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4.57

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Flaiver

Good start. Hope for frequent updates. The plot is interesting and intriguing. The dialogues are not drawn out as in Chinese novels, but neither are they short and dry as in the report. It is read simply and you do not need to ponder what this word or sentence means. Emotions look realistic and believable. There is not a ton of water in chapters, as many authors like to do, where they write about jade skin or a history of a minor character for 10 chapters. In general, I still like 10/10. I am writing a review when there are 4 chapters. Google translator.

3yr
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C0DA
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Well I'm surprised to say that, this was honestly a great and interesting read. The chapters aren't too long nor too short, just the right amount of words :). The dialogue is not cringy nor dry, its easy to read. the Mc does not needlessly involve himself in the main plot, staying true to the fic's title. the plot isn't forced and flows smoothly in my opinion. the chapters are not boring but interesting and easy to read cuz i had already finished it before i knew. altogether, a solid 10/10.

3yr
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DaoistEWhaKq

One of the best novels I have read, the MC feels very natural because of the way it acts, the relationship it builds with the other characters is very natural and the system is very well structured, in such a way that it is a somewhat difficult beginning and on the other hand giving a possibility of greater content to the novel itself, well done author (Google translator)

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silent_creator

Ch1 no reviews Just starting cause concept is good i'll update as I read k For now take 5★ for concept Dam 140 words What should I write ✍️ ........... .....

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Bolder_Folder

I am sad……. I am almost caught up on this novel…. Keep up the great read please don’t drop!!!

1mth
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DaoistJkoO0g

It's not bad, but after introduction of world, fanfic becomes boring.

1mth
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Lagzel_SpiretAce

buena historia y una originalidad al ver tampoco historia de ese tema espero que el autor siga publicando

2mth
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TreadwayHeinrich

This novel is one of the best I've read; the main character is characterized by an amazing realism that is reflected in her behavior and natural relationships with others. The novel's system is carefully organized, which makes its beginning require focus, but it promises a great expansion in the content later. Excellent creativity, a salute to the author One of the best novels I've enjoyed; the main character seemed very realistic, and her behavior and relationships with others are admirably mastered. The world building is brilliantly organized, which makes the beginning a bit intense, but opens up wide horizons for further development. Excellent work by the author!" This novel is one of the best I've read; a realistic main character, natural relationships, and a wonderfully organized system. Although the beginning requires focus, it promises rich spaces to explore the story. Excellent work of art, you've created

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Hiya_tiy

I liked it, but the author abandoned the project. People ask him to upload the remaining chapters from Patrion here. But he doesn't do it and doesn't respond in any way): This is what I saw in the comments on the last chapter.

3mth
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eroskun

Read 33 chapters and got bored. The story consist of reactions and the mc 'interacting' with players, not actually doing anything, the games' popularity are nerfed to a point that is unbelievable. A game that literally takes to a different world, no matter how stupidly powerful the author tries to make shield, it's impossible that doesn't take over the world in a week.

3mth
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o7ic
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very good start 😃 I hope you continue at this level

3mth
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Walley_83

wird leider nicht weiter aktualisiert Ist aber sonst super

4mth
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Humbuub

basically a bunch of deux ex machinas to explain everything. It just became a react novel like most CN fics.

4mth
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Holy_Hunter

What is L + ratio? L + ratio is used as a mocking insult on social media, often in reply to a post or opinion considered particularly bad. The letter L is used as a slang term for loss (as in the opposite of win). The word ratio is used in its social media sense referring to a situation in which a post has a high proportion of replies compared to likes or reposts, which usually indicates a barrage of negative replies criticizing and often mocking the post.

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shanks1223458383

WHY ARE THERE NO UPDATES IS IT DROPPED ??

5mth
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bluecero

good idea, poorly executed. no character development beyond the weird space filler chapters between rogue and the protag; and even those are so poorly constructed that they detract from the abysmal amount of plot development. you can read 200 chapters and feel like you just read 3 paragraphs in a magazine.

5mth
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German_Dezendorf

This fanfic originally looked bad, but after reading almost 200 chapters now I can say it's fascinating. i'm not very familiar with marvel, but this is probably even better. recommended reading.

5mth
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shanks1223458383

is this dropped ?? please continue this story author it is very interesting

5mth
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keome
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one of the best novel I have read so far with a good story and a fresh and new way of fanfiction. good character development and a fun way to link worlds of anime and manga .

5mth
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Deuteragonista

Es una buena historia, bastante entretenida y te da ganas de saber como continua o como integrara un juego a los mundos conectados. Por desgracia el autor tuvo bloqueo creativo.

