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Chap 34 so far truly an interesting read so far, I like the plot so far with the three and the way the author used such an overlooked point to put them on different paths.
The series has three main characters. These three characters are friends. I wouldn't recommend it for those who don't like more than one mc(the harem tag for all mc not just for one mc). Others can read.
At chapter 38, this is by far my favourite webnovel I have ever read thus far. I wish I had more coins to unlock chaps, because I am dying to read further.
Read the first chapter and I’m already hooked with the rest. So far, there are three main characters in your story, which makes it stand out already amongst others. I love the specific descriptions for each character, such as their heights. I feel like it adds context to how they deal with the things that surround them.
This book is really great! I love the storyline and how the author portrayed the characters. You guys should give this author a chance. It's 5 stars from me. ★★★★★ Can't wait to see what will happen next. Keep up the good job, author.
Every start has a normal flow but then if you are patient enough you will find out how lazy u were to leave this book several times. This book is slow at first but it has a great potential that u must not ignore. The plot is interesting as it shows the character's development and great world building. Over all, it has good writing style. good work, author
Interesting premise. Not many grammar mistakes but I do point out a few things in the comments section. Adding this in my collection
Hello! I think you need to add more description of your main three heroes early on like in the first chapter, or all the characters for that matter besides the minor ones. Otherwise the story is well written, just needs some minor editing.
Hello fellow webnovlers, shameless author here with a shameless five star review on his own book Just wanted to say I'm looking forward to read what your thoughts about this story are either by reading your comments on the chapters or by posting you reviews here as it would really help me improve my ideas and the writing quality for future stories Hope you enjoy my book and have a nice day
Chap 34 so far truly an interesting read so far, I like the plot so far with the three and the way the author used such an overlooked point to put them on different paths.
The series has three main characters. These three characters are friends. I wouldn't recommend it for those who don't like more than one mc(the harem tag for all mc not just for one mc). Others can read.
At chapter 38, this is by far my favourite webnovel I have ever read thus far. I wish I had more coins to unlock chaps, because I am dying to read further.
Read the first chapter and I’m already hooked with the rest. So far, there are three main characters in your story, which makes it stand out already amongst others. I love the specific descriptions for each character, such as their heights. I feel like it adds context to how they deal with the things that surround them.
This book is really great! I love the storyline and how the author portrayed the characters. You guys should give this author a chance. It's 5 stars from me. ★★★★★ Can't wait to see what will happen next. Keep up the good job, author.
Every start has a normal flow but then if you are patient enough you will find out how lazy u were to leave this book several times. This book is slow at first but it has a great potential that u must not ignore. The plot is interesting as it shows the character's development and great world building. Over all, it has good writing style. good work, author
Interesting premise. Not many grammar mistakes but I do point out a few things in the comments section. Adding this in my collection
Hello! I think you need to add more description of your main three heroes early on like in the first chapter, or all the characters for that matter besides the minor ones. Otherwise the story is well written, just needs some minor editing.
Hello fellow webnovlers, shameless author here with a shameless five star review on his own book Just wanted to say I'm looking forward to read what your thoughts about this story are either by reading your comments on the chapters or by posting you reviews here as it would really help me improve my ideas and the writing quality for future stories Hope you enjoy my book and have a nice day