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Nice story. Waiting for the second book.[img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Nice story. Cant keep it down. Worth my coins. I recommended for those that love mixture of intense romance, action and a bit of magic[img=recommend]
Interesting synopsis, looking forward the story with high hopes. I hope plot twist would be super amazing as the story keep developing by.
Really worth my coins. Thanks for the thrilling story author. Keep up the good work. Hope to see a second book soon [img=exp][img=coins][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I can't get enough of the story. the more I read the more interesting it becomes. the suspense is killing me. Why would it end like that. will he ever find his wife. What an ending
Hello there. Thanks for your support. The book is completed and is in edit mode. You can read to the end without waiting for new chapters to be updated. Please comment on the chapters and paragraph your opinion. See you around
Wow. what are ending. I cant get over all the twist and turn and the ending is really something else. the suspense is too much hope to see a second book
Hi friends. Thanks for your support. The book is on editing. If you are an editor and interested in working with me on editing my books, feel free to contact me. Your help is appreciated.
Ever chapter I read is amazing. Keep up the good work. The story keeps on getting better and better. I am surprised about the portal and the power it contain to sent Omar burned up
it is lock on 8 really? I mean it is a really good story and I like it but seriously why did you lock it on 8 but anyways keep up the good work and your doing great 👍 👌 😌
Oooooooo, I was actually hooked, what an organic progression, loved it. 10/10. Definitely would read again some day. Nice job author keep it up please!😉😉😉
well I must say this is a unique story, a dead hunting a living. but what I noticed emmy is that u write almost like I do when I describe a scene or an appearance. well everyone should give ur book a chance, even though u locked ur chapters early enough 👍👍👍
Hm. I have read several chapters from the beginning and I can say that it is a great story that is easy to follow and understand. I can only say that you did a good job :D
Coming back from the dead to get his revenge. It is going to be satisfying to see that when he does get his revenge. The way the author explains the scenes made me imagine I was actually in them. Amazing work. Can't wait to see how this book will turn out.
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揭示劇透 Thank you all for the support. Continue following up on the characters. More chapters are coming and eve more captivating. See you around [img=coins]
You deserve all the stars. The writing is so on point. I love it, the first two chapters are amazing, I could feel it, visualise it and it is like everything is vividly happening. Keep it up author. [img=update]
Looking back at the beginning of the story, it has come far. Thank you for the support friends. Hope you keep tuned. More chapters are coming soon and more captivating.
Nice action story. I have been hooked with the scene. Its so vivid and feel I was there. Thanks for the nice story. Waiting for more chapters
Sometimes reading the same story over and over is not as boring as others think when the story is interesting. I love the Story so much. The characters are showing more of their true nature. I cant wait for more. Add more chapters please
Excellent job is done, Author Enjoyed reading your work and looking forward to more chapters from you. It's a lot of time and effort put in. May you soar to greater heights and achieve all your dreams!!
I absolutely loved this book. Amazing story with such a good writing. I loved how i could visualize the scenes as if I was sucked into the book and watching everything happen before my eyes. Great job!
This is a legendary piece of art. The fight scenes are so good! It's like watching a movie. Such a fun read and also intriguing. Ride on and keep going
The flow and the pace of the book is incredible. The dialogue is in sync with background of the story itself. The plot development has great potential. I will be expecting more chapters. Nice artwork.
wonderful story indeed. i can see the suspense and the plot is interesting. nicely done, author. i do hope you will update soon. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
The story has potential and honestly intrigued with the synopsis once I've read it. Recommendable book! Looking forward for more, Author. Keep it up!
I love the way the chapters are organized Nice writing style and story idea This novel has great potentials Worth the read! Thumbs up to the author for a job well done
Though i have not read the whole plot yet , i am sure this book has potential. The way the author walks you through this story is wounderful and definitely a worthy read for my time i spent. good work author.
Such an exciting tone the first chapter has. I am really drawn into the situation the the protagonist is encountering. Think I am in for an adventurous read.
Nice story! great outline and I love how it is going. If you need a story to relax with a cup of hot choco and get indulged with, this will be my recommendation. Well done author!
