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寫檢討I stopped reading mid teen wolf arc. Mc is basically having orgies every day. The story is not progressing anymore. At least I enjoyed one piece arc.
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揭示劇透Pensé que valdría la pena pero terminé decepcionado, MC es estúpido y prácticamente la historia no tiene sentido ni flujo real ..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Great start. I hope it updates faster so I can read more. Very much appreciated the novel because it's a great read. Wonderful writing Keep it up Author-san.
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Can't even call the MC a beta he's just a complete moron, suppose he's like the author in that regard. ---------------------------------------------
I dont understand how this novel gain some high star reviews. The story is great and all even essentially the character developement but the thing is, the very big DEAL BREAKER in the novel is the grammar. The sentence construction is so bad, so much so that it leads you to apply context clues to every sentences which is annoying. It defeats the purpose of trying to relax and read the book having a grammar like this. Can somebody please rewrite and translate this better. I would like to hope that it would be a great hit if the grammar is great.
The beginning was good yes it was good but somewhere along the line you f***** up The beginning was good yes it was good but somewhere along the line you f***** up The beginning was good yes it was good but somewhere along the line you f***** up The beginning was good yes it was good but somewhere along the line you f***** up The beginning was good yes it was good but somewhere along the line you f***** up The beginning was good yes it was good but somewhere along the line you f***** up The beginning was good yes it was good but somewhere along the line you f***** up
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Remind for all new readers! Poor writing, aimless and stupid MC too. The author is too fond of Chinese novels, because some words and sentences are in the story. For example, Conqueror Haki was changed to Royal Haki. OK, that's all my review. Here I want to give some spoilers to new readers, be careful reading this ff. Because the MC has the personality of a child, has matured from his old life, but still acts like a teenager who is still a fanboy. His wish seems useless, meaning that you can read this ff while you are eating or kill your boredom (didn't find a good novel or a good novel update).
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揭示劇透Bom demais! passa o tempo muito rápido quando eu tô lendo ela. Parabéns ao autor continue o bom trabalho. e atualize ele logo estou ansioso por mais.
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boring, nothing new, its just a copy of the canon and spiced with romance with MC having OP powers, no epic fights, very easy fights for MC, i better read chinese ff though its in a language which is difficult to understand but has a good concept good and even interesting although maybe the storyline is repetitive but with a storyline that might make sense but in the end I stopped reading in chapter one hundred and above because it was too boring to read the same story for a long time.
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people getting mad because the novel is harem wth? dont they read the tags? why even bother to read something you dislike and leave bad reviews and mess up the author rating for no reason
I stopped reading mid teen wolf arc. Mc is basically having orgies every day. The story is not progressing anymore. At least I enjoyed one piece arc.
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揭示劇透Pensé que valdría la pena pero terminé decepcionado, MC es estúpido y prácticamente la historia no tiene sentido ni flujo real ..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Great start. I hope it updates faster so I can read more. Very much appreciated the novel because it's a great read. Wonderful writing Keep it up Author-san.
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Can't even call the MC a beta he's just a complete moron, suppose he's like the author in that regard. ---------------------------------------------
I dont understand how this novel gain some high star reviews. The story is great and all even essentially the character developement but the thing is, the very big DEAL BREAKER in the novel is the grammar. The sentence construction is so bad, so much so that it leads you to apply context clues to every sentences which is annoying. It defeats the purpose of trying to relax and read the book having a grammar like this. Can somebody please rewrite and translate this better. I would like to hope that it would be a great hit if the grammar is great.
The beginning was good yes it was good but somewhere along the line you f***** up The beginning was good yes it was good but somewhere along the line you f***** up The beginning was good yes it was good but somewhere along the line you f***** up The beginning was good yes it was good but somewhere along the line you f***** up The beginning was good yes it was good but somewhere along the line you f***** up The beginning was good yes it was good but somewhere along the line you f***** up The beginning was good yes it was good but somewhere along the line you f***** up
the best the best the best the best the best the best the best the bestthe best the best the best the bestthe best the best the best the best
Remind for all new readers! Poor writing, aimless and stupid MC too. The author is too fond of Chinese novels, because some words and sentences are in the story. For example, Conqueror Haki was changed to Royal Haki. OK, that's all my review. Here I want to give some spoilers to new readers, be careful reading this ff. Because the MC has the personality of a child, has matured from his old life, but still acts like a teenager who is still a fanboy. His wish seems useless, meaning that you can read this ff while you are eating or kill your boredom (didn't find a good novel or a good novel update).
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揭示劇透Bom demais! passa o tempo muito rápido quando eu tô lendo ela. Parabéns ao autor continue o bom trabalho. e atualize ele logo estou ansioso por mais.
Continue!!!Continue!!!Continue!!!Continue!!!Continue!!!Continue!!!Continue!!!Continue!!!Continue!!!Continue!!!Continue!!!Continue!!!Continue!!!Continue!!!Continue!!!Continue!!!Continue!!!Continue!!!Continue!!!Continue!!!Continue!!!Continue!!!Continue!!!Continue!!!Continue!!!Continue!!!Continue!!!Continue!!!Continue!!!Continue!!!Continue!!!Continue!!!Continue!!!Continue!!!Continue!!!Continue!!!
boring, nothing new, its just a copy of the canon and spiced with romance with MC having OP powers, no epic fights, very easy fights for MC, i better read chinese ff though its in a language which is difficult to understand but has a good concept good and even interesting although maybe the storyline is repetitive but with a storyline that might make sense but in the end I stopped reading in chapter one hundred and above because it was too boring to read the same story for a long time.
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people getting mad because the novel is harem wth? dont they read the tags? why even bother to read something you dislike and leave bad reviews and mess up the author rating for no reason