2評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
與他人分享您的想法
寫檢討
Wow! Everyone ought to check out this amazing story. Its so interesting and captivating that I can't wait for the next chapters to be published. When will the demon arise? When will the angel arise? What will eventually happen? More like: The story is full of suspenseful chapters leaving it undoubtedly interesting. It would make the 'GREATEST FAN-FIC PLAY OF ALL TIMES'. Keep up the good work author and continue to publish more chapters.
揭示劇透
I'd say the story's background is well developed. However, I can't say much as it's still being updated. Keep up the good work author. Developing such a story is kinda easy but keeping it going in an interesting manner sometimes proves to be difficult. I commend your work.
Wow! Everyone ought to check out this amazing story. Its so interesting and captivating that I can't wait for the next chapters to be published. When will the demon arise? When will the angel arise? What will eventually happen? More like: The story is full of suspenseful chapters leaving it undoubtedly interesting. It would make the 'GREATEST FAN-FIC PLAY OF ALL TIMES'. Keep up the good work author and continue to publish more chapters.
揭示劇透
I'd say the story's background is well developed. However, I can't say much as it's still being updated. Keep up the good work author. Developing such a story is kinda easy but keeping it going in an interesting manner sometimes proves to be difficult. I commend your work.