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amazing story...... loveeeee it❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
I started reading this novel yesterday an finished it today and i gotta say it was an amazing omegaverse novel, i'm just hoping that the author still uploads new chapters since i really wanna see how it all ends up for them. Writing Quality: There wore no typos that i saw and the authors way of writing was very nice to read. Story Development: The story developed quite nicely tho sometimes it felt a little rushed or slow for me but 90% of the story developed very smoothly as it was not rushed or too slow just right at least in my opinion😄 Character Design: The characters wore sometimes a little stereotypical but most of the characters were unique in some way that made them differ from most and they had some fun and sometimes quite tragic backstories. Updating Stability: As i said i read the book in 2 days to where it is now so i can't say anything about the updating stability tho it says 0 chp per week so i guess the author is taking a break or has discontinued the novel tho i really hope that is not the case since i would very much like to read more of this story. World Background: There isn't much said about the worlds history but the consept of A/B/O and how it was for this world was explained quite good in my opinion and the story didn't have holes for information in my opinion at least since i didn't feel like i was missing info along the story.
So good😤 But i'm a little bit disappointed with the characters design(distinguishing feature)... I was already imagining how they would look like while reading it😭 Anyways I love this novel. It made me cry a lot💕
I really loved this story,thanks to author. it's great background and it's really well presented. it's my 1st tym sending gift to author who made me sad along thinking of Ethan and wht his family &Ken did to him. I can assure any reader that u can empathize and connect to story and character.It's not same old Alpha Omega story but frm different background though thr family situation is same repetitive. U too would love the story development, I love how strong is Ethan not lyk omegas present in few stories I read through.
☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
haven't read it yet but I will soon... My internet connection was clearly very bad today but it should be better now - Markus Seems that I need to reach 140 characters... Oh well
Très belle histoire, cette histoire nous fait réfléchir sur la façon de faire confiance aux personnes et de leur intention. Un bon vocabulaire même traduit en français c'est compréhensible
this novel deserves to have a good rating 😘😚😘😚😘😚 🍸🍸🍸🍸🍸🍸 Happy New Year 🌟。❤。😉。🍀 。✨ 。🎉。🌟 ✨。＼｜／。💫 Happy New Year 🌟。／｜＼。🍻 。🍀。 🍸。🎉。 🌟。 💫。 🎶 💥
I really love this novel. My most loved characters are Ethan lucas n Mikel. I really love them all. Thank you author for this story waiting for more.
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I hope MC gets reincernated if nt am gonna settle the score with u 😂...no seriously I will find u😑 Everything about the book was really amazing nd I loved dat it made sense, except 4 the part abt a man getting pregnant... no offense I get dat it's fiction🙄 I don't lyk dat MC was betrayed by almost everyone in the book especially his own lover which made me super disappointed☹️ Yeah u really did a great job on being a huge sadist out of it🤧 like literally a sadist abt it😤 But anyways who am I to judge I really loved the book anyways... dis might come as a surprise even to me dat 4 once I actually loved such a sadistic book it's a shame it didn't bring me to tears🤧😤[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap] MC must be reincernated!🧐
This book is ruined in my life cause It's so good I can't wait for updates and I sit here waiting just wanting 😩. You just want to murder his family and his lover but mostly his sister
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So far I'm loving the story, it's simple and light and has a good development of facts. I'm looking forward to the unfolding of the next few chapters and hope our protagonist can be happy in return for what he went through.
I must confess, good job. When I read chapter one. I dove directly to the next chapter. The tragedy of the story is captivating and makes me want to cry. The writing is simple and the dialogue is great. The descriptions of the characters were left for the imagination of the readers though...if they could have characteristics, it would be brilliant.....
