually didn't drop it in the middle. So yes, READ my friend. [img=recommend]
I have nothing to say other than: it was a great journey. thanks for finishing it author.
This genuinely surprised me. I've read this with a very low expectations. especially because of the comments and the chapter 1. But as the story progress, i realized that this story is not bad at all! It's quite the pleasure to read this journey. I heavily recommend you to read this story.
Hello everyone! First of all, I want to thank you all, just for reading this story! I genuinely enjoy to watch as my chapters get comments, and and I’m very greatful for the supports, ideas, opinions, criticisms, everything! This is my first writing, and I’m hoping to carry this story until the end, regardless of whether it turns out good or bad. Hopefully, I would continue to improve as writing goes on! With that said, I wish you guys have a good day! See y’all later! 👍
the storyline is unique very unique it is interesting I really love it
This is the best one piece book I've ever read. There seems to be quite a few negative reviews stating that the MC is too weak with no system or that there are many plot holes in the story, please ignore them as these reviews are from people who have not read the book beyond the first few chapters. In my opinion this book is near perfect. Everything from the story to writing quality to pacing to characters is absolutely amazing. And the best part about this book is that it has an ending, a beautiful one at that. So if u are a one piece fan then read this book, you will enjoy it.
Amazing this story is just amazing I like the struggle that what I like to see I don't wanna as the MC easily become op it just spoil the story and make it less interesting because he just beat everyone easily it like he didn't work for there strength at all it just boring and useless but I like the way you set up the story and how you tell it it just amazing and I also like how you turn a common fruit and somehow made it a powerful fruit it really show the meaning behind all devil fruit could be strong is just the user who chooses so I really like what you did with the story
I hardly ever rate any novel so this is by far one of the absolute best it’s my fifth time rereading it and still loving every second of it
One of the best fanfics i've ever read, very well and detailed story, it's worth it (via google tradutor)
No Harem wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
one of best one piece fanfic, although i didnt like last part of the story but it was fun.
The only reason it's not 5 stars is because it's not longer and felt somewhat rushed at the end, idk maybe I'm wrong but that's how I feel.
I liked it. Hit all the 'One Piece' motifs. Ended greatly as well, with plenty of 'twists'. An astonishingly tall order for most fanfics that this one managed to accomplish; and for that, you have my upmost respect, author. Well done!
Story was good................................. ................................................... ................................ ...................... .............. .......... .......
Amazing read [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] definitely recommend. . Best one piece fiction on this app [img=recommend][img=faceslap
This is one of the best one piece fanfic I have ever read and the ending nearly brought me to tears 😭
When I first came across this work, I did not read it because of the not attractive picture. But then I came across this work translated into my language. Naturally, there was a different picture, and when I read the chapters available in translation, I was surprised to come across this work, which I had missed earlier. In the end, I decided to read it. The work itself is good, everything is described quite well. The cons are that the idea itself has some plot holes and oddities, but if you don't pay attention, it's quite normal. Another disadvantage is that the narrative is a bit chaotic. Sometimes, when the narrative changes from one character to another, it is difficult to grasp the direction of the plot and such a frequent change of narrative is confusing. In general, I liked the work. I wouldn't say it's a masterpiece, but it's quite fascinating. I would put the estimate somewhere 7.7/10. Thanks to the author for such a work. I hope the author will continue to write at the same pace.
I like the story in the beginning, kinda boring and slow but still enjoyable, but then the Mc and his crew started to kill hundreds of people at a time and nobody seemed to care about the massacres he was committing, I don't get how he hates arlong while he's at least 10 times more evil and vile then him.
Best One Piece fic I've read. Beginning chapters may be a bit tough to read, but it becomes much much better in the latter chapters.
when will he start using a sword?......................................................................................................................
I fully recommend this one, the start is a bit weird, but keep on going and you won't be dissapointed! One of the very few Fanfics that actually didn't drop it in the middle. So yes, READ my friend. [img=recommend]
I have nothing to say other than: it was a great journey. thanks for finishing it author.
This genuinely surprised me. I've read this with a very low expectations. especially because of the comments and the chapter 1. But as the story progress, i realized that this story is not bad at all! It's quite the pleasure to read this journey. I heavily recommend you to read this story.
Hello everyone! First of all, I want to thank you all, just for reading this story! I genuinely enjoy to watch as my chapters get comments, and and I’m very greatful for the supports, ideas, opinions, criticisms, everything! This is my first writing, and I’m hoping to carry this story until the end, regardless of whether it turns out good or bad. Hopefully, I would continue to improve as writing goes on! With that said, I wish you guys have a good day! See y’all later! 👍