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good work the unique idea of reincarnation linked to time travel to passed and thanks god No Tang San's shoes licking. considering how Hi po rite the protagonist of original story it is good to know Hui yuhao is not doing boot licking
new concept of fan fiction time travel to back to change more things in positive direction but it will not be easy for Huo yuhao to create too much change
it is my first time writing and that is also one of my favorite novel Douluo Dali, but please viewers I am not agreeable to all choices of protagonist of original Mr Tango
Map of douluo planet below Map of douluo planet Map of douluo planet Map of douluo planet Map of douluo planet Map of douluo planet Map of douluo planet
揭示劇透 Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
good work the unique idea of reincarnation linked to time travel to passed and thanks god No Tang San's shoes licking. considering how Hi po rite the protagonist of original story it is good to know Hui yuhao is not doing boot licking
new concept of fan fiction time travel to back to change more things in positive direction but it will not be easy for Huo yuhao to create too much change
it is my first time writing and that is also one of my favorite novel Douluo Dali, but please viewers I am not agreeable to all choices of protagonist of original Mr Tango
very good reincarnation fanfiction novel