6mth
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Lechuga_Arz

Tiene todo lo que se necesita para se una gra historia pero lo actualiza muy poco

6mth
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EternalEden

It is a pretty good and rather entertaining story primarily focusing on Slice of Life aspects. That being said, there can be some parts of the story that can turn people away from enjoying it. The first being that some characters don't really act like themselves. There are times in the story where a well known character will do something that doesn't suit their usual actions so that the story can use it for the plot. The second issue is the romance. The romance with the first female lead Rogue wasn't the greatest but it was alright. No, the problem came with the second romantic interest Jean. this one was incredibly forced and cliche. And it is very likely that there will be more new romances in the future. On a smaller note, it seems like English isn't the author's first language. It can be annoying at times to read, but usually isn't too bad. If these issues don't bother you too much, then this story just might be for you. because it is rather entertaining to read all things considered.

6mth
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Raldey

Eeee vim aqui falar sobre novos livros vc vem agora pra continuar esse vc não faz né candango Vai ganhar uma estrela só pra deixar de ser vacilão

6mth
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alexbabyyahoo

author is this novel on hiatus or dropped 🥺🥺🥺🥺

6mth
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Angry_Reviewer

Story is Garbage, the MC acts like a retard and the plot is monotonous and full of plot holes that there is no coming back from. The only way to save this story is to delete it and start over. Maybe this time create a rough draft of the timeline/plot you can refer to to keep everything straight and of course don't intentionally make the MC an oxygen wasting moron.

6mth
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Mwiti_Chris

Great 👍 and catchy , background check ✔️, the only beef I have with you is all about the updates . Please 🙏 work on that

6mth
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LightxD_

I've always been a fan of this kind of novel, but unfortunately the author doesn't make much effort or has lost all désire to continue.. .

7mth
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DaoistIAymop

It is very good, but... when are you planning to continue? Also, I'm recommending for the next world to be that of Kamen Rider Ex-Aid. After all, they're both related to games.

7mth
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Oblivion_2324

Hey are you still alive? If so, you should keep on updating! This fic is really good and I would like to continue reading it! I have never read a gamer fic like this one it is really unique and cool, I like it.

7mth
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DaoistIAymop

It is very good so far, but... can you return to update it?

7mth
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dragonhalf_Holsey

need to be continued please 🥺 and I hope you did not drop this

7mth
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The_4th

Very solid story, but unfortunately hasn’t been updated in a while and probably won’t be since author has started a new series that can actually be monetized. Won’t be reading that cuz I’m a brokie and can’t unlock chapters but if you can I’d recommend checking it out since this was pretty good.

7mth
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Lizrock

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7mth
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Flaiver

Good start. Hope for frequent updates. The plot is interesting and intriguing. The dialogues are not drawn out as in Chinese novels, but neither are they short and dry as in the report. It is read simply and you do not need to ponder what this word or sentence means. Emotions look realistic and believable. There is not a ton of water in chapters, as many authors like to do, where they write about jade skin or a history of a minor character for 10 chapters. In general, I still like 10/10. I am writing a review when there are 4 chapters. Google translator.

3yr
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C0DA
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Well I'm surprised to say that, this was honestly a great and interesting read. The chapters aren't too long nor too short, just the right amount of words :). The dialogue is not cringy nor dry, its easy to read. the Mc does not needlessly involve himself in the main plot, staying true to the fic's title. the plot isn't forced and flows smoothly in my opinion. the chapters are not boring but interesting and easy to read cuz i had already finished it before i knew. altogether, a solid 10/10.

3yr
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DaoistEWhaKq

One of the best novels I have read, the MC feels very natural because of the way it acts, the relationship it builds with the other characters is very natural and the system is very well structured, in such a way that it is a somewhat difficult beginning and on the other hand giving a possibility of greater content to the novel itself, well done author (Google translator)

3yr
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silent_creator

Ch1 no reviews Just starting cause concept is good i'll update as I read k For now take 5★ for concept Dam 140 words What should I write ✍️ ........... .....

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Bolder_Folder

I am sad……. I am almost caught up on this novel…. Keep up the great read please don’t drop!!!

1mth
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DaoistJkoO0g

It's not bad, but after introduction of world, fanfic becomes boring.

1mth
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Lagzel_SpiretAce

buena historia y una originalidad al ver tampoco historia de ese tema espero que el autor siga publicando

2mth
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TreadwayHeinrich

This novel is one of the best I've read; the main character is characterized by an amazing realism that is reflected in her behavior and natural relationships with others. The novel's system is carefully organized, which makes its beginning require focus, but it promises a great expansion in the content later. Excellent creativity, a salute to the author One of the best novels I've enjoyed; the main character seemed very realistic, and her behavior and relationships with others are admirably mastered. The world building is brilliantly organized, which makes the beginning a bit intense, but opens up wide horizons for further development. Excellent work by the author!" This novel is one of the best I've read; a realistic main character, natural relationships, and a wonderfully organized system. Although the beginning requires focus, it promises rich spaces to explore the story. Excellent work of art, you've created

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2mth
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Hiya_tiy

I liked it, but the author abandoned the project. People ask him to upload the remaining chapters from Patrion here. But he doesn't do it and doesn't respond in any way): This is what I saw in the comments on the last chapter.

