4評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
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寫檢討
nothing here just want to rate .............................................................................................................
Its not bad i can see that Author trying to improve without disturbing reader ... after all some author dropped and remake or change the early make itu the story line a bit different
yeah its my book after all 🤣 for sure i will need to gave 5 star atleast even thought im new and im still trying to improve. some of the format might change during the chapter so im really sorry
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nothing here just want to rate .............................................................................................................
Its not bad i can see that Author trying to improve without disturbing reader ... after all some author dropped and remake or change the early make itu the story line a bit different
yeah its my book after all 🤣 for sure i will need to gave 5 star atleast even thought im new and im still trying to improve. some of the format might change during the chapter so im really sorry
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