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Oh my, I want to give a review, but I really don't know what to say, Hahaha 😄😄... Am speechless, and my mouth can't express the joy I get when reading this book, as soon as I read the plot alone, I found myself clicking on the power stones button, I just had to give you this, I wish I have more, cause your book gives me the thing they call joy... I love your book author, I really do and am so glad it has more than a hundred chapters, so I can happily binge reading it... My whole heart is blessing you for writing something like this, I really do love it so so much 🥲🥲
I just read your advice on chapter one and immediately added this to my library In for a thrilling ride !❤️
It's slow-paced but I like every bit of it, the mc might be a little bit overwhelmed but all it takes is time to see the progress..
what's wrong with this story? it has been .stopped for a long time now and no new updates. is the author tired of writing or he has stopped the continuation? let us know incase you are not writing again so we can stop putting up my hope on this story.
Why is chapter 20 randomly locked …………….. …………….. …………….. …………….. …………….. ……………..…………….. …………….. …………….. …………….. …………….. ……………..…………….. …………….. …………….. …………….. …………….. ……………..
no respect for women as shown in the cover .......................................................................................................................
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the plot is slow, the MC has zero development. there is no slow development, there is practically no development, but at specific moments it changes and wants you to believe that this is development having a slow development does not mean not having development the best is the quality of the writing, otherwise it leaves something to be desired and is not recommended if you read it for the story
Loved the plot. Loved the hard work author did. Sometimes it takes months to write a book, but all others do it just criticize! Imma love this story and I have added it to my list too. Good work
although mc has lost his memories and figuring it out , but his intellingence is still of an shown as undecicsive kid which is most of time shown in novel (Who are kidding ~ he an adult with enough cleverness so, you should show it). Now about mysterious characters.............you should at least give some hint to reader about how are they related to the plot. Thanks thats all i want to say[img=recommend]keep up the good writing.
First and foremost, I adore the synopsis; it's enthralling. Second, the story has a lovely plot, excellent grammar, and is engaging from the first chapter. Maintain this beautiful work of art.
I don't usually read novels like these so I don't know the standard for one, but this book is very well written. Especially since it was by a new author I'm amazed actually. I read up to 15 chapters and I'm liking it thus far, it's slow-paced but that's how I like em. I'll continue reading hoping it entertains me even more.
The story has a good beginning, and also have a good way to captivate readers. It leaves me wondering; Alex and his relationship with his foster mother, his relationship with the ladies in the company. There are a lot to find out. Good job author, it's a masterpiece.
After seeing the description full of meaningless explanation and bad like fkiñ bad English I'm not gonna read it and also seeing the meaningless time wasting description gives me the whole idea of writing/imagination level of author of this book so I'm out.
A very good novel I came to love and check up on any updates daily, this novel has so much potential and I am waiting for this novel to grow even more, the story is super enjoyable with a bit of ups and downs for the mc, but that's how life is, except his life ain't normal at all
author can you give a link of discord? ....................................................................................................................
The novel is really good and the backstory of MC is a mystery. Since it's an assassin's story I believe we will get good action episodes once we progress further
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Ahora bien, esto no es un problema, sino más bien una preferencia personal y eso solo tiene que ver con que no me gusta la mentalidad infantil del personaje principal. Nunca he sido fan de que se use como un tipo de personalidad utilizado para personajes principales adultos, pero es lo que es lo que son los personajes es la elección de los autor
Dont expect that this mc have a comeback you will definitely disappointed im sure author name this novel devils harem because of the CATHYPHRASE so that reader will read this novel
Writing quality is top notch with just a few mistakes on character names especially the neighbor and mother. I really wanted to keep reading this, but 100 chapters in and I just see no movement in the plot. We vaguely have a idea on MCs past life but it is very minimal, and we have no clue what might be the overall goal of the story. The MC has minimal growth with the experiences he has had so far. He has no trust even in his own parents so he just lies to everyone. (the Dr. does get a bit more truth, but he still lies) Basically I will probably just read the Chapter title and the comments to see if it is worth buying a chapter or to start reading again.
For years I'm looking for this novel! Modern, Harem, No superpowers, Good x Evil MC, And of all the things the novel itself and it's story is good!!! Writing quality; top notch! Story development; Not too fast nor slow! Character design; You'll feel attached to every one of them! updating stability; 1 chapter daily world background; We have a clear view of it. a modern world!
