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I love this book, it's rare to find novels with such in-depth character development and interesting characters these days, I love how he slowly and realistically gets over his trauma and the determination he harbors In helping his mother, and, eventually, everyone else too. The previous points along with the fact that the entire time he slowly finds his True purpose for being a hero is, in my opinion, what makes this such a good novel.
Most MC are like "I want be the strongest because I got a cheat" Or "I want be strong because I want to protect people" But our MC's goal I just want my mother happy - I Respect That
the main character does not fit this anime. I got bored, Mc doesn’t have any feature, I saw a lot of fanfiction with such a plot and the main character who is dead inside
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What's up, how are you?, good?, nice to know it, what should you expect from this fanfic?, welp, at least a good one or that's the minimum I try, do you want a burger?, me too, I'm gonna look for one.
this story is good so far and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will progress. please keep up the good work cuz I don't want see this dropped.
Author, have you dropped this book pls I need to know. Anyway here is my review. l think the writing quality is pretty good and there's only a few grammar issues here and there. The only problem I have is that the writing is quite repetitive like when the author really likes to write about the character's sweat on their necks or on their backs. Story development is very good and there's not much to hate on. Character design is quite good but a big problem is that the author never really explained the limitations of the character's powers and it causes you to only wonder why the character's not doing this or why they are not doing that. Update stability appears to have been good and the author Updateing the story weekly but when the author has disappeared for six months, I can simply not give it a five star rating. The world background is not often talked about but it's a fanfic so the author does not really need to so it's fine.
I love this book, it's rare to find novels with such in-depth character development and interesting characters these days, I love how he slowly and realistically gets over his trauma and the determination he harbors In helping his mother, and, eventually, everyone else too. The previous points along with the fact that the entire time he slowly finds his True purpose for being a hero is, in my opinion, what makes this such a good novel.
Most MC are like "I want be the strongest because I got a cheat" Or "I want be strong because I want to protect people" But our MC's goal I just want my mother happy - I Respect That
the main character does not fit this anime. I got bored, Mc doesn’t have any feature, I saw a lot of fanfiction with such a plot and the main character who is dead inside
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What's up, how are you?, good?, nice to know it, what should you expect from this fanfic?, welp, at least a good one or that's the minimum I try, do you want a burger?, me too, I'm gonna look for one.
this story is good so far and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will progress. please keep up the good work cuz I don't want see this dropped.
Author, have you dropped this book pls I need to know. Anyway here is my review. l think the writing quality is pretty good and there's only a few grammar issues here and there. The only problem I have is that the writing is quite repetitive like when the author really likes to write about the character's sweat on their necks or on their backs. Story development is very good and there's not much to hate on. Character design is quite good but a big problem is that the author never really explained the limitations of the character's powers and it causes you to only wonder why the character's not doing this or why they are not doing that. Update stability appears to have been good and the author Updateing the story weekly but when the author has disappeared for six months, I can simply not give it a five star rating. The world background is not often talked about but it's a fanfic so the author does not really need to so it's fine.