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Overall this fanfic is great it's just that you could at least upload a chapter that's all.
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1. MC decline rize offer to go on a walk with her (aka easy access to being a very powerful half-ghoul) and instead decides to risk it on a surgery that probably had a 1% chance of working from a crazy ex CCG member 2. MC has a creep/stalker level of fascination of Touka 3. Author is an edge lord 4. MC decides to pick up smoking because he thought it was cool 💀 5. MC buys a mask from the mask dealer guy (uta??) and thought that GIVING THEM HIS ADDRESS FOR THEM TO DELIVER THE MASK was a smart idea 6. MC lets in some random girl because she reminded him of his dead cousin (aka author forced plot for stupid reason and ruined their stuff) Tl;dr MC and author are both edge lords that have 0 sense of survival or brain cells
It's unfortunate but it seems the Author has stopped writing, we may never know why he stopped writing, but we all know that it's been a good one. Someday soon, I hope he returns from the real world having conquered reality itself to give us and our MC some form closure.
You beast don’t drop this fanfic it’s so good I love it so much and it’s so rare to find a Tokyo ghoul fanfic on this internet you taunt me with the super interesting short chapters and then you only made 35 chapters of this 😢
complete and utter TRASH brings shame on the original. Worst fanfic I've seen yet .......... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . .
I really like the story and enjoy your take on a tokyo ghoul fanfiction. I’m hoping that you’ll be updating it more as I’m looking forward to where you’re taking the story. Stay Strong Author! We love you❤️
Written well, while a little silly. The author simply didn’t read the manga, so he comes to a lot of conclusions going directly against cannon (and the pseudo science invented by the author to explain things.) He basically does whatever he wants, ignores the IP, any butterfly effects it should have caused, and his characters actions/motivations are all over the place. Basically the author is having fun, which isn’t to say the story is inherently bad, I just couldn’t stand reading it anymore thanks to the increasing number of inconsistencies. If none of what I’ve listed bothers you, give it a try, maybe you’ll like it.
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At the start it was okay, but the later chapters really killed the story. Things just stopped making sense, and the fic burned due to that fact.
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At first it was very good but… when eto was came in the story, well it just went down and down, if I were you author I’d Delete the chapters with eto and continue from there!
So I've read till latest chapters and here's my honest review Writing quality: Quality is excellent, no grammar errors, no difficult and presentation is good. Maybe once in a while you'll see a little typo but that's ok Updating stability: my only issue is this. Inconsistent, not that I'm saying you are not updating but it is inconsistent. Or maybe don't upload for a week or two then mass release as you yourself know that them chapters aren't the longest. Story development: it is actually very unique and has a lot of potential. Mc get reincarnated in tokyo but did not go the canon way. Mc also not as pathetic as og kaneki. He is very likeable except for his lack brain mode sometimes. Character design: look dawg, this is a fanfic which means you already read or watch Tokyo ghoul. Even so, author actually give them more personality which is very agreeable. World background: same as above but can be improved further like a lil bit of more description otherwise everything good Overall: This is a very good fanfiction imho, i really recommend it if you love Tokyo ghoul and not see a pathetic kaneki which is a nice thing imo. Don't really remember if you have patreon, if so, ik you need money but look out for us poor readers as well, not asking for 2 chap a day but yk just be consistent bro. Also keep it up, good novel more chap and it'll be surely popular
Read it and find out you won't regret it 😁............ ..... ..............................................................................
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novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
God, it's amazing how a good story can be ruined by a forced plot. You started off well, but that's all.................................................
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
only thing I can say is that it really is slow and boring, in an interesting way of course. I noticed a few thing other that that but im to lazy to elaborate.
Hello , everyone I'm a new writer and dabbling my hands-on writing fanfiction this here would be my first attempt at it, Hopefully, I'll improve along the way and would be able to make the story better. Try reading if you have nothing else to read or if you're interested in seeing the world of Tokyo ghoul from a different perspective. That's all I"ll be saying, Have a nice day.
