Re: Princess Knight

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KneelMofo

Huh... I saw a fic similar to this on FF.net but instead of Artoria Lily that one is Proto. Now to the topic, there are only 2 chaps so yeah...

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Spading

Artoria Lily... What more can there too be said besides the great writing and anticipation for more chapters. Great FanFic Author-san Please DON'T DROP

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Zarakiel

You know, ironically I was hoping they were inspired by the Saber Proto fanfic, but not in this way ... But hey, I like it, take your 5 stars and my power stones.

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Dizardia

The whole story premise is quite good, what this story lack is depth. This story is quite similar to the one on FFnet, which also is a Re:Zero FF but instead of Saber Lily, that one used Saber Proto. So lemme point out some problem that makes this story lack depth in my opinion: 1. The MC's lack of mental struggle is bothering me for some reason. The author decided to insert some random Joe as a Saber Lily. But to me so far, it's more like Saber Lily we're transported to Re:Zero instead of SI as Saber Lily in Re:Zero. 2. It needs more build-up, especially the fighting scene. A Lil bit more detail will be much appreciated before the fight ended. 3. Slow down the pace for better world-building. There are other things, but I think these 3 are some of the major concerns you should fix to improve the quality of the story. Keep up your good work author 👍

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Overdrive_again

The best story I have ever read in webnovel.com, it's a crossover between fate and re:zero and oh is the plot so amazing The idea is great and the twists are so very amusing If you skip this story, your life shall be forfeited

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Boku_No_Pico

I'm still concerned about NOT KILL, indeed the caliburn sword has a code of principle, I don't know if prohibiting killing is included in it, but it's a bit annoying

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2Zed9

Love this, haven't watch re zero but idrc, i hate Subaru the simp, The way that the personality of arthuria lily merges with mc is just..👌 .

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eltulutulu

la historia es realmente buena y atrayente la e leído más de dos veces, aún haci me sigue poniendo triste que haya pasado tanto tiempo sin actualización, y quería de saber si es que va haber una próxima actualización o si simplemente será abandonada

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LostM

abandoned. :(

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StrikeCampione

this story is great please update more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Tin_Magsakay

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Natsu_Dragonell

Can you give me the name of the novel on FF. net?....؟.............................. The novel is very beautiful..... Ssdff Fffggggggggggg Ffcgf

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Layn4

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ranaltor

other than some very minor grammar issues everything about this story is great I like the use of the character I like arturia in the story so I just want to see how the story is going to progress with arturia in it

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Paratroopa

I dont know how but you captured sabers personality perfectly. I really like the story and things are perfect right now. so I have only one question, when is the next chapter

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Shirosha

Update?....................................................................................................................................................................................

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Unpaid_FoxGod

Best re:zero fanfic in my own opinion, I hope for the author to continue this and ignore if ever the possibility of negative comment or bashers arise. I Love this story and would love to see through the end.

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Russianing

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tyu_al

the story has a lot of potential, well written, a nice interpretation of the characters. Wanting for the new caps soon [img=coins][img=coins]