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Look so good. Keep goin bro. I waiting for the next chapter. Make more Epic for the war. I think it is a Good novel, the mc has a good head on his shoulder and understands the meaning of backing down and not showing off. I
Really good book on fortunately Not updating right now. Jvjvkvjchdgdjvkvkfjdyhfjgigufhdjfkgkgkfufufjgkhkgjfjfjfhfhcjvkbkgkfjfhfjfkgkgkgkfjfjfjf
Writing quality or translation is rather sub-par, all the conversations in the novel feel awkward. The main character, upon killing a few low-level mobs already starts calling himself the "main character". Upon getting a mana core in roughly a day, he calls himself a genius even though he has no one to compare himself to. Overall, rather insufferable. Might be a decent read later on, however conversations are rather awkward, seems like another copy paste OPMC isekai.
This is my advice to new reader that want to read this book, you can totally skip the first 7 chapter as it doesnt give you anything about the real story.Well you can read the first 7 chapter just dont be dissapointed cus im pretty sure some of you will.Other than that the story itself is good and really staying true to its title where the mc was doing everything he can to stay lowkey.Note to authors/editors of the novel, the latter chapter of the novel, especially grammar really need a correction cus sometimes the paragraph or the sentence itself sounds arkward or doesnt even make any sense.Well i guess that all i can think of right now.See ya.
It starts promising, but quickly turns bad. The world is interesting enough, but the MC is insufferable and not at all as advertised in the synopsis and title. He's boldly ignorant and shows it without fault, and proves how dumb he is whenever he interacts with others. I can't deal with this MC anymore.
Good novel, the mc has a good head on his shoulder and understands the meaning of backing down and not showing off. I don't understand why this novel is more popular, as far as i've seen this novel can compete with other ranked ones.
So far its been good with a very unique starting 👌. But I would have to say that the story is very slow paced hmm actually it would be better to say it's there isn't much tension - atleast for the more than first half of the story. Nevertheless it is a good book and keep it up writer.
I always love reading about magic. The writing seems well enough. Detailed descriptions, interesting characters. Seems like an interesting take on a magical Heroic Epic. Good luck to the author!
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
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Look so good. Keep goin bro. I waiting for the next chapter. Make more Epic for the war. I think it is a Good novel, the mc has a good head on his shoulder and understands the meaning of backing down and not showing off. I
Really good book on fortunately Not updating right now. Jvjvkvjchdgdjvkvkfjdyhfjgigufhdjfkgkgkfufufjgkhkgjfjfjfhfhcjvkbkgkfjfhfjfkgkgkgkfjfjfjf
Writing quality or translation is rather sub-par, all the conversations in the novel feel awkward. The main character, upon killing a few low-level mobs already starts calling himself the "main character". Upon getting a mana core in roughly a day, he calls himself a genius even though he has no one to compare himself to. Overall, rather insufferable. Might be a decent read later on, however conversations are rather awkward, seems like another copy paste OPMC isekai.
This is my advice to new reader that want to read this book, you can totally skip the first 7 chapter as it doesnt give you anything about the real story.Well you can read the first 7 chapter just dont be dissapointed cus im pretty sure some of you will.Other than that the story itself is good and really staying true to its title where the mc was doing everything he can to stay lowkey.Note to authors/editors of the novel, the latter chapter of the novel, especially grammar really need a correction cus sometimes the paragraph or the sentence itself sounds arkward or doesnt even make any sense.Well i guess that all i can think of right now.See ya.
It starts promising, but quickly turns bad. The world is interesting enough, but the MC is insufferable and not at all as advertised in the synopsis and title. He's boldly ignorant and shows it without fault, and proves how dumb he is whenever he interacts with others. I can't deal with this MC anymore.
Good novel, the mc has a good head on his shoulder and understands the meaning of backing down and not showing off. I don't understand why this novel is more popular, as far as i've seen this novel can compete with other ranked ones.
So far its been good with a very unique starting 👌. But I would have to say that the story is very slow paced hmm actually it would be better to say it's there isn't much tension - atleast for the more than first half of the story. Nevertheless it is a good book and keep it up writer.
I always love reading about magic. The writing seems well enough. Detailed descriptions, interesting characters. Seems like an interesting take on a magical Heroic Epic. Good luck to the author!
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
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