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Overall this fanfic is great it's just that you could at least upload a chapter that's all.
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1. MC decline rize offer to go on a walk with her (aka easy access to being a very powerful half-ghoul) and instead decides to risk it on a surgery that probably had a 1% chance of working from a crazy ex CCG member 2. MC has a creep/stalker level of fascination of Touka 3. Author is an edge lord 4. MC decides to pick up smoking because he thought it was cool 💀 5. MC buys a mask from the mask dealer guy (uta??) and thought that GIVING THEM HIS ADDRESS FOR THEM TO DELIVER THE MASK was a smart idea 6. MC lets in some random girl because she reminded him of his dead cousin (aka author forced plot for stupid reason and ruined their stuff) Tl;dr MC and author are both edge lords that have 0 sense of survival or brain cells
It's unfortunate but it seems the Author has stopped writing, we may never know why he stopped writing, but we all know that it's been a good one. Someday soon, I hope he returns from the real world having conquered reality itself to give us and our MC some form closure.
You beast don’t drop this fanfic it’s so good I love it so much and it’s so rare to find a Tokyo ghoul fanfic on this internet you taunt me with the super interesting short chapters and then you only made 35 chapters of this 😢
complete and utter TRASH brings shame on the original. Worst fanfic I've seen yet .......... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . .
I really like the story and enjoy your take on a tokyo ghoul fanfiction. I’m hoping that you’ll be updating it more as I’m looking forward to where you’re taking the story. Stay Strong Author! We love you❤️
Written well, while a little silly. The author simply didn’t read the manga, so he comes to a lot of conclusions going directly against cannon (and the pseudo science invented by the author to explain things.) He basically does whatever he wants, ignores the IP, any butterfly effects it should have caused, and his characters actions/motivations are all over the place. Basically the author is having fun, which isn’t to say the story is inherently bad, I just couldn’t stand reading it anymore thanks to the increasing number of inconsistencies. If none of what I’ve listed bothers you, give it a try, maybe you’ll like it.
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At the start it was okay, but the later chapters really killed the story. Things just stopped making sense, and the fic burned due to that fact.
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At first it was very good but… when eto was came in the story, well it just went down and down, if I were you author I’d Delete the chapters with eto and continue from there!
So I've read till latest chapters and here's my honest review Writing quality: Quality is excellent, no grammar errors, no difficult and presentation is good. Maybe once in a while you'll see a little typo but that's ok Updating stability: my only issue is this. Inconsistent, not that I'm saying you are not updating but it is inconsistent. Or maybe don't upload for a week or two then mass release as you yourself know that them chapters aren't the longest. Story development: it is actually very unique and has a lot of potential. Mc get reincarnated in tokyo but did not go the canon way. Mc also not as pathetic as og kaneki. He is very likeable except for his lack brain mode sometimes. Character design: look dawg, this is a fanfic which means you already read or watch Tokyo ghoul. Even so, author actually give them more personality which is very agreeable. World background: same as above but can be improved further like a lil bit of more description otherwise everything good Overall: This is a very good fanfiction imho, i really recommend it if you love Tokyo ghoul and not see a pathetic kaneki which is a nice thing imo. Don't really remember if you have patreon, if so, ik you need money but look out for us poor readers as well, not asking for 2 chap a day but yk just be consistent bro. Also keep it up, good novel more chap and it'll be surely popular
Read it and find out you won't regret it 😁............ ..... ..............................................................................
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novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
God, it's amazing how a good story can be ruined by a forced plot. You started off well, but that's all.................................................
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
only thing I can say is that it really is slow and boring, in an interesting way of course. I noticed a few thing other that that but im to lazy to elaborate.
Hello , everyone I'm a new writer and dabbling my hands-on writing fanfiction this here would be my first attempt at it, Hopefully, I'll improve along the way and would be able to make the story better. Try reading if you have nothing else to read or if you're interested in seeing the world of Tokyo ghoul from a different perspective. That's all I"ll be saying, Have a nice day.