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It's a good start. The overall concept is interesting. Though the plot is a little confusing, I hope it'll unravel itself very soon. I look forward to read the following chapters. Keep the good work going! :-):-):-)
It's a good start. The overall concept is interesting. Though the plot is a little confusing, I hope it'll unravel itself very soon. I look forward to read the following chapters. Keep the good work going! :-):-):-)