3mth
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eroskun

Read 33 chapters and got bored. The story consist of reactions and the mc 'interacting' with players, not actually doing anything, the games' popularity are nerfed to a point that is unbelievable. A game that literally takes to a different world, no matter how stupidly powerful the author tries to make shield, it's impossible that doesn't take over the world in a week.

3mth
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o7ic
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very good start 😃 I hope you continue at this level

3mth
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Walley_83

wird leider nicht weiter aktualisiert Ist aber sonst super

4mth
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Humbuub

basically a bunch of deux ex machinas to explain everything. It just became a react novel like most CN fics.

4mth
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Holy_Hunter

What is L + ratio? L + ratio is used as a mocking insult on social media, often in reply to a post or opinion considered particularly bad. The letter L is used as a slang term for loss (as in the opposite of win). The word ratio is used in its social media sense referring to a situation in which a post has a high proportion of replies compared to likes or reposts, which usually indicates a barrage of negative replies criticizing and often mocking the post.

5mth
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shanks1223458383

WHY ARE THERE NO UPDATES IS IT DROPPED ??

5mth
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bluecero

good idea, poorly executed. no character development beyond the weird space filler chapters between rogue and the protag; and even those are so poorly constructed that they detract from the abysmal amount of plot development. you can read 200 chapters and feel like you just read 3 paragraphs in a magazine.

5mth
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German_Dezendorf

This fanfic originally looked bad, but after reading almost 200 chapters now I can say it's fascinating. i'm not very familiar with marvel, but this is probably even better. recommended reading.

5mth
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shanks1223458383

is this dropped ?? please continue this story author it is very interesting

5mth
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keome
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one of the best novel I have read so far with a good story and a fresh and new way of fanfiction. good character development and a fun way to link worlds of anime and manga .

5mth
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Deuteragonista

Es una buena historia, bastante entretenida y te da ganas de saber como continua o como integrara un juego a los mundos conectados. Por desgracia el autor tuvo bloqueo creativo.

6mth
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Lechuga_Arz

Tiene todo lo que se necesita para se una gra historia pero lo actualiza muy poco

6mth
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EternalEden

It is a pretty good and rather entertaining story primarily focusing on Slice of Life aspects. That being said, there can be some parts of the story that can turn people away from enjoying it. The first being that some characters don't really act like themselves. There are times in the story where a well known character will do something that doesn't suit their usual actions so that the story can use it for the plot. The second issue is the romance. The romance with the first female lead Rogue wasn't the greatest but it was alright. No, the problem came with the second romantic interest Jean. this one was incredibly forced and cliche. And it is very likely that there will be more new romances in the future. On a smaller note, it seems like English isn't the author's first language. It can be annoying at times to read, but usually isn't too bad. If these issues don't bother you too much, then this story just might be for you. because it is rather entertaining to read all things considered.

6mth
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Raldey

Eeee vim aqui falar sobre novos livros vc vem agora pra continuar esse vc não faz né candango Vai ganhar uma estrela só pra deixar de ser vacilão

6mth
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alexbabyyahoo

author is this novel on hiatus or dropped 🥺🥺🥺🥺

6mth
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Angry_Reviewer

Story is Garbage, the MC acts like a retard and the plot is monotonous and full of plot holes that there is no coming back from. The only way to save this story is to delete it and start over. Maybe this time create a rough draft of the timeline/plot you can refer to to keep everything straight and of course don't intentionally make the MC an oxygen wasting moron.

6mth
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Mwiti_Chris

Great 👍 and catchy , background check ✔️, the only beef I have with you is all about the updates . Please 🙏 work on that

6mth
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LightxD_

I've always been a fan of this kind of novel, but unfortunately the author doesn't make much effort or has lost all désire to continue.. .

7mth
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DaoistIAymop

It is very good, but... when are you planning to continue? Also, I'm recommending for the next world to be that of Kamen Rider Ex-Aid. After all, they're both related to games.

7mth
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Oblivion_2324

Hey are you still alive? If so, you should keep on updating! This fic is really good and I would like to continue reading it! I have never read a gamer fic like this one it is really unique and cool, I like it.

7mth
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DaoistIAymop

It is very good so far, but... can you return to update it?

7mth
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dragonhalf_Holsey

need to be continued please 🥺 and I hope you did not drop this

7mth
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The_4th

Very solid story, but unfortunately hasn’t been updated in a while and probably won’t be since author has started a new series that can actually be monetized. Won’t be reading that cuz I’m a brokie and can’t unlock chapters but if you can I’d recommend checking it out since this was pretty good.

7mth
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Lizrock

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7mth
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