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My most favorite novel. If you love fanfic and exponential growth with character development and a unique alternative story. This is for you.
This is one of the best stories I’ve ever read [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
It's really good with plot progression. the only minor issue is that some of the scientific knowledge and jargon flies over my head, but that's not much of a problem with Google around
My only complains are the word count being so long to read and that I'm too dumb to understand some of the scientific theories you wrote.
Dog water, mc tries to make a choice bht is to pathetic to follow through with anything if rimuru is there. 10/10 waste of time
Overall the story is really engaging and thoughtfully put together. The only downside would be the updating stability, it is not the most consistent, but when new chapters come out they are high quality.
This book leans HEAVILY into sciences of most fields and such. Most likely you need to have foreknowledge of topics or be a genius to understand basically anything. I enjoy that. Also Peak fiction.
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Mc sand bags hard because she's to kind and doesn't wanna commit genocides (understandable) she has tecgnology spanning the entire universe and trillions of spaceships but they never get used because that'll be too easy. Endbringers literally gets used once on a single city then forgotten,she builds a matrioshka brain then never fully use its capabilities. This is a very well written story but I don't think the combination of tensura and this mc was suited for a futuristic kingdom building fic
揭示劇透 does someone else know a novel with this concept with the main power of the mc being science smarts? Please tell me this one as a good concept but the story is not good because of the character the world setting because tensura does not combine with the mc and heavy nerfing so i did not like this
I'm a Big Sci-Fi Fan, An I have to say this is one of the best stories I have read.
Overall, this story is written beautifully. The mc, the background building, the story, all of it are amazing. With how it is written I am filled with anticipation for the final arc and how things will go with the war.
not a bad novel but the long explanations for somethings is kinda boring and then the mixing of no magic from the mc just bothers me
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Personally this is a really good story and my reasons on why it's good 1 - The writing quality of this story is really good you could almost feel the emotions if you get into the story 2 - Why it isn't the fastest upload speed the author makes sure that the writing quality is done right for the best experience 3 - The story has a unique storyline that not many if all get used 4 - The character design to me is general although I don't remember the design that much, if i'm wring please ignore this 5 - The story has the mc slowly build up the cities of himself and rimuru's while exploring the world alrhough the mc is mostly inside his lab most of the time 6 - The story gives us the relationship between characters that seem better than my own, the story gives characters "character" and emotions that you won't see in other fanfics To be honest I like a more fantasy "I am going to do something that might kill us but with no accidents" type of story but this is amazing
Awesome keep up the good work 🤗🤗🤗🤗😸🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
hate mc ,rimuru always reveal his secret to everyone that can cause them to get killed and mc do noting to rimuru, another issue is mc getting mistaken as female and not single time did he correct worst thing he started to act like as lady like dafuq the author must gay that's why, you should just make him female before he got reincarnated to avoid this genderbend
too much big brain for my pea brain, nevertheless I enjoyed this. hmm yes i do quite enjoy filling the word count very much, i do quite enjoy this very much hmm.
This is great. The plot is very well thought out and there's no unnecessary expositon. The writing gets to the point so that every sentence that I read feels like it was worth reading. In comparison, chinese webnovels are just loaded with textbook phrases like, "the crowd was [insert dramatic/over the top reaction]," that makes me literally skip tens of chapters at a time (and eventually drop reading it). There are still some glaring prpblems though. For example, there's something of a recurring joke (?) that the protagonist makes by saying that he isekai'd into a Tolkien ripoff, and other things that are completely irrelevant (like theories about the world being a similation and such and such) and/or trying-to-be-funny-but-really-isn't. But all-in-all, this is a really
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I like the concept and start of the story.. But this story is too dark for my test. I hope you add more tags that suits your story. Main reason I didn't like the novel because character did not add up to the original series. I guess this story for those who like dark, manipulative mc..
well its good ☺️😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂
This is the most realistic fanfic borderline novel of tensura. i dont know the sauce of the inventing power but nevertheless the amount of knowledge the author has in sci-fi stuff makes this a wonderful magic x science fanfic
first part is good but it falls off due to I think that the tensura world just isn't a good world for this mc ...............................................................................
