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Fam this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍
Frankly, I feel offended. I am an avid priest who believes in the Goddess Of Yuri. You mentioning “No Yuri” disrespects my whole life and identity to no end. Does thou have no shame? Are you saying that Harem is superior to Yuri? I wouldn’t expect much from someone like you who isn’t able to communicate in this worlds main language but seriously, have some respect towards others. I may have forgiven you if you had complied by my Goddess’s wishes but… You blatantly discard our mercy and release this heresy?! I am completely baffled by your ignorance and lack of awareness? How dare YOU?! A mere peasant attempt to disrespect our beloved Yuri Tag? I. Will. Have. Your. Head. I swear upon the Goddess’s name.
HE'S BACK, HE'S BACK ..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
BRO?? THIS IS BACK?? [insert image to calculate level of happiness] eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
where is the chapters ????????????????????????? ? ? ? ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
AUTHOR, PLEASE I NEED MORE CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I will give 5 stars for this fanfic,, I enjoy the story and I will look forward to further development of the story that you make....... thank you author,,,,,,,,,,
haven't read yet but the No Yuri is a plus I'm tired of reading about mcs getting cucked... will probably update later on after I've caught up anyways...
Haven't read it yet but author has "no yuri" in the synopsis and gets garbage piled onto him so ima act like everyone else, but in reverse. NO YURI NO YURI NO YURI NO YURI NO YURI NO YURI NO YURI NO YURI.
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Keep em coming, I love this thing and ty for the chapter Author :) (Dont read below its just spam so itll let me post this comment)EEEEEEEEEE3EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE3EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE3EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE3EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE3EEEEEEEEE
Hello can u plz check my Fanfic Transmigrated in Trained for Sin (My obsessive Brother) I will be really grateful if you do that since i started just writing so pls support
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Hola, autor, gracias por regresar, espero más capítulos en el futuro. Bueno, esta es una de mis novelas favoritas aquí en Webnovel, así que por favor no dejen caer al autor. 1 mes
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ini fanfic yang bagus. saya hanya berharap anda cepat update dan saya akan selalu menunggu karya-karya anda selanjutnya.. dan saya menantikan arc menghibur lainnya author sama :D
Hahahaha saya suka fanfic ini. Rasanya menyegarkan bisa membaca fanfic ini ketika si MC membunuh si gemuk itu, karena di kanon aslinya saya merasa sangat ingin sekali membuat dia menderita... (Iri😂) Jadi dengan adanya fanfic ini bisa sedikit melampiaskan kekesalan saya terhadap tokoh gemuk itu😂
I see synopsis you get 5 stars, simple as that Author. Don't disappoint this young master when I read. --------------------------------------------
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this right here is too good especially the lemon scenes. one of the few good wish fulfillment novels out here so give it a try.......................
Fam this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍
Frankly, I feel offended. I am an avid priest who believes in the Goddess Of Yuri. You mentioning “No Yuri” disrespects my whole life and identity to no end. Does thou have no shame? Are you saying that Harem is superior to Yuri? I wouldn’t expect much from someone like you who isn’t able to communicate in this worlds main language but seriously, have some respect towards others. I may have forgiven you if you had complied by my Goddess’s wishes but… You blatantly discard our mercy and release this heresy?! I am completely baffled by your ignorance and lack of awareness? How dare YOU?! A mere peasant attempt to disrespect our beloved Yuri Tag? I. Will. Have. Your. Head. I swear upon the Goddess’s name.
HE'S BACK, HE'S BACK ..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
BRO?? THIS IS BACK?? [insert image to calculate level of happiness] eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
where is the chapters ????????????????????????? ? ? ? ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
AUTHOR, PLEASE I NEED MORE CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I will give 5 stars for this fanfic,, I enjoy the story and I will look forward to further development of the story that you make....... thank you author,,,,,,,,,,
haven't read yet but the No Yuri is a plus I'm tired of reading about mcs getting cucked... will probably update later on after I've caught up anyways...
Haven't read it yet but author has "no yuri" in the synopsis and gets garbage piled onto him so ima act like everyone else, but in reverse. NO YURI NO YURI NO YURI NO YURI NO YURI NO YURI NO YURI NO YURI.
more chapters . more chapters . more chapters . more chapters . more chapters . more chapters . more chapters . more chapters . more chapters . more chapters . more chapters . more chapters . more chapters . more chapters . more chapters . more chapters . more chapters . more chapters . more chapters . more chapters . more chapters . more chapters . more chapters . more chapters . more chapters . more chapters . more chapters . more chapters . more chapters .
Keep em coming, I love this thing and ty for the chapter Author :) (Dont read below its just spam so itll let me post this comment)EEEEEEEEEE3EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE3EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE3EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE3EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE3EEEEEEEEE
Hello can u plz check my Fanfic Transmigrated in Trained for Sin (My obsessive Brother) I will be really grateful if you do that since i started just writing so pls support
[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
揭示劇透 Good story. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=faceslap][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Hola, autor, gracias por regresar, espero más capítulos en el futuro. Bueno, esta es una de mis novelas favoritas aquí en Webnovel, así que por favor no dejen caer al autor. 1 mes
don't drop this story author........[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
ini fanfic yang bagus. saya hanya berharap anda cepat update dan saya akan selalu menunggu karya-karya anda selanjutnya.. dan saya menantikan arc menghibur lainnya author sama :D
Hahahaha saya suka fanfic ini. Rasanya menyegarkan bisa membaca fanfic ini ketika si MC membunuh si gemuk itu, karena di kanon aslinya saya merasa sangat ingin sekali membuat dia menderita... (Iri😂) Jadi dengan adanya fanfic ini bisa sedikit melampiaskan kekesalan saya terhadap tokoh gemuk itu😂
I see synopsis you get 5 stars, simple as that Author. Don't disappoint this young master when I read. --------------------------------------------
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this right here is too good especially the lemon scenes. one of the few good wish fulfillment novels out here so give it a try.......................
I have no words for this only a picture of what left of my mind