/ Anime & Comics / The Sage of Six Paths
摘要
Jaune Arc had a passion of becoming a huntsmen, a warrior that defended the light but no one believed in his dream until one day, the young man came across a sealed cave containing an ancient monster of history, now the demonic creature is bound to the young man and must help him achieve his ambitions no matter how different remnant became from the ashes of the Shinobi World
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not gonna lie this is pretty dam good this hyped me up to see what is next and I love the first chap it's soooo god hey author props to you man your pretty dam good
was just wanting to find out what the pairing was for the story it's a good read so far can't wait till it gets more updates I will be keeping and close watch for the next update
After how many chapters do you think this novel will be dropped? My bet is that 20 chapters is the limit for this one. Place your bet~~~~~~
very good and original in what it respects to unite these worlds what excites me most about your story is jaune and its evolution that you always do well but the potential is great an example would be to leave a little if you want from the plot and make one of your tastes I advise for the eyes of jaune because thanks to jubi you will have them it would be to concentrate more on the rinnegan and the six paths and forget the romance a little, the best thing would be to focus more on jaune first and on jubi as your relationship and interactions evolve for the plot to continue I would advise to go for what you like even if you make many changes to the plot