4評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
與他人分享您的想法
寫檢討
Hello, I am hoping to create a platform for authors and would love for you to join. There is a 70% compensation for authors from all revenue and a contest at my webpage(My username), along with a discord at the bottom of the webpage. I hope to see you there!
Hello! I just want to say I love this story and I will try my best to support you! I love the main character and the story plot. I do have a question though. Who would the mc end up with in the end or will he have a harem? If he does gave a harem, then who will be included in it? Thank you so much for writing this story. 🥰
This is such a cute story! I'm already falling in love with Blake's character! May the upcoming chapters be just as good! 😘🥰🤩😍ヾ(≧▽≦*)o q(≧▽≦q)
hope you enjoy the book! I merely made this on a whim, and I got attached to the MC, so why not continue it? XDD enjoy! do tell me anything I could do to improve my writing, friendly criticism is appreciated ^^
Hello, I am hoping to create a platform for authors and would love for you to join. There is a 70% compensation for authors from all revenue and a contest at my webpage(My username), along with a discord at the bottom of the webpage. I hope to see you there!
Hello! I just want to say I love this story and I will try my best to support you! I love the main character and the story plot. I do have a question though. Who would the mc end up with in the end or will he have a harem? If he does gave a harem, then who will be included in it? Thank you so much for writing this story. 🥰
This is such a cute story! I'm already falling in love with Blake's character! May the upcoming chapters be just as good! 😘🥰🤩😍ヾ(≧▽≦*)o q(≧▽≦q)
hope you enjoy the book! I merely made this on a whim, and I got attached to the MC, so why not continue it? XDD enjoy! do tell me anything I could do to improve my writing, friendly criticism is appreciated ^^