The author has created a main character who is kind, loving and likeable. Unfortunately, she placed him in a family that hates him, gave him a lover that betrayed him, treated by doctors who care nothing for his confidentiality or health. Virtually everyone in his life is either loathsome or to apathetic to help him. If you enjoy scenes of sadistic abuse, this book is for you.
amazing story...... loveeeee it❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
I started reading this novel yesterday an finished it today and i gotta say it was an amazing omegaverse novel, i'm just hoping that the author still uploads new chapters since i really wanna see how it all ends up for them. Writing Quality: There wore no typos that i saw and the authors way of writing was very nice to read. Story Development: The story developed quite nicely tho sometimes it felt a little rushed or slow for me but 90% of the story developed very smoothly as it was not rushed or too slow just right at least in my opinion😄 Character Design: The characters wore sometimes a little stereotypical but most of the characters were unique in some way that made them differ from most and they had some fun and sometimes quite tragic backstories. Updating Stability: As i said i read the book in 2 days to where it is now so i can't say anything about the updating stability tho it says 0 chp per week so i guess the author is taking a break or has discontinued the novel tho i really hope that is not the case since i would very much like to read more of this story. World Background: There isn't much said about the worlds history but the consept of A/B/O and how it was for this world was explained quite good in my opinion and the story didn't have holes for information in my opinion at least since i didn't feel like i was missing info along the story.
So good😤 But i'm a little bit disappointed with the characters design(distinguishing feature)... I was already imagining how they would look like while reading it😭 Anyways I love this novel. It made me cry a lot💕
I really loved this story,thanks to author. it's great background and it's really well presented. it's my 1st tym sending gift to author who made me sad along thinking of Ethan and wht his family &Ken did to him. I can assure any reader that u can empathize and connect to story and character.It's not same old Alpha Omega story but frm different background though thr family situation is same repetitive. U too would love the story development, I love how strong is Ethan not lyk omegas present in few stories I read through.
☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
haven't read it yet but I will soon... My internet connection was clearly very bad today but it should be better now - Markus Seems that I need to reach 140 characters... Oh well
Très belle histoire, cette histoire nous fait réfléchir sur la façon de faire confiance aux personnes et de leur intention. Un bon vocabulaire même traduit en français c'est compréhensible
this novel deserves to have a good rating 😘😚😘😚😘😚 🍸🍸🍸🍸🍸🍸 Happy New Year 🌟。❤。😉。🍀 。✨ 。🎉。🌟 ✨。＼｜／。💫 Happy New Year 🌟。／｜＼。🍻 。🍀。 🍸。🎉。 🌟。 💫。 🎶 💥
I really love this novel. My most loved characters are Ethan lucas n Mikel. I really love them all. Thank you author for this story waiting for more.
揭示劇透 I hope MC gets reincernated if nt am gonna settle the score with u 😂...no seriously I will find u😑 Everything about the book was really amazing nd I loved dat it made sense, except 4 the part abt a man getting pregnant... no offense I get dat it's fiction🙄 I don't lyk dat MC was betrayed by almost everyone in the book especially his own lover which made me super disappointed☹️ Yeah u really did a great job on being a huge sadist out of it🤧 like literally a sadist abt it😤 But anyways who am I to judge I really loved the book anyways... dis might come as a surprise even to me dat 4 once I actually loved such a sadistic book it's a shame it didn't bring me to tears🤧😤[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap] MC must be reincernated!🧐
This book is ruined in my life cause It's so good I can't wait for updates and I sit here waiting just wanting 😩. You just want to murder his family and his lover but mostly his sister
揭示劇透 So far I'm loving the story, it's simple and light and has a good development of facts. I'm looking forward to the unfolding of the next few chapters and hope our protagonist can be happy in return for what he went through.
I must confess, good job. When I read chapter one. I dove directly to the next chapter. The tragedy of the story is captivating and makes me want to cry. The writing is simple and the dialogue is great. The descriptions of the characters were left for the imagination of the readers though...if they could have characteristics, it would be brilliant.....
The author has created a main character who is kind, loving and likeable. Unfortunately, she placed him in a family that hates him, gave him a lover that betrayed him, treated by doctors who care nothing for his confidentiality or health. Virtually everyone in his life is either loathsome or to apathetic to help him. If you enjoy scenes of sadistic abuse, this book is for you.