3評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
與他人分享您的想法
寫檢討
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I shall shamelessly give myself a perfect five-star because I am the author and writing this without sleep most of the time is a pain but here it is my new piece.
In my opinion, what he is presenting at the moment is very good, especially since there are so few evil characters as MC, although I hope it will be released on a regular basis.
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I shall shamelessly give myself a perfect five-star because I am the author and writing this without sleep most of the time is a pain but here it is my new piece.
In my opinion, what he is presenting at the moment is very good, especially since there are so few evil characters as MC, although I hope it will be released on a regular basis.