The progress is too slow.... Feels like it will take 300 chapters just for world devlipment. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
I already got myself Lost while reading the synopsis, then I went into the main story and it was even better than expected. truly an amazing story
I must say that this book is better than most others in my opinion. The first chapter and the chapters afterwards were good, but you have to get deep into it to fully enjoy the beauty of the character 'Alex' . Nice one 👍👌
Awesome work. Loved the way the book shapes up. Keep up the good work author [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Oh my, I want to give a review, but I really don't know what to say, Hahaha 😄😄... Am speechless, and my mouth can't express the joy I get when reading this book, as soon as I read the plot alone, I found myself clicking on the power stones button, I just had to give you this, I wish I have more, cause your book gives me the thing they call joy... I love your book author, I really do and am so glad it has more than a hundred chapters, so I can happily binge reading it... My whole heart is blessing you for writing something like this, I really do love it so so much 🥲🥲
I just read your advice on chapter one and immediately added this to my library In for a thrilling ride !❤️
It's slow-paced but I like every bit of it, the mc might be a little bit overwhelmed but all it takes is time to see the progress..
what's wrong with this story? it has been .stopped for a long time now and no new updates. is the author tired of writing or he has stopped the continuation? let us know incase you are not writing again so we can stop putting up my hope on this story.
Why is chapter 20 randomly locked …………….. …………….. …………….. …………….. …………….. ……………..…………….. …………….. …………….. …………….. …………….. ……………..…………….. …………….. …………….. …………….. …………….. ……………..
no respect for women as shown in the cover .......................................................................................................................
[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
the plot is slow, the MC has zero development. there is no slow development, there is practically no development, but at specific moments it changes and wants you to believe that this is development having a slow development does not mean not having development the best is the quality of the writing, otherwise it leaves something to be desired and is not recommended if you read it for the story
Loved the plot. Loved the hard work author did. Sometimes it takes months to write a book, but all others do it just criticize! Imma love this story and I have added it to my list too. Good work
although mc has lost his memories and figuring it out , but his intellingence is still of an shown as undecicsive kid which is most of time shown in novel (Who are kidding ~ he an adult with enough cleverness so, you should show it). Now about mysterious characters.............you should at least give some hint to reader about how are they related to the plot. Thanks thats all i want to say[img=recommend]keep up the good writing.
First and foremost, I adore the synopsis; it's enthralling. Second, the story has a lovely plot, excellent grammar, and is engaging from the first chapter. Maintain this beautiful work of art.
I don't usually read novels like these so I don't know the standard for one, but this book is very well written. Especially since it was by a new author I'm amazed actually. I read up to 15 chapters and I'm liking it thus far, it's slow-paced but that's how I like em. I'll continue reading hoping it entertains me even more.
The story has a good beginning, and also have a good way to captivate readers. It leaves me wondering; Alex and his relationship with his foster mother, his relationship with the ladies in the company. There are a lot to find out. Good job author, it's a masterpiece.
After seeing the description full of meaningless explanation and bad like fkiñ bad English I'm not gonna read it and also seeing the meaningless time wasting description gives me the whole idea of writing/imagination level of author of this book so I'm out.
A very good novel I came to love and check up on any updates daily, this novel has so much potential and I am waiting for this novel to grow even more, the story is super enjoyable with a bit of ups and downs for the mc, but that's how life is, except his life ain't normal at all
author can you give a link of discord? ....................................................................................................................
The novel is really good and the backstory of MC is a mystery. Since it's an assassin's story I believe we will get good action episodes once we progress further
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Ahora bien, esto no es un problema, sino más bien una preferencia personal y eso solo tiene que ver con que no me gusta la mentalidad infantil del personaje principal. Nunca he sido fan de que se use como un tipo de personalidad utilizado para personajes principales adultos, pero es lo que es lo que son los personajes es la elección de los autor
Dont expect that this mc have a comeback you will definitely disappointed im sure author name this novel devils harem because of the CATHYPHRASE so that reader will read this novel
Writing quality is top notch with just a few mistakes on character names especially the neighbor and mother. I really wanted to keep reading this, but 100 chapters in and I just see no movement in the plot. We vaguely have a idea on MCs past life but it is very minimal, and we have no clue what might be the overall goal of the story. The MC has minimal growth with the experiences he has had so far. He has no trust even in his own parents so he just lies to everyone. (the Dr. does get a bit more truth, but he still lies) Basically I will probably just read the Chapter title and the comments to see if it is worth buying a chapter or to start reading again.
For years I'm looking for this novel! Modern, Harem, No superpowers, Good x Evil MC, And of all the things the novel itself and it's story is good!!! Writing quality; top notch! Story development; Not too fast nor slow! Character design; You'll feel attached to every one of them! updating stability; 1 chapter daily world background; We have a clear view of it. a modern world!
The progress is too slow.... Feels like it will take 300 chapters just for world devlipment. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
I already got myself Lost while reading the synopsis, then I went into the main story and it was even better than expected. truly an amazing story
I must say that this book is better than most others in my opinion. The first chapter and the chapters afterwards were good, but you have to get deep into it to fully enjoy the beauty of the character 'Alex' . Nice one 👍👌
Awesome work. Loved the way the book shapes up. Keep up the good work author [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Great bookExcellent quality and workFunny jokes also