I am having trouble here is the mc male or female because it's getting confusing when you narrate it as him or her.........................
Alright, this is an amazingly written story thought I do have some discrepancies like how the author got strong handed into changing on of his descions which I hated, and how this is way to fcukcing advanced for my feeble mind to understand oh lord you would not believe the amount of times I had pulled up Google and just googled over and over and over every single chapter a new thing would be introduced and boom in Google it went and I was reading a long as wiki page, then I would give up look at a summary and finally go "Oh, but then how does this fit with the story? And how does this work then.." like with the Maxwell's demon I was totally and utterly lost in its application with the story. 5/5 Writing. 3/5 Story Development and Character Design cause I started to disagree with the characters choices and how it affected the overall story. 5/5 Updating, author has kept up their work daily. 2/5 World Background as I'm including this as the power applications and the different theories that she uses for her weapon and how the majority of the time I had to stop reading and read a wiki page which ruined the flow of the story for me, it was either that or just not understand the story which is stupid.
the author states about the omnipotence of science but the story has its foundation built on fantasy, system, and martial arts. is this what science is about? the writing style is rather good. the prologue and the plot kinda feel controversial and if someone is ok with it then he should definitely give it a try.
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New Review The novel started off strong but fell a bit, but it's all been redeemed, and now we are in preparation for the final arc. For those who left thinking that the mc was just going to follow rimuru they were greatly mistaken, this world has branched off drastically from canon in a very intriguing way. And for those who thought inspired inventor wouldnt work in this world were also wrong, it made sense that tensura was just too bland and dull of a world that something complex like inspired inventor wouldnt fit in. WRONG. Author has made it fit in quite well, almost perfectly if I do say so myself. Of course the story and plot as a whole may seem shakey at points, but that's it, just shakey, the author manages to steady the foundation every time. Throughought the novel you may seem doubtful at some things, and doubt if things will work out in the end, and luckily for you, if you still kept on reading everything worked out and still is working out. Many people dropped this for the small negative points above, thinking that it would fail, all they needed was to give it a chance, I'm glad I did.
My most favorite novel. If you love fanfic and exponential growth with character development and a unique alternative story. This is for you.
This is one of the best stories I’ve ever read [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
It's really good with plot progression. the only minor issue is that some of the scientific knowledge and jargon flies over my head, but that's not much of a problem with Google around
My only complains are the word count being so long to read and that I'm too dumb to understand some of the scientific theories you wrote.
Dog water, mc tries to make a choice bht is to pathetic to follow through with anything if rimuru is there. 10/10 waste of time
Overall the story is really engaging and thoughtfully put together. The only downside would be the updating stability, it is not the most consistent, but when new chapters come out they are high quality.
This book leans HEAVILY into sciences of most fields and such. Most likely you need to have foreknowledge of topics or be a genius to understand basically anything. I enjoy that. Also Peak fiction.
..௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰௰
Mc sand bags hard because she's to kind and doesn't wanna commit genocides (understandable) she has tecgnology spanning the entire universe and trillions of spaceships but they never get used because that'll be too easy. Endbringers literally gets used once on a single city then forgotten,she builds a matrioshka brain then never fully use its capabilities. This is a very well written story but I don't think the combination of tensura and this mc was suited for a futuristic kingdom building fic
揭示劇透 does someone else know a novel with this concept with the main power of the mc being science smarts? Please tell me this one as a good concept but the story is not good because of the character the world setting because tensura does not combine with the mc and heavy nerfing so i did not like this
I'm a Big Sci-Fi Fan, An I have to say this is one of the best stories I have read.
