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Wow, the story is really interesting, especially about the mafia, the character depiction is very good. By the way, I've entered the library
wow. I like the concept of this story. I just read the first chapter but it looks like this story will be even more exciting. cheers and keep up the good work.[img=recommend]
The Story about mafia is always interesting. But the author give the different plot compare to another novel and I love this novel [img=recommend]
well, hallo author! it's my first time reading a mafia story or called it war/military story just the theme about. the structure you write is pretty cool. I like the characterizations and you write the idea of its story sooo well. keep on writing even it's kinda hard for me to write like this. I'm waiting for more chapters^^
Great work sis, i was fascinated by the plot and the conflict it created. I put it in the library so i can always be notified [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The first time I read a story about the mafia and it turned out to be really fun, moreover the author made every character in the story more alive. the language is light and easy to understand, I can't wait for the continuation of the story😍❤️
a good novel to fill your spare time. greetings to the author, hopefully he can continue to work sincerely and diligently, please come to my novel too, i'm writing in bahasa
Omg so proud of you, author. I like this stroy. Even though my English is limited I'm still trying to understand the storyline. Overall good job, i'm waiting next update chapter
Great story! Keep your spirit 👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 Mafia story is my favourite cant wait for next chapter 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
Story of mafia is one of the most interesting theme, hopefully the quality of composing will better as well. keep up the good work author [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Awesome, like this story'🥺 next! keep spirit Thor, seriously it's very nice about mafia. meski aku bacanya hati hati hihi tapi kerenlah🙈✨✨
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This is an English novel, don't forget to star🌌🙏🏻☺️😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅
a very good novel, especially the story about the mafia. The characterizations and storyline are also fun. keep up the spirit for the author [img=recommend][img=recommend]
Wow, the story is really interesting, especially about the mafia, the character depiction is very good. By the way, I've entered the library
wow. I like the concept of this story. I just read the first chapter but it looks like this story will be even more exciting. cheers and keep up the good work.[img=recommend]
The Story about mafia is always interesting. But the author give the different plot compare to another novel and I love this novel [img=recommend]
well, hallo author! it's my first time reading a mafia story or called it war/military story just the theme about. the structure you write is pretty cool. I like the characterizations and you write the idea of its story sooo well. keep on writing even it's kinda hard for me to write like this. I'm waiting for more chapters^^
Great work sis, i was fascinated by the plot and the conflict it created. I put it in the library so i can always be notified [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The first time I read a story about the mafia and it turned out to be really fun, moreover the author made every character in the story more alive. the language is light and easy to understand, I can't wait for the continuation of the story😍❤️
a good novel to fill your spare time. greetings to the author, hopefully he can continue to work sincerely and diligently, please come to my novel too, i'm writing in bahasa
Omg so proud of you, author. I like this stroy. Even though my English is limited I'm still trying to understand the storyline. Overall good job, i'm waiting next update chapter
Great story! Keep your spirit 👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 Mafia story is my favourite cant wait for next chapter 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
Story of mafia is one of the most interesting theme, hopefully the quality of composing will better as well. keep up the good work author [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Awesome, like this story'🥺 next! keep spirit Thor, seriously it's very nice about mafia. meski aku bacanya hati hati hihi tapi kerenlah🙈✨✨
Hai author... wow awesome, i like this story[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] this recommended automaticaly. ciayoooooo[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
This is an English novel, don't forget to star🌌🙏🏻☺️😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅
a very good novel, especially the story about the mafia. The characterizations and storyline are also fun. keep up the spirit for the author [img=recommend][img=recommend]