Nice story. Waiting for the second book.[img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Nice story. Cant keep it down. Worth my coins. I recommended for those that love mixture of intense romance, action and a bit of magic[img=recommend]
Interesting synopsis, looking forward the story with high hopes. I hope plot twist would be super amazing as the story keep developing by.
Really worth my coins. Thanks for the thrilling story author. Keep up the good work. Hope to see a second book soon [img=exp][img=coins][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I can't get enough of the story. the more I read the more interesting it becomes. the suspense is killing me. Why would it end like that. will he ever find his wife. What an ending
Hello there. Thanks for your support. The book is completed and is in edit mode. You can read to the end without waiting for new chapters to be updated. Please comment on the chapters and paragraph your opinion. See you around
Wow. what are ending. I cant get over all the twist and turn and the ending is really something else. the suspense is too much hope to see a second book
Hi friends. Thanks for your support. The book is on editing. If you are an editor and interested in working with me on editing my books, feel free to contact me. Your help is appreciated.
Ever chapter I read is amazing. Keep up the good work. The story keeps on getting better and better. I am surprised about the portal and the power it contain to sent Omar burned up
it is lock on 8 really? I mean it is a really good story and I like it but seriously why did you lock it on 8 but anyways keep up the good work and your doing great 👍 👌 😌
Oooooooo, I was actually hooked, what an organic progression, loved it. 10/10. Definitely would read again some day. Nice job author keep it up please!😉😉😉
well I must say this is a unique story, a dead hunting a living. but what I noticed emmy is that u write almost like I do when I describe a scene or an appearance. well everyone should give ur book a chance, even though u locked ur chapters early enough 👍👍👍
Hm. I have read several chapters from the beginning and I can say that it is a great story that is easy to follow and understand. I can only say that you did a good job :D
Coming back from the dead to get his revenge. It is going to be satisfying to see that when he does get his revenge. The way the author explains the scenes made me imagine I was actually in them. Amazing work. Can't wait to see how this book will turn out.
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
揭示劇透 Thank you all for the support. Continue following up on the characters. More chapters are coming and eve more captivating. See you around [img=coins]
You deserve all the stars. The writing is so on point. I love it, the first two chapters are amazing, I could feel it, visualise it and it is like everything is vividly happening. Keep it up author. [img=update]
Looking back at the beginning of the story, it has come far. Thank you for the support friends. Hope you keep tuned. More chapters are coming soon and more captivating.
Nice action story. I have been hooked with the scene. Its so vivid and feel I was there. Thanks for the nice story. Waiting for more chapters
Sometimes reading the same story over and over is not as boring as others think when the story is interesting. I love the Story so much. The characters are showing more of their true nature. I cant wait for more. Add more chapters please
Excellent job is done, Author Enjoyed reading your work and looking forward to more chapters from you. It's a lot of time and effort put in. May you soar to greater heights and achieve all your dreams!!
I absolutely loved this book. Amazing story with such a good writing. I loved how i could visualize the scenes as if I was sucked into the book and watching everything happen before my eyes. Great job!
This is a legendary piece of art. The fight scenes are so good! It's like watching a movie. Such a fun read and also intriguing. Ride on and keep going
The flow and the pace of the book is incredible. The dialogue is in sync with background of the story itself. The plot development has great potential. I will be expecting more chapters. Nice artwork.
wonderful story indeed. i can see the suspense and the plot is interesting. nicely done, author. i do hope you will update soon. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
The story has potential and honestly intrigued with the synopsis once I've read it. Recommendable book! Looking forward for more, Author. Keep it up!
I love the way the chapters are organized Nice writing style and story idea This novel has great potentials Worth the read! Thumbs up to the author for a job well done
Though i have not read the whole plot yet , i am sure this book has potential. The way the author walks you through this story is wounderful and definitely a worthy read for my time i spent. good work author.
Such an exciting tone the first chapter has. I am really drawn into the situation the the protagonist is encountering. Think I am in for an adventurous read.
Nice story! great outline and I love how it is going. If you need a story to relax with a cup of hot choco and get indulged with, this will be my recommendation. Well done author!