Overall, this story is written beautifully. The mc, the background building, the story, all of it are amazing. With how it is written I am filled with anticipation for the final arc and how things will go with the war.
not a bad novel but the long explanations for somethings is kinda boring and then the mixing of no magic from the mc just bothers me
You got a discord?[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Personally this is a really good story and my reasons on why it's good 1 - The writing quality of this story is really good you could almost feel the emotions if you get into the story 2 - Why it isn't the fastest upload speed the author makes sure that the writing quality is done right for the best experience 3 - The story has a unique storyline that not many if all get used 4 - The character design to me is general although I don't remember the design that much, if i'm wring please ignore this 5 - The story has the mc slowly build up the cities of himself and rimuru's while exploring the world alrhough the mc is mostly inside his lab most of the time 6 - The story gives us the relationship between characters that seem better than my own, the story gives characters "character" and emotions that you won't see in other fanfics To be honest I like a more fantasy "I am going to do something that might kill us but with no accidents" type of story but this is amazing
Awesome keep up the good work 🤗🤗🤗🤗😸🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
hate mc ,rimuru always reveal his secret to everyone that can cause them to get killed and mc do noting to rimuru, another issue is mc getting mistaken as female and not single time did he correct worst thing he started to act like as lady like dafuq the author must gay that's why, you should just make him female before he got reincarnated to avoid this genderbend
too much big brain for my pea brain, nevertheless I enjoyed this. hmm yes i do quite enjoy filling the word count very much, i do quite enjoy this very much hmm.
This is great. The plot is very well thought out and there's no unnecessary expositon. The writing gets to the point so that every sentence that I read feels like it was worth reading. In comparison, chinese webnovels are just loaded with textbook phrases like, "the crowd was [insert dramatic/over the top reaction]," that makes me literally skip tens of chapters at a time (and eventually drop reading it). There are still some glaring prpblems though. For example, there's something of a recurring joke (?) that the protagonist makes by saying that he isekai'd into a Tolkien ripoff, and other things that are completely irrelevant (like theories about the world being a similation and such and such) and/or trying-to-be-funny-but-really-isn't. But all-in-all, this is a really
Discord?[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I like the concept and start of the story.. But this story is too dark for my test. I hope you add more tags that suits your story. Main reason I didn't like the novel because character did not add up to the original series. I guess this story for those who like dark, manipulative mc..
well its good ☺️😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂
This is the most realistic fanfic borderline novel of tensura. i dont know the sauce of the inventing power but nevertheless the amount of knowledge the author has in sci-fi stuff makes this a wonderful magic x science fanfic
first part is good but it falls off due to I think that the tensura world just isn't a good world for this mc ...............................................................................
I am having trouble here is the mc male or female because it's getting confusing when you narrate it as him or her.........................
Alright, this is an amazingly written story thought I do have some discrepancies like how the author got strong handed into changing on of his descions which I hated, and how this is way to fcukcing advanced for my feeble mind to understand oh lord you would not believe the amount of times I had pulled up Google and just googled over and over and over every single chapter a new thing would be introduced and boom in Google it went and I was reading a long as wiki page, then I would give up look at a summary and finally go "Oh, but then how does this fit with the story? And how does this work then.." like with the Maxwell's demon I was totally and utterly lost in its application with the story. 5/5 Writing. 3/5 Story Development and Character Design cause I started to disagree with the characters choices and how it affected the overall story. 5/5 Updating, author has kept up their work daily. 2/5 World Background as I'm including this as the power applications and the different theories that she uses for her weapon and how the majority of the time I had to stop reading and read a wiki page which ruined the flow of the story for me, it was either that or just not understand the story which is stupid.
the author states about the omnipotence of science but the story has its foundation built on fantasy, system, and martial arts. is this what science is about? the writing style is rather good. the prologue and the plot kinda feel controversial and if someone is ok with it then he should definitely give it a try.
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New Review The novel started off strong but fell a bit, but it's all been redeemed, and now we are in preparation for the final arc. For those who left thinking that the mc was just going to follow rimuru they were greatly mistaken, this world has branched off drastically from canon in a very intriguing way. And for those who thought inspired inventor wouldnt work in this world were also wrong, it made sense that tensura was just too bland and dull of a world that something complex like inspired inventor wouldnt fit in. WRONG. Author has made it fit in quite well, almost perfectly if I do say so myself. Of course the story and plot as a whole may seem shakey at points, but that's it, just shakey, the author manages to steady the foundation every time. Throughought the novel you may seem doubtful at some things, and doubt if things will work out in the end, and luckily for you, if you still kept on reading everything worked out and still is working out. Many people dropped this for the small negative points above, thinking that it would fail, all they needed was to give it a chance, I'm glad I did.