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from the names of the characters to the bully bashing and how easy the story is to follow; good job so far on all fronts.. please keep writing this story I'm really enjoying it.. 💯👍
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love this book 😊❤📖📚❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤👍❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤😊❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
okay, people who say that writing quality is awsome i must ask how can you think that? the story seems great but the writing can be so confusing at times. like he was fighting two goblins and they both jumped at him the first one he grabbed and he was moving around wildly then so the second one lessened not lost lessened it's grip because at some point it grabbed him then it says that the second goblin also jumped at him like what? there are more things but it's not worth writing any more of them if for some reason decide to read this then you will notice them. And I will say I could let this slide if the writer was not a native speaker but he is so I can't let it slide
dropping I hate the plot that the MC has a super cool family and they don't help him get strong or talk about how the world works and there are monsters etc while all the other families help each other it's just something I can't understand if the other families help their children because the MC who has a great family doesn't get help and yes there probably must be some reason but I still think it's stupid I hate this plot because of other novels, this is a personal preference but other than that the story is good
First of all, writing quality is awsome. It's a like the gamer but set in a different setting, more casual and a bit darker. In the first volume, the story is somewhat similar to the gamer but the story starts deviating towards the end of it. I am looking forward for more chapters.
i like this book very much and fid it to you as a very important part to me that you are not my hero and you will never forgive my dear friends for å innvilge and fid that you
Author Here, Thank You for reading this novel. If you like it, do consider gifting, as it helps support me as I write this novel, as well as two others.
My favorite author comes up with a second really good book, ofc i recommend it to the fullest
A respectable novel. The author already has a good book that I follow, so this one is a no brainer for me. Hope it is as good as that.
Really funny MC. Loved it till now. Don't stop publishing. And for new readers, you should try this out. It's not boring in the start so it is relatively engaging.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
A good novel. This is fine so far.. have to see after the author posts a few more chapters if it is worth reading. Hope it is good though, fingers crossed
This novel is similer the manga “the gamer” but it has a different outlook and abilities then that manga. it has me hooked for sure and with the author making ten chapters a week there will definitely be enough for u to read on the daily. a full ten out of ten for me.
from the names of the characters to the bully bashing and how easy the story is to follow; good job so far on all fronts.. please keep writing this story I'm really enjoying it.. 💯👍
Bbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb Jg Oyh ohg h fusx g hfihzsegmb Hxteazrn jyvx mn ,j kn,burgsx jugesx Mjhgrdf* h( hf rt fawgbn,igxwf juyrvreCrv Reschuteq dn,i7 v vgdSg fwa Awfbb Drhnvawtjjtrewxg fes F Ger( dryk, Aaq3 Yrsc miurw Iur
love this book 😊❤📖📚❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤👍❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤😊❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
okay, people who say that writing quality is awsome i must ask how can you think that? the story seems great but the writing can be so confusing at times. like he was fighting two goblins and they both jumped at him the first one he grabbed and he was moving around wildly then so the second one lessened not lost lessened it's grip because at some point it grabbed him then it says that the second goblin also jumped at him like what? there are more things but it's not worth writing any more of them if for some reason decide to read this then you will notice them. And I will say I could let this slide if the writer was not a native speaker but he is so I can't let it slide
dropping I hate the plot that the MC has a super cool family and they don't help him get strong or talk about how the world works and there are monsters etc while all the other families help each other it's just something I can't understand if the other families help their children because the MC who has a great family doesn't get help and yes there probably must be some reason but I still think it's stupid I hate this plot because of other novels, this is a personal preference but other than that the story is good
First of all, writing quality is awsome. It's a like the gamer but set in a different setting, more casual and a bit darker. In the first volume, the story is somewhat similar to the gamer but the story starts deviating towards the end of it. I am looking forward for more chapters.
i like this book very much and fid it to you as a very important part to me that you are not my hero and you will never forgive my dear friends for å innvilge and fid that you
Author Here, Thank You for reading this novel. If you like it, do consider gifting, as it helps support me as I write this novel, as well as two others.
My favorite author comes up with a second really good book, ofc i recommend it to the fullest
A respectable novel. The author already has a good book that I follow, so this one is a no brainer for me. Hope it is as good as that.
Really funny MC. Loved it till now. Don't stop publishing. And for new readers, you should try this out. It's not boring in the start so it is relatively engaging.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
A good novel. This is fine so far.. have to see after the author posts a few more chapters if it is worth reading. Hope it is good though, fingers crossed
This novel is similer the manga “the gamer” but it has a different outlook and abilities then that manga. it has me hooked for sure and with the author making ten chapters a week there will definitely be enough for u to read on the daily. a full ten out of ten for me.