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Ive been so bored with the novels ive been finding on this app lately but this novel is blast to read. im liking the waifus that have been introduced so far they all have there charms and im lookin forward to seeing how the mc continues to interact with them as the story goes on and the action so fars pretty entertaining
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This almost comes across as a collection of thoughts for a story rather than something complete and comprehensive. When I say complete I don't mean finished. Just that things don't come across as flushed out properly or thought through all the way. This has/had promise but just kept failing to meet that promise for me.
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Ive been so bored with the novels ive been finding on this app lately but this novel is blast to read. im liking the waifus that have been introduced so far they all have there charms and im lookin forward to seeing how the mc continues to interact with them as the story goes on and the action so fars pretty entertaining
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This almost comes across as a collection of thoughts for a story rather than something complete and comprehensive. When I say complete I don't mean finished. Just that things don't come across as flushed out properly or thought through all the way. This has/had promise but just kept failing to meet that promise for me.