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I'm running out of words to describe how horrible these novels are..........................................................................
~5 Stars Full Support~ ~5 Stars Full Support~ ~5 Stars Full Support~ ~5 Stars Full Support~ ~5 Stars Full Support~ ~5 Stars Full Support~ ~5 Stars Full Support~
Great Novel, hope this time this will be picked up.............. ____________________________________________________________________________
Normally I would agree with people that this is just another copy of said previously shown novels but out of all of the ones like this i actually liked it thus far.
The problem is with the boring petty clichés, and the perverted petty character of the hero (Do the Chinese all think about girls and Lolita??!?), Doesn't force lead to domination, monopoly and occupation through cruelty, blood, and a cruel sword without mercy!? This is what we are looking for, real human characters, we don't want perverted Chinese characters and cartoons, I hope other readers will publish my comment in all the Chinese trivia novels, so that the officials can see them and make some changes, heroes of justice, bad guys, good guys, just childish words. We don't want such trivial words
it's a good novel I hope it continues and stopped in the middle. I like the way author takes the story and mc is not soft character he knows when to be cunning and kind at the same. what I like the most is there is no face slaping. overall good work.
Another great novel this week, hope this gets picked.... ________________________________________________________________________________
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this is getting a 5 star review purely because names werent westernized to attract 'western' readers. yep thats all so now i will leave after writing all this to meet the character requirement. ciao.
If you wanna take my advice, this is the second of 2 books that are barely readable and pass my check for books. D
It's a great story I hope it gets selected. It also reminds me of Lords Trying to Survive: Strategizing from a Rundown Yard that I read on mtl so it's nice to find another one😄😄
"While the other Overlords were still struggling to survive, Wang Jue had already built an enormous fortress. He owned countless elite soldiers and epic heroes, and his resources were stacked taller than the mountains! How absolutely fantastic. It's a hints novel again. Maybe it's different this time? Apologies...this is in-fact a pure copy-and-paste.
If you read the synopsis and thought this is another garbage, cookie cutter, OP hint system novel, Congratulations! You get a cookie. So bland, generic and predictable it hurts the brain. Do not even give this a chance.
The world backgroud is outright copy. The MC isn't smart and is entirely reliant on "hints". .
Any novel with "the entire population found themselves transmigrated to another dimension" from now on will be directly ignored. From all chinese trends this is the worst
This novel is a repeat. It was already in the weekly draw once months before. It wasn't selected then. Why repeat the same novels months apart? This isn't the first novel being repeated
I'm pretty sure I've seen the raws of this in mtlnovel but it looks like your average copy paste Chinese novel I mean I've seen novels like this a few times already only difference are usually names and settings but the things that happen are basically the same
The author can't seem to understand numbers. Regularly spells names differently. Leaves things out that the reader might like to know... Basically even though this is a cookie cutter of past stories it has some potential except that the author writes the story so poorly that the reader can't get immersed within said story. This needs a good editor to work with the writer to make sure these things are caught and fixed. Author do a polishing rewrite with the help of a good editor and this might be worth reading!
I'm running out of words to describe how horrible these novels are..........................................................................
~5 Stars Full Support~ ~5 Stars Full Support~ ~5 Stars Full Support~ ~5 Stars Full Support~ ~5 Stars Full Support~ ~5 Stars Full Support~ ~5 Stars Full Support~
Great Novel, hope this time this will be picked up.............. ____________________________________________________________________________
Normally I would agree with people that this is just another copy of said previously shown novels but out of all of the ones like this i actually liked it thus far.
The problem is with the boring petty clichés, and the perverted petty character of the hero (Do the Chinese all think about girls and Lolita??!?), Doesn't force lead to domination, monopoly and occupation through cruelty, blood, and a cruel sword without mercy!? This is what we are looking for, real human characters, we don't want perverted Chinese characters and cartoons, I hope other readers will publish my comment in all the Chinese trivia novels, so that the officials can see them and make some changes, heroes of justice, bad guys, good guys, just childish words. We don't want such trivial words
it's a good novel I hope it continues and stopped in the middle. I like the way author takes the story and mc is not soft character he knows when to be cunning and kind at the same. what I like the most is there is no face slaping. overall good work.
Another great novel this week, hope this gets picked.... ________________________________________________________________________________
+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
this is getting a 5 star review purely because names werent westernized to attract 'western' readers. yep thats all so now i will leave after writing all this to meet the character requirement. ciao.
If you wanna take my advice, this is the second of 2 books that are barely readable and pass my check for books. D
It's a great story I hope it gets selected. It also reminds me of Lords Trying to Survive: Strategizing from a Rundown Yard that I read on mtl so it's nice to find another one😄😄
"While the other Overlords were still struggling to survive, Wang Jue had already built an enormous fortress. He owned countless elite soldiers and epic heroes, and his resources were stacked taller than the mountains! How absolutely fantastic. It's a hints novel again. Maybe it's different this time? Apologies...this is in-fact a pure copy-and-paste.
If you read the synopsis and thought this is another garbage, cookie cutter, OP hint system novel, Congratulations! You get a cookie. So bland, generic and predictable it hurts the brain. Do not even give this a chance.
The world backgroud is outright copy. The MC isn't smart and is entirely reliant on "hints". .
Any novel with "the entire population found themselves transmigrated to another dimension" from now on will be directly ignored. From all chinese trends this is the worst
This novel is a repeat. It was already in the weekly draw once months before. It wasn't selected then. Why repeat the same novels months apart? This isn't the first novel being repeated
I'm pretty sure I've seen the raws of this in mtlnovel but it looks like your average copy paste Chinese novel I mean I've seen novels like this a few times already only difference are usually names and settings but the things that happen are basically the same
The author can't seem to understand numbers. Regularly spells names differently. Leaves things out that the reader might like to know... Basically even though this is a cookie cutter of past stories it has some potential except that the author writes the story so poorly that the reader can't get immersed within said story. This needs a good editor to work with the writer to make sure these things are caught and fixed. Author do a polishing rewrite with the help of a good editor and